He Who Comes TO Vegas, Cums In Vegas, Finally

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Read the first part - who really won the bet?

As we stood there naked, toe to toe, she asked, "I'm ready; what's next?"

"I want you to try to get me hard just by kissing me," I said. A healthy coating of colorless lip gloss made her lips appear larger than they were. I also imagined that it might serve as a special lubricant.

Her lips were soft and sticky when she brushed them across my lips. She tasted good. She kissed me softly three times, looked down and was surprised (as was I) that there was no result below. Then, determined, she stood on her tip toes, slipped her arms around my neck, pressed her body against mine and kissed me hard, pressing her lips into mine with a purpose.

And it worked. My erection awakened and arose, sliding in between her slightly parted thighs. She grinned with approval. "Now, THAT'S more like it!" she said. 

I sat down on the nearest soft chair and motioned her in front of me. I reached for her breasts and she leaned over with her hands on my shoulders. I palmed her soft breasts, rubbed my thumbs over her tiny exquisite nipples. She allowed it with no response until I pressed my open mouth into her flesh. She sucked in her breath as I slid my tongue across that hard pebble, back and forth. I leaned back, looked up at her, and she twisted her body slightly, offering me the other breast. And I thought to myself, "Now THAT'S more like it!" I treated myself and her other breast to similar attention.

I slid down, sitting on the floor in front of her. She sensed what was next, spread her legs and stepped closer to me. I cupped her amazingly tight buttocks in my hands and pulled her slowly to me. Closing my eyes, I rubbed my nose through her blond pubic hair. I could smell that sweet candle/flower scent coming from the insides of her thighs. It was more tha appealing, it was alluring, and she knew it.

I dipped my head down to kiss the inside of her thigh and she lifted her leg, putting her foot on the chair behind my head, allowing me perfect access to her thighs. Smart girl. I kissed the insides of both thighs for as long as i could resist doing anything further.

When I tentively ran my tongue up the ouside of her slit, she pressed against my tongue, inviting it inside. When my tongue reached for her core, I was rewarded with the sweetness that only an aroused woman can produce. I  licked and probed her for a long time, enjoying the sweet fragrance from her thighs and the warm taste of her. I heard a deep appreciative sigh. (Was that her, or me?)

When I eventually let my tongue pay attention to her clitoris, she slipped her hands into my hair. I swirled my tongue around her tight little pearl, sucking gently. Then I heard the moan I was waiting for. Whether it was genuine or pretended, it sounded the same. I pushed her leg away from my face, gently pushed her away from me and stood up. 

She dropped a hand and began rubbing herself, giving me a look of total disbelief.

"What's the matter" Why did you stop?" she asked.

"I want you to sit where I was so I can fuck your mouth."

"But don't you want to fuck - I'll let you," she asked.

"Nope I just want to come in your mouth - do you swallow?"

She looked at me like I had just covered up a hidden treasure. But she sat down, leaning against the chair.

"You can come but I won't swallow it," she said. I noticed that she still had a hand between her legs.

"I want you to keep playing with yourself, but don't come," I said as I stepped up close to her.

She said, "You're weird; I was ready for you to..." and that's when I stuck my cock in her mouth. It was just something I needed to do. She had done this before. Her eyes met mine and stayed locked on while I slowly fucked her mouth. She was still using one hand to pleasure herself but she used the other one to gently fondle my balls. She had obviously done this many times before. Her mouth accepted my trusts and I paced myself. When I finally did shoot my load, she never blinked. My trusts remained the same, slowly going in and out of those shiny lips. Ejaculate dribbled from the corners of her mouth over her chin and onto her chest. 

When I stepped away, still breathing hard, she spit into her hand, then got up and went to the bathroom. I went to the refrigerator for some ice and fixed a glass of water. When she returned I really did want to fuck her. Her lips were still shiny and so were the insides of her thighs. Damn! She looked sexy and ready.

But I sat on the sofa, and invited her to join me. We talked for a while as I asked her how long she had lived there, where she was from, etc. just passing some time. She was getting annoyed, so I changed the game. 

"Get on the edge of the bed on your hands and knees with your ass in the air," I said.

"I don't take it up the ass," she said defiantly.

"Never had a cock in that perfect ass?" 

"Never and won't."

"What about a nice vibrator or dildo?"




"What about a tongue?"

She looked at me incredulously. "You want to put your tongue in my ass?"

"Probably, but first I want to kiss and lick your asshole."

"Why? It's just an asshole."

"Ah, yes, but such a perfect ass, it deserves some appreciation."

"Fine, but I'm not kissing you afterwards."

"Won't be necessary."

She got in position on the bed, that perfect ass perched in the air, those sexy legs parted slighly so I could see those wet thighs.

Life is good.



Submitted: June 28, 2022

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So, while you do exhibit some dialogue in areas, this chapter is narrative heavy, and the character development suffers accordingly. I should mention that not every story needs or accentuates character development, depending on the level of action.

However, when you're writing erotica, the first rule of thumb is to understand that every act of sex has already been elaborated a thousand times over by hundreds of other authors . It's very hard to describe strictly sex and keep a well read audience awake. Context is key, and dialogue is king. If your reader can relate to your characters, they become interested in them, and that drives your story. Vegas sex and prostitutes are as novel as dirt. So, impress me with something I'm not expecting.

Sat, July 23rd, 2022 8:24pm


Nuff said and "ouch". I regretted continuing the story but felt for my own peace of mind I had to and it shows, doesn't it?

Well, then I will put more thought into the next story, when an inspiration finally comes along.

Sat, July 23rd, 2022 6:59pm


Sorry babe...you know I love ya!
Let me warn you, though - if you're going to private message me for a review, you better get ready. On that note, I'm never blatantly honest unless I feel like we know each other adequately.

Sun, July 24th, 2022 3:59am


Your public review ns sufficient to let me know where I stand, piece by piece and I do appreciate comments, however negative they may be. I try to use comments and suggestions, even complaints as a tool to retry for something better. I don't always succeed, but I do try.

Sun, July 24th, 2022 11:07am

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