The point of no return

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

There come's a time for us all when we are overcome and there is no turning back.

The moment approaches, something building inside

Once that corner is turned, there is nowhere to hide

 

The waiting is best, or is it worst, I don't know

But please keep on pounding, keep hold on that flow

 

I pull him in deeper, into my juicy dark trap

He responds with a firm but so gentle tap

 

Skin moulded to skin, his pole firm and full

He bites my left nipple, gives the other a pull

 

The moment approaches, I am ready to scream

My lover stops pounding, his face all a beam

 

Don't tease me my love, take me where I must go

Release me now, let my cum juices flow

 

The waves stop for a moment, then rise up once again

His pounding now heavy, both pleasure and pain

 

Soaked with desire, there's no holding back

I'm crazed with emotion, on the right track

 

He spasms, I scream, we are spent, I am done

That moment of ecstasy, together we come. 


Submitted: July 22, 2021

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VanillaEssence

nicely done.
dreams of the everyday housewife comes to mind.

Fri, July 23rd, 2021 2:42am

Author
Reply

Well I'm not sure this is in any way an everyday housewife!
But if you find one like this, let me know.
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.

Mon, August 2nd, 2021 10:20pm

DampKitten

Love that!
I thought the first line was intriguing, given the direction of the poem. It makes this liaison seem a bit taboo. Like most good poetry, the context is vague, and we fall rather immediately into the physical experience - leaving behind all measure of hesitation.

Sun, July 25th, 2021 10:15pm

Author
Reply

Thank you. I try to input the intimate experience from both sides into my writing, but its difficult within the confines of a poem. I appreciate your comments, always welcome and a great help.

Mon, July 26th, 2021 12:09am

Spyguy

This was fantastically done, tickles the imagination!

Wed, July 28th, 2021 8:05pm

Author
Reply

Thanks. Appreciate it.
Imagination is a wonderful thing for sure.

Thu, July 29th, 2021 12:48am

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