She has seen her life
unfold and then fold,
she has seen men
come, fuck and go,
has seen wrinkles
exceed their stay,,
no cream or lotion
will keep them away,
she has made love
under a silver moon,
fucked under sunshine,
made no difference
at the story´s end
she has often dated
nice older men,
she has also dated
strong younger men,
she has shed her tears,
she has also laughed,,
she has been deceived,
has been loved as well,
she has been around
she has done it all,
she´ll never complain
and she will never tell.
April 26the,2022.
Submitted: April 26, 2022
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A succinct and well described synopsis of a life lived to the fullest by an author who has the capacity to paint a word picture well!!!
Fri, April 29th, 2022 6:39pm
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Thank you so much! Love, LIzzie.
Fri, April 29th, 2022 3:20pm
This piece of refinery reminds me of a song. It is one that we would all hope to sing of a life well lived without regret with a satisfying end. Beautiful.
Sun, May 1st, 2022 12:52pm
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Thank you so much, Amy! Love, Lizzie,
Sun, May 1st, 2022 1:22pm
Ah, but she just did.......(very thoughtful piece).
Tue, May 31st, 2022 2:59pm
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Complain or tell?
Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Lizzie.
i just loved the line about wrinkles that exceeded their stay - isn't that true for all of us? Lovely poem that tells such a sweet story, a recap, although it could be if a young woman's life just as well as a mature woman's experiences.
And yes, we've all been deceived at one time or another and some of us would admit to deceiving at one time or another for whatever reason seem warranted at the time.
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I love your reviews! Thank you so much. Lizzie,
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Wow.. you just wrote a whole book with this poem. This the beauty of poetry… and you’re one of the great..
Thu, April 28th, 2022 4:12amAuthor
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Wow...for once,I don´t know what to say...Thank you so much! Love,Lizzie.
Thu, April 28th, 2022 8:32am