Lust

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: General Erotica  |  House: Booksiesilk Classic Group

A few words about lust

Here again, my will so weak

A woman's touch, is all I seek

Her kiss so soft, forbidden yes

But grow I must, with her caress

 

Lust is the drug of choice for me

Her groaning sigh, her hands so free

I roam with all desires held

My lips, my hands, our bodies meld

 

Forbidden fruit, I've tasted often

The salty juice, never forgotten

At last I fill her hole with soul

I pound away with stiffened pole

 

In it goes so deep so wet

She cries again but no not yet

There's more to give, my rod still firm

But then I shudder,  thrash and squirm

 

I've come again, too quick but wait

A gentle push towards her gate

This is what I love the most

The salty juices of my host

 

The sex is over, feelings of guilt

I leave the madam, beneath the quilt

Payment made, remorse, then pain

I know I must return again

 


Submitted: July 19, 2021

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Spyguy

Too bad it isn’t Truely love, then it could be much more permanent.

Mon, July 19th, 2021 6:20am

Missink31

Luv it. Xxx

Mon, July 19th, 2021 8:30am

Author
Reply

Thanx. Really helps to get some positive comments. x

Mon, July 19th, 2021 2:02am

samnash

Please send me her address…. Please please… I loved this

Mon, July 19th, 2021 10:15pm

Author
Reply

If only I could.....there would be a queue. With myself at the front!
Appreciate your comments, thanks.
More lustful poems to come soon.

Mon, July 19th, 2021 10:56pm

DampKitten

Hey! Who are you? I’ve not seen you here before…

( that’s my come hither line)

I love your poetic technique. Your piece not only demonstrates rhyme but also meter. Some of your descriptions are a bit raw while others are elegant, so there’s a bit of dichotomy there, but I like the encounter as you address it. I like the focus on guilt because it adds depth to your piece when you step beyond the physical aspects of what is clearly a hormonally driven occurrence.

Tue, July 20th, 2021 1:35pm

Author
Reply

I think raw and guilt are definitely two appropriate descriptions that fit my writing style and in some ways my own personality. Some things I write about are fantasy but many are touched by personal experience, and, dare I say it, guilt.
I appreciate your comments and will try and look at a more elegant style if I can in future.
I am fairly new to this site and genre so am learning my trade from others, like yourself, so please keep the comments flowing.

Tue, July 20th, 2021 7:31am

Precious Pearl

Wonderful poem.

Thu, July 22nd, 2021 12:42am

Author
Reply

Thank you so much. That gives me great encouragement.

Wed, July 21st, 2021 11:55pm

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