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"Some lovely imagery there, nice symbolism. Very poignant. "
A PRAYER FOR BETSY
Winter came too quickly upon us
and marred with sadness,
the porcelain faces of our children.
Allow us, then, Betsy, to better sense
the majesty that is yours with God,
to reconcile our loss
and the desperation of our souls.
We poor are yet earth-bound,
and not ascended to the highest of Kingdoms.
Our sun is a hot marble,
distanced beyond the whisper of our prayers.
Yet, the light of your smile was left to us,
by which we are guided to the isles of hope.
Submitted: June 05, 2022
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DampKitten
Some lovely imagery there, nice symbolism. Very poignant.
Sun, June 5th, 2022 7:59pmAuthor
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Hats off to you DampKitten! You have powerful advice.
Mon, June 6th, 2022 9:31am