Submitted: October 21, 2021
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Your expressions are tightly packed with meaning, sending us to the point of extremes of nonchalance and longing, a titter-totter of inequity that is dizzying and so very true in life when the couple does not experience the same level of engagement emotionally. Beautifully relayed, as always.
Sat, October 23rd, 2021 12:50pmVery sad, but finely crafted! I see the pain!
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DampKitten
Beautifully descriptive. I love the imagery.
Fri, October 22nd, 2021 3:44am"The piercing longing of desire"
"veiled corners of memory"
"despair of boredom"
Fabulous word flow and wonderfully imaginative
Still, very poignant.
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Thank you for your words, Damp Kitten. Love,Lizzie.
Fri, October 22nd, 2021 6:38am