Short fleshy man with flushed cheeks
and
chubby hands,
dirt under your nails.
Gazing into your pupils
I can see the very part of myself
I hate
Glaring back at me
Bringing the distinction into sharp clear focus
The outlines are usually blurred
Ancient me, eternal me,
Or the rotting cage that keeps me buried
in reality
You can't see the truth through the veil of
Darkness
Sure footed,
never losing sight of the lit path laid before me.
Feeling my wings scratching at the bloody lining of this walking mausoleum.
Built of flesh and bone.
Worn and torn from the struggle to keep me in
wearing thin
Submitted: August 14, 2021
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Love this! It's very descriptive. Free verse is definitely your forte
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DampKitten
You've laid out the anatomy of this piece the way free verse is meant to be presented. The imagery is fantastic as are the metaphors. You are a prison to your soul.
Wed, August 18th, 2021 3:10amAuthor
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Thank you so much!!! I'm not sure what I m doing but I'm so so glad it well precieved by you!! Thanks very much for your feedback!
Wed, August 18th, 2021 10:04am