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Poem / Exhibitionist and Voyeur
Poem / Adult Romance
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DampKitten
I'm a big fan of abbreviated poetry such as this. Your primary poetic element here is metaphor, the most obvious analogy being yourself to a storm and the person you address to the sea, but there's also an analogy between the two of you as well reflected in the impact from one to the other. I'm particularly fond of the emphasis on 'mystery' - the unknown beyond the depths of the deep.
Fri, September 3rd, 2021 3:22pmAuthor
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Thank you!
Fri, September 3rd, 2021 7:34pm