The Illusion

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Just a vision...

A dream recently.....

I was playing golf, enjoying a beautiful day. One of my tee shots veered toward a stream nearby and I ventured over to find the ball. While peering through the leafy banks I heard a soft voice calling me. As I looked around, I saw a vision, a beautiful woman, naked and floating in a colorless translucent mist. She motioned for me to join her.

I approached her in the shadows under a large oak tree and she reached for me. I didn't actually feel her touch but suddenly felt enveloped by her essence. I closed my eyes and felt a sense of calmness, the warm breeze in the shadows making my skin tingle in her presence. 

Without any indication of physical arousal, I felt a physical release similar to an orgasm, but it came from my entire body, but as quiet and gentle as a leaf falling to the ground. There was no intensity, no exhiliaration, only a soft, calm release as if I were relieved of physical and emotional pressure.

When I opened my eyes, she was gone. I returned to my golf cart and noticed the golf ball lying under it. I continued with my game with an unexplained feeling of satisfaction. 

 

 


Submitted: June 01, 2022

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samnash

I never played golf… now I’m definitely going to

Wed, June 1st, 2022 8:43pm

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LOL - you sound almost as easy to be influenced as I am, Mr. Nash. But thanks for reading my friend.

Wed, June 1st, 2022 4:59pm

Nite-Owl

a golf fairy, or goddess come to perfect your game. perhaps she will return just before a tournament to bring you good luck.

Wed, June 1st, 2022 10:15pm

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When we golfers lose a golf ball (by our own mistake) we like to blame the golf Gods. Now, a golf Goddess might be someone to whom we might bow, sneak a peak under her robe and politely ask if we might use our driver to deliver her some golf delights of her own. (You can see how readily evil we golfers can be, irreverent almost.)
Thanks so much for reading my piece and sending your sweet comments.
Will

Wed, June 1st, 2022 5:02pm

francine mayes

There's a golf course with a stream near me. After reading this I feel like I should head over there and go look for that goddess!

Fri, June 3rd, 2022 6:54am

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If you do, I hope you have a similar experience and good luck! (Thanks for reading!)

Fri, June 3rd, 2022 5:12am

Amy F. Turner

Just nothing...this illusion was thoughtful and beautifully relayed, Will. It goes to prove that some experiences go beyond what is physical. Seduction of the mind can be equally sexy as you have illustrated here. :)

Sat, June 4th, 2022 8:34am

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Thank you, dear lady for your kind words.

Sat, June 4th, 2022 5:19am

DampKitten

Well, you're welcome for all that, Will...
and if you had sniffed that ball when you picked it up from underneath your cart, I think you'd have figured out exactly where it landed.

Sun, June 5th, 2022 3:30pm

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That's right - who knows? It didn't seem to be there when I was driving around looking for it.

Sun, June 5th, 2022 9:27am

Amber Libra

It is interesting learning about men's fantasies and what goes on in their imaginations. I like the dream-like quality of the story.

Thu, February 16th, 2023 8:25pm

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Thank you. This varies considerably from anything else I've written, which for the most part has always been about the same thing. Sometimes I enjoy writing about fantasies and fetishes, hoping someone might enjoy it, but once in a while something like this will just drift into my mind, not quite sexual but, ethereal.

Thu, February 16th, 2023 12:35pm

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