She Who Works in Vegas gets to Cum too

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

It can be said that both Will AND Willow got lucky....

Staring at this perfect ass perched in front of me, I asked myself "Do I really want to stick my tongue in it?" Not actually, but the curiosity of feeling such a tight ass on my face was enough for me to give it a slight bit of considaration.

Willow positioned herself on the bed as I had asked. I knelt by the edge of the bed and rubbed my hands gently across her buttocks. Skin as smooth as velvet, soft to the touch and with an underlying firmness that was obviously from working out. Dancing perhaps?

I leaned forward, spread her buttocks with my hands and kissed the edge of her anal crevice. That sounded better to me than kissing her ass crack. The intoxication of having my face in a heretofore taboo place drove me onward. Timidly at first I ran my tongue up across her tight brown sphincter. The sensation gave me an immediate burst of courage, and I licked again and again, both surprised and pleased that there was no unpleasant part of it.

The more I licked, the more I felt her easing back against my face, which was happily buried in her bottom. Evidently the feeling of doing it surprised and pleased her as well.

"Oohhh, that's kind of a turn on," she said softly. "I've never had anybody lick me there."

"Do you want me to stop?" I asked, taking a breather.

"No, just keep licking it; it feels really good."

So I complied but let my hands slip up under her body to play with her breasts again. She seemed to like that as well as she rocked her body slightly back and forth against my face. 

"Will you stick your tongue in there?" she asked. "I think I'd like to see how that feels."

"Nope, I changed my mind," I answered. I leaned back and slapped her smartly on the ass. 

"Hey! Why did you do that?" she asked.

"I am ready for something else." I went into the bathroom and rinsed off my face.

"Don't use my toothbrush, by the way," she announced from the bed.

So naturally I looked around, found her toothbrush and toothpaste and used them both to freshen up my mouth.

"You didn't use my toothbrush, did you?"

"Nope, used my finger with some toothpaste on it."

I moved us onto the bed in a 69 position and she seemed eager to do so. I wanted her to be horny enough so that she would be enthusiastic if she really did have an orgasm. By denying her the ultimate pleasure earlier, I thought by now she might be ready.

As she settled her weight onto my body and moved her legs in position, just smelling that sweet candle/flower scent and remembering the sweet taste of her gave me an immediate erection. 

"I've got lots of time left, so take it slow," I warned.

I wallowed in her wet flesh, savoring the feel of her thighs caressing my face, and the taste of her flooding my mouth. I probed with my tongue, deeply but slowly, then licked her clit gently. I alternated probing and licking to drive her into a frenzy. She didn't last as long as I had anticipated. She doubled her efforts to suck me off, squeezing my ballsac, stroking my shaft and slurping on the head of my cock. Life is good.

It was the longest lasting orgasm I have ever had. I don't think I actually shot into her mouth; it felt more like it just poured out of me. Her mouth and fist never stopped working as she tried to grind her sex into my face. If she had done that to begin with, I could not have lasted five minutes.

She either had a great orgasm or decided to fake one, because her legs squeezed my head, and she pumped her hips up and down and moaned like she meant it. She finally abandoned my cock and lay her head on my leg, moaning, "Shit...shit...oh shit!" I was hoping that her orgasm was genuine and that her comment was good.

When she calmed down and rolled off me, (and I didn't rush her), she was smiling and I was pleased.

"That was fucking incredible," she sighed.

"However good it was for you - it was doubly satisfactory for me.And speaking of fucking..." I said.

She looked at me like I was too stupid to remember my own name. "What? You just came and that's twice since we got here. Isn't that pretty much your limit? I mean, for a guy your age?" 

"I still have about 45 minutes of the three hour limit you allowed, and guys my age have a fantasy about fucking a hot girl like you, so you can give me about twenty minutes to rest or you can keep sucking on my cock until you're ready to ride it."

"What if you don't come when the time is up?" 

"Then it will still have been the best fuck of my life."

She smiled, took my hand and led me to the sofa in the living room. "I'll give you as long as you need because when I ride you, I want to feel it when you come."

And she did.

Life is good.


Submitted: June 29, 2022

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A little more dialogue here. Good description and detail. I'm not on the edge of my seat. I don't know these people - besides, who ever heard of a Vegas prostitute that has never been rimmed before? She acts like it's a new concept. The irony about Willow's toothbrush is that this Vegas high roller was probably better off with his tongue up her ass than sharing her oral with the last 20 clients. Thought he was smart, didn't he?

The basis of this (it's minor novelty) is a wager about sexual performance. Vegas is all about betting, so the setting is appropriate. I'm left rather empty, though. There needs to be more twists and turns, more Vegas lighting and extravaganza. Or, you could explore the dregs beneath the sparkle. Give me some depth.

Sat, July 23rd, 2022 8:41pm


Hmmm...a thoughtful challenge. However, the idea of a Vegas experience has since left the building. Exploring the background or details of the high rolling hookers would be as boring as describing the dice as a block of fly shit on paper, six sides.

Not having experience in rimming given or received, I hesitated to elaborate on something that would surely come off as silly or stupid. As you earlier related, everybody has either done everything, seen it or read about it and there are limited ways to describe sex acts. So, what separates a story with sex from a good story with good sex? Different things appeal to different people.

Please enlighten me, O priestess of porn - you seem to have the skill to write anything powerfully, especially your poetry.

Sat, July 23rd, 2022 7:06pm


I'm not that enlightening, sweetheart. I've seen some professionally presented sex scenes that were basically all narrative which were really hot, but I'm telling you that it's hard to do without dialogue. The most important thing that women look for in their literary smut is context, the series of events and the personalities involved along with the setting. Character development is huge. Billionaire eccentrics who fly with their girlfriends to other countries for dinner is getting a little previous. I still see a lot of that on writing sites along with shifters and werewolves, but I'm all alpha saturated. I stress imagination and freshness.

Sun, July 24th, 2022 3:55am


I agree, and I wish I had the inspirations and imagination to produce something really outstanding that would satisfy the majority of readers, even those who just read out of curiosity.

Sun, July 24th, 2022 11:05am


Actually, if you take some time to read really good literature an hour or so per day, (even longer if you have the time), you'll be surprised at the ideas that pop in your head. The most legitimate thing any English teacher ever told me was, "You can't write in a vacuum."

Sun, July 24th, 2022 8:27pm


And vacuuming in a closet is limited as well, lol. Gotcha. Bear with me; one of these days I will produce something that meets the overall readers' appetites.

Sun, July 24th, 2022 5:42pm

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