This is a very dark and graphic story.
Please do not read if you are triggered by SA, or abuse.
English is not my first language so pardon my spelling and grammar.
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I was about to start reading when I read reader's comment mentioning "razor" and "kill". A skim-read at chapter 1 confirmed my fear. This writing is not for the faint hearted indeed.
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I agree, that's pretty dark stuff. From an aesthetic perspective, I'd suggest breaking up some of these really long paragraphs into smaller ones. It's easier to read and more appealing to the eye.
Sat, June 18th, 2022 11:07pmJames is a brutal guy who seems quite out of his mind, but you do provide some method to the madness when he exemplifies tenderness following the razor injury. It's the way abusive people learn to control their victims, mixing up the physical violence and damage with reparation and apology. This guy isn't apologizing for anything, but he is manipulative. He's a self-admitted stalker who has taken his game to the next level. It would be interesting to know how many women he has forced through this process, and whether his father is aware. Generally, you get into a situation like this and you don't expect to get out alive. Eventually, he's got to kill you.