Later that night, everyone was found scattered around the forest unconscious, and one was dead.
No one has any memory of what happened that night except Leah who has never told anyone.
Five years later and with four weeks left to go for Halloween Leah returns to the devil’s ditch on her own.
Why hasn’t Leah told anyone she remembers what happened on Halloween night five years ago?
Why has she returned to the devil’s ditch and what has she planned for this coming Halloween?
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Grey clouds drifted across the dark sky; the waning crescent moon gave little light for anyone to see where
they were walking. Marcus g... Read Chapter
Leah’s eyes slowly opened; she blinked several times to focus on her surroundings but couldn’t see a thing. The
room she was in was... Read Chapter
DampKitten
So, I've read this before - and this is a fantastic time to bring this story back. I'd say you've been tweaking it a bit because the delivery is very smooth and well presented. There's a lot going on here for a first chapter. The final two paragraphs "five years later" are super sexy. I love good horror, and this is a great story. Your first chapter catches the reader's attention perfectly and really drags them into this. This is a great delivery!
Wed, October 13th, 2021 4:32amAuthor
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Thank you, I've been editing this for a while now. I started this 2 years ago and never had an ending. Now I've finally come up with the ending I'm happy with lol. :)
Wed, October 13th, 2021 4:35am