Grey Area

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group


Love is a work of art.

A portrait.

A canvas.

A brush in skilled hands.

Eager strokes.

A picture with no color.

Passion.

Obscure fun.

Deception.

Love is hate.

Thin Lines.

A grey area.

The point of no return.

A con artist.

Illustration.

A play on words.

Some rhyme, some don't.

A poets flow.

A marching band.

A flirtatious glance.

Trails left behind.

Seducing those that yearn.

Captivating those that don’t.

Redemption.

Absolution.

Love is... letting go.


Submitted: October 01, 2021

© Copyright 2022 Natalia Rondon. All rights reserved.

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DampKitten

Magnificently unique. I love the brevity and the concentration on single words and ideas as both analogy and descriptive. The last line is the punch, and it's fantastic. I get your need for emphasis by saying "love is" before "letting go". For me, I think additional spacing followed by "letting go" perhaps in italics will also accomplish that, but that's over thinking.

Fourth line....I think you mean 'a brush in skilled hands'
Love the title...perfect

Fri, October 1st, 2021 3:53am

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Noted, thank you.

Thu, October 7th, 2021 6:36am

Spyguy

Though I’m not certain I agree with every line I still appreciate the majestic weave of the fabric of your expression here! Very powerful piece with depth of message!

Fri, October 1st, 2021 6:41pm

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Thanks ????

Mon, October 4th, 2021 10:44am

VanillaEssence

In a fabulous poetic way I think that you are saying something like "Love IS What It IS".

Fri, October 1st, 2021 11:26pm

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Love is everything around us. The good the bad, the little unnoticed things that compose a greater thing. Everything left unsaid.

Mon, October 4th, 2021 5:28am

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