Note to my Lesbian Lover

Short Story by: DampKitten

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Featured Review on this writing by samnash

"You fuse poetry in prose… that was definitely a head turner. I bow to the goddess of the erotic word"

From a second story apartment...

I'm so totally taken by your visions and affection...

I love the sound of rain on a tin roof, thunderstorms in the afternoon, and the quaking torrential atmosphere of inclement weather. I love the rolling black clouds and the flashes across the sky. I love being in your arms when the heavens are angry, feeling your protection circling around me, a blanket of bare skin.

I love to be naked with you, sweaty and uncovered, open to the melting humidity, a solitary window, a quiet breeze, footsteps on the sidewalk below us. They, the pedestrians, have no idea we are kissing in the dimly lit room just two stories above. Across the way, there is a couple making love on a mattress, their curtains drawn aside in a brazen exhibition. We wave, the two of us together in unison, then kiss and commence our own demonstration.

They watch as I make you come, burying my face between your silky thighs. They can see you arch your back. They can almost hear you moan. When they observe how I rise up and kiss your lips, how you accept my tongue deep in your mouth, they can almost taste what I share with you. As I get on my knees and plant my pussy to the curves of your complexion, I show them the face you always see before I break into storm, before the thunder rocks the bed and the rain comes down in sheets. They see the naked body that clutches and quivers to the electricity of your mouth sucking on my clit. They see the lightening flash across my face as I cream on your cheeks and reach for the headboard to hold myself steady. They see the dark clouds dissipate from my eyes, the beads of wetness dripping down my breasts, your fingers kneading the flesh of my ass.

They see and they know, unlike sidewalk pedestrians, the heat that we bring to summer...you and me in a room, sweltering in front of an open window.

Submitted: July 25, 2021

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Daverse

I love it! You have a gift for making things very graphic and very exciting!

Sun, July 25th, 2021 10:33pm

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Thank you so much! I've been wanting to get you excited! Which brings me to another gift....

Mon, July 26th, 2021 5:36pm

samnash

You fuse poetry in prose… that was definitely a head turner. I bow to the goddess of the erotic word

Mon, July 26th, 2021 2:42am

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You don't know how long I've been trying to get you on your knees, Sam. Could you please loosen this button...

Mon, July 26th, 2021 5:35pm

VanillaEssence

DK this kind of girl on girl superfucking is just toooo good to be confined to a second floor apartment somewhere.
Take it outside to an alley next door or down the street and let some lucky unsuspecting pedestrians walking by have an unexpected "treat" to "make their day".

Mon, July 26th, 2021 4:54am

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LOL...that's how lesbians end up in jail, Vanilla - which I'm sure is your secret motive. We end up in a movie like "Caged Heat" or "Orange is the New Black". Then you don't even have to leave your living room to watch.

Mon, July 26th, 2021 5:33pm

francine mayes

Short and so very very sweet. Takes me back to a time in London some years ago, although that was a first floor apartment!
Steamy prose. Love it.

Mon, July 26th, 2021 7:16am

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Thank you so much for checking this out, and I always love to hear reminiscence about personal experiences.

Mon, July 26th, 2021 5:29pm

bigsausage

Love it, beautiful imagery.

Mon, July 26th, 2021 6:01pm

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Thank you and thanks for reading, Ethan!

Mon, July 26th, 2021 5:26pm

Spyguy

How I wish I were the couple across the street witnessing your loving caressing & enjoying the exquisite view of your talents!

You make a guy wish to show you a stiff barber pole! (And give you a chance to lick the popsicle!!!)

Wed, July 28th, 2021 8:15pm

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Wouldn't you rather be in the room than across the street?
Thanks for your popsicle, Spy! You can show me you pole anytime...

Wed, July 28th, 2021 4:42pm

Spyguy

You would probably get it to drip!

Wed, July 28th, 2021 8:24pm

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Your pole?

Wed, July 28th, 2021 4:43pm

Spyguy

That polish popsicle sausage!!!

Fri, July 30th, 2021 9:16am

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I didn't know they had mermen in Poland!

Fri, July 30th, 2021 12:37pm

Matt Triewly

When I die I want to be reincarnated in a second story apartment...

And why do I think that Brazen Exhibition would be a great name for a website?

Sat, July 31st, 2021 2:36pm

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I haven't looked it up, so it may already exist!
We can go to the penthouse if you like...

Thanks for reading, Matt!

Sat, July 31st, 2021 7:07pm

Extinct

This is beautiful...

Thu, August 19th, 2021 4:57pm

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Thank you, girl!

Thu, August 19th, 2021 1:00pm

Extinct

I read it again and again and still it makes me dizzy everytime

Fri, August 20th, 2021 4:26am

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you make me happy...

Fri, August 20th, 2021 7:29am

Extinct

That's soothing...

Fri, August 20th, 2021 4:48pm

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You're gonna get me in trouble, aren't you?

Fri, August 20th, 2021 11:48am

Extinct

You like getting in trouble, dont you?

Sat, August 21st, 2021 6:29pm

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Oh, you know me well...

Sat, August 21st, 2021 12:16pm

Extinct

I love it everytime I read

Mon, March 7th, 2022 9:18pm

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As I love you...

Mon, March 7th, 2022 6:29pm

Extinct

And I, you...

Wed, March 9th, 2022 4:21pm

Hobby

Hot! Like heat rising up a volcanos centre!
So damn good!

Tue, February 7th, 2023 9:30pm

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Thank you, Hobby! I think I'm going to have to publish a letter to Hobby after all these comments on my stuff. You know what that means, don't you? Go open the window..

Tue, February 7th, 2023 8:11pm