Consumed by darkness

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Adult Romance  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

TRIGGER WARNING ON EVERY CHAPTER!

This is a very dark and graphic story.
Please do not read if you are triggered by SA, or abuse.
Also I did my very best but english is not my first language so pardon my spelling and grammar!


I didn't dare to look at him. "Come here." He said with a low voice. I was terrified. I took another few steps back and hit the edge of the bed. I looked at him like a deer in headlights. My heart pounding in my chest.

Table of Contents

Chapter 1

  "Bye all! See you in two days!" I said as I waved my co workers goodbye. Finally weekend. I sighed.  I walked to mr. ... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

    I closed my eyes and I shut off my thoughts while James cleaned me up. The shampoo smelled amazing a... Read Chapter

Chapter 3

Does your dad know Im here?" I asked, finally speaking to him after we ate in silence. I wanted to know, I couldn't imagine him being oka... Read Chapter

Chapter 4

Lauren gave me a pitiful look and said she had leave again. "Please don't go." I whined, not wanting to be alone. "Sorry, I can't stay." ... Read Chapter

Chapter 5

My eyes shot open. I frantically looked around me, I was back in James his bedroom. I looked at the other side of the bed, James was... Read Chapter

Chapter 6

  "What took you so long? What were you doing there?" James asked, he sounded irritated. "I-I.. was just walking through the flo... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

DampKitten

I agree, that's pretty dark stuff. From an aesthetic perspective, I'd suggest breaking up some of these really long paragraphs into smaller ones. It's easier to read and more appealing to the eye.

James is a brutal guy who seems quite out of his mind, but you do provide some method to the madness when he exemplifies tenderness following the razor injury. It's the way abusive people learn to control their victims, mixing up the physical violence and damage with reparation and apology. This guy isn't apologizing for anything, but he is manipulative. He's a self-admitted stalker who has taken his game to the next level. It would be interesting to know how many women he has forced through this process, and whether his father is aware. Generally, you get into a situation like this and you don't expect to get out alive. Eventually, he's got to kill you.

Sat, June 18th, 2022 11:07pm

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