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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

Biblical Humor

Eve was framed.
Poor old Eve was framed,
Beseeching her good name.
For in the apple biting,
It seems a little slighting
And Adams part in it,
Just doesn't seem legit.
It probably was his coaxing,
That led to Eveies Hoaxing.
A scapegoat from the start,
Has been the womans part, 
Her curse is undeserved,
From Adam it was served,
Temptation from the start,
An arrow through her heart.
But still the story lingers,
The apple in her fingers,
Brought the fall of Adam,
Because of his own madam. 
I hope the truth will come,
That he was guilty some,
To hang it all on Eve,
Seems to just deceive. 
So free our mother there,
In the garden where,
Adam put the blame,
On his only flame.

Submitted: January 09, 2022

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Wonder Woman

SO Fun! I'm glad we did this! Although yours is witty and elegant!
Mine is a bit more raunchy and crude!
Great job Retta!
Eve WAS Framed!

Sun, January 9th, 2022 11:33pm


Oh dont say that! I Loved "Frosty the Crackhead!"
Glad you liked my silly poem Sweet Amy!
Hope to see you when this Virus shite is over!
Miss you girl!

Sun, January 9th, 2022 10:50pm


Well, I have to admit - when a pretty snake starts talking to me about biting his apples, I'm gonna drop my fig leaf.

Mon, January 10th, 2022 3:36am


You Naughty kitty!

Sun, January 9th, 2022 10:41pm

Dick Wood

Now for a man's point of view. I can already hear the booing. It was a snake that tempted Eve into eating the apple. Adam was just a victim of circumstance. God threw them both out. Still...liked the poem.

Mon, January 10th, 2022 11:57pm


Your so right Dick, I stand corrected...wanna spank me?

Mon, January 10th, 2022 6:27pm


If that snake found a way to wiggle in a hole, tickling softly her inner mole, then poor Eve would have to be quite innocent of biting Adam's apple, 100%!
Then knowing how good that felt, they must have chose, to put on those figs leaves, to cover up those...

Tue, January 11th, 2022 7:30am


Thats right SG!

Tue, January 11th, 2022 5:01am


That's an interesting point of view, but then, how did they get there along with the apple and the snake?

Mon, May 30th, 2022 3:36pm

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