Deadeye Dick

Missink31

Luv it. And the picture as well, nice touch. Xxx

Trixie

Hmmm....Ethan is really digging a hole for himself. The likely hood of pregnancy is slim but still its possible, just barely.
Great writing, very imaginative. Nice drawing too!

DampKitten

You're a gifted writer - professional grade - to go along with your Grade A Sausage. (I'm sure that's what it rates - you have that certificate framed at the head of your bed, right?)

Love this story. The runaway girlfriend is a nice touch, establishing a foundation for your piece. Ethan is a high school hunk and Nickie is out of her league, but friends are friends. All this is contributing greatly to character development, particularly Ethan's. Your chapter is really well developed, and the subject matter is always of interest...the young boy falling for the MILF next door. Plus, this migraine scenario is imaginative and erotic as hell. As crazy as the final 'climactic' moment may seem, my suspension of disbelief easily accommodates the drama. Good writing.

Love your drawings, Ethan. Definitely add something to your already excellent literary acumen. Good to have you back, too!

Amy F. Turner

So the best way to get over someone is to get under someone else yet never in a million would I have conceived such a scenario of soothing a broken heart, but the relief of a horny teenager is a strong motivator. :D That will certainly add to the mystique when alone in his room.

Well-written and enjoyable fodder for my reading mind. And your pics as usual are the icing on the cake or rump as it were. :)