Love is a work of art.
A portrait.
A canvas.
A brush in skilled hands.
Eager strokes.
A picture with no color.
Passion.
Obscure fun.
Deception.
Love is hate.
Thin Lines.
A grey area.
The point of no return.
A con artist.
Illustration.
A play on words.
Some rhyme, some don't.
A poets flow.
A marching band.
A flirtatious glance.
Trails left behind.
Seducing those that yearn.
Captivating those that don’t.
Redemption.
Absolution.
Love is... letting go.
Submitted: October 01, 2021
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Though I’m not certain I agree with every line I still appreciate the majestic weave of the fabric of your expression here! Very powerful piece with depth of message!
Fri, October 1st, 2021 6:41pm
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Thanks ????
Mon, October 4th, 2021 10:44am
In a fabulous poetic way I think that you are saying something like "Love IS What It IS".
Fri, October 1st, 2021 11:26pm
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Love is everything around us. The good the bad, the little unnoticed things that compose a greater thing. Everything left unsaid.
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DampKitten
Magnificently unique. I love the brevity and the concentration on single words and ideas as both analogy and descriptive. The last line is the punch, and it's fantastic. I get your need for emphasis by saying "love is" before "letting go". For me, I think additional spacing followed by "letting go" perhaps in italics will also accomplish that, but that's over thinking.
Fri, October 1st, 2021 3:53amFourth line....I think you mean 'a brush in skilled hands'
Love the title...perfect
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Noted, thank you.
Thu, October 7th, 2021 6:36am