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"Oh wow, you're picking up steam. I found the barnyard curiously amusing, Merlin covered in mud and making every accommodating effort. For all his selfishness (as Penelope dictates), he seems remarkably selfless outside of his precious contract.
Mana is the sustenance from Heavan. I'm seeing a lot of symbolism in your piece. So many things are well thought out, meticulously described, and perfectly intertwined. This is one of the most impressive stories I've ever read here.
Meanwhile, Merlin is ashen and desperately ill. He has made it emphatically clear what he needs. The panacea potion isn't perfected yet. It's got to be pussy."
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Mateo is evidently a troll. Glad she got away from him. It's a happy beginning. :)
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Oh my God, this is gorgeous. What are you doing here? You should be plastering best sellers on the walls of Barnes & Noble.
Sun, July 24th, 2022 1:21amThere's not the first error or smudge in this piece. It's Mona Lisa. I love the vernacular. I'm locked in from the start, and this is by the book character development right down to the physical flaw of your protagonist. We have two main characters thus far, and both are exceptionally interesting. The situation is compelling. The pace and the length of the chapter are excellent. It would take me ten times round to spit and polish a chapter this shiny.
This is superb. And I love the story so far...
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Thank you so much for your kind words, DK! They are much appreciated. I always enjoy reading your comments.
Wed, July 27th, 2022 12:48pm