Mature woman

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


She has seen her life

unfold and  then fold,

she has seen men

come, fuck and go,

has seen wrinkles 

exceed their stay,,

no cream or lotion

will keep them away,

she has made love

under a silver moon,

fucked under sunshine,

made no difference

at the story´s end

she has often dated 

nice older men,

she has also dated

strong younger men,

she has shed her tears,

she has also laughed,,

she has been deceived,

has been loved as well,

she has been around

she has done it all,

she´ll never complain

and she will never tell.

 

April 26the,2022.


Submitted: April 26, 2022

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samnash

Wow.. you just wrote a whole book with this poem. This the beauty of poetry… and you’re one of the great..

Thu, April 28th, 2022 4:12am

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Wow...for once,I don´t know what to say...Thank you so much! Love,Lizzie.

Thu, April 28th, 2022 8:32am

Spyguy

A succinct and well described synopsis of a life lived to the fullest by an author who has the capacity to paint a word picture well!!!

Fri, April 29th, 2022 6:39pm

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Thank you so much! Love, LIzzie.

Fri, April 29th, 2022 3:20pm

Amy F. Turner

This piece of refinery reminds me of a song. It is one that we would all hope to sing of a life well lived without regret with a satisfying end. Beautiful.

Sun, May 1st, 2022 12:52pm

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Thank you so much, Amy! Love, Lizzie,

Sun, May 1st, 2022 1:22pm

willnorman

Ah, but she just did.......(very thoughtful piece).

Tue, May 31st, 2022 2:59pm

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Complain or tell?
Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Lizzie.

Tue, May 31st, 2022 8:51am

willnorman

i just loved the line about wrinkles that exceeded their stay - isn't that true for all of us? Lovely poem that tells such a sweet story, a recap, although it could be if a young woman's life just as well as a mature woman's experiences.

And yes, we've all been deceived at one time or another and some of us would admit to deceiving at one time or another for whatever reason seem warranted at the time.

Thu, July 21st, 2022 1:23am

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I love your reviews! Thank you so much. Lizzie,

Wed, July 20th, 2022 8:09pm

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