Consumed by darkness

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

**Trigger warning on every chapter!**

This is a very dark and graphic story.
Please do not read if you are triggered by SA, or abuse.

English is not my first language so pardon my spelling and grammar.

Table of Contents

Chapter 1

  "Bye all! See you in two days!" I said as I waved my co workers goodbye. Finally weekend. I sighed.  I walked to mr... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

    I closed my eyes and I shut off my thoughts while James cleaned me. The shampoo smelled amazing.&n... Read Chapter

Chapter 3

Does your dad know Im here?" I asked, finally speaking to him after we ate in silence. I wanted to know, I couldn't imagine him being o... Read Chapter

Chapter 4

Lauren gave me a pitiful look and told me she had leave again. "Please don't go." I said, not wanting to be alone. "Sorry, I can't... Read Chapter

Chapter 5

My eyes shot open. I frantically looked around me, I was back in James his bedroom. I looked at the other side of the bed, James w... Read Chapter

Chapter 6

  "What took you so long? What were you doing there?" James asked, he sounded irritated. "I-I.. was just walking through the f... Read Chapter

Chapter 7

He looked at me up and down and gave his son a dirty smile. "Look at that! I knew she would be perfect." James nodded in agreement and th... Read Chapter

Chapter 8

After hours of driving we finally got to the hotel. It was expensive looking. A guy came to park James his car and another took our suitc... Read Chapter

Chapter 9

  I slowly rubbed my eyes while waking up. I turned my head to see if James was there. He wasn't next to me anymore. I assumed... Read Chapter

Chapter 10

Back inside the bedroom he put me on the bed. I whimpered, feeling really sore. He went inside of the bathroom and I heard him go ... Read Chapter

Chapter 11

"No! No no no!" I cried hysterically, there was so much blood pooling around her lifeless body. I went to crouch down to her but Silas ... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments


I agree, that's pretty dark stuff. From an aesthetic perspective, I'd suggest breaking up some of these really long paragraphs into smaller ones. It's easier to read and more appealing to the eye.

James is a brutal guy who seems quite out of his mind, but you do provide some method to the madness when he exemplifies tenderness following the razor injury. It's the way abusive people learn to control their victims, mixing up the physical violence and damage with reparation and apology. This guy isn't apologizing for anything, but he is manipulative. He's a self-admitted stalker who has taken his game to the next level. It would be interesting to know how many women he has forced through this process, and whether his father is aware. Generally, you get into a situation like this and you don't expect to get out alive. Eventually, he's got to kill you.

Sat, June 18th, 2022 11:07pm


I was about to start reading when I read reader's comment mentioning "razor" and "kill". A skim-read at chapter 1 confirmed my fear. This writing is not for the faint hearted indeed.

Mon, February 6th, 2023 4:38am

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