chemistry

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my self love mantra

I got the elements

Like carbon

I matter

Under pressure

I shine

Diamonds forever

So is

My light

Submitted: August 09, 2021

Poetry positivity

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I'm a big fan of abbreviated poetry. Love the word play here, the double entendre of pressure and matter. Smart...

Tue, August 10th, 2021 1:00am

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Thanks! I really appreciate your comments! I love double meanings. ????

Mon, August 9th, 2021 7:15pm

I love that it's simple and to the point, but deep at the same time.

Wed, August 11th, 2021 10:56pm

Well written, I’m smitten!

Fri, August 13th, 2021 7:42am

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Thanks spyguy!! I really appreciate the love.

Fri, August 13th, 2021 9:27am

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