Here again, my will so weak
A woman's touch, is all I seek
Her kiss so soft, forbidden yes
But grow I must, with her caress
Lust is the drug of choice for me
Her groaning sigh, her hands so free
I roam with all desires held
My lips, my hands, our bodies meld
Forbidden fruit, I've tasted often
The salty juice, never forgotten
At last I fill her hole with soul
I pound away with stiffened pole
In it goes so deep so wet
She cries again but no not yet
There's more to give, my rod still firm
But then I shudder, thrash and squirm
I've come again, too quick but wait
A gentle push towards her gate
This is what I love the most
The salty juices of my host
The sex is over, feelings of guilt
I leave the madam, beneath the quilt
Payment made, remorse, then pain
I know I must return again
Submitted: July 19, 2021
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Please send me her address…. Please please… I loved this
Mon, July 19th, 2021 10:15pmHey! Who are you? I’ve not seen you here before…
( that’s my come hither line)
I love your poetic technique. Your piece not only demonstrates rhyme but also meter. Some of your descriptions are a bit raw while others are elegant, so there’s a bit of dichotomy there, but I like the encounter as you address it. I like the focus on guilt because it adds depth to your piece when you step beyond the physical aspects of what is clearly a hormonally driven occurrence.
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I think raw and guilt are definitely two appropriate descriptions that fit my writing style and in some ways my own personality. Some things I write about are fantasy but many are touched by personal experience, and, dare I say it, guilt.
I appreciate your comments and will try and look at a more elegant style if I can in future.
I am fairly new to this site and genre so am learning my trade from others, like yourself, so please keep the comments flowing.
Wonderful poem.
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Too bad it isn’t Truely love, then it could be much more permanent.
Mon, July 19th, 2021 6:20am