Kill Me Burn Us. In The Beginning. The end
Short Story by: Missink31
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Submitted: July 13, 2021
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So this is how a sociopath acts.
Scary.
Nicely presented.
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I cannot get over that pet name, "old cunt"...so totally crazy for a guy.
Sat, July 17th, 2021 2:53amThis story is great. I particularly like this recurrent reference to burning and fire, the curling iron on your old man's chest and the subsequent flame throwing episode in the garage. It unifies the piece, though this is very informal literature.
I like the idea of a younger guy downstairs - love that garage door thing. He's all tatted up like you. He walks you down the beach. Your old man gets pissed when you check the guy out, and it just escalates. I like the voyeur thing in the bedroom. Not much privacy in this place. Loud sex, hard and damaging. Rough.
I'd love it if you assigned the young guy a name. 'Old cunt' is so damn classic, I'm just now getting used to it, but that's your thing. I don't think anyone would think twice about his real name (just a first name), but whatever floats you is fine.
It's an interesting read.
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Thank you you so much for your comment. I had trouble writing this story as it did happen and still scares the shit out of me. I couldn't put a name to the young guy without brining up back memories.
Fri, July 16th, 2021 8:20pmOld cunt is crazy. I couldn't think of a name to suit.
I don't think just any name would of do justice . He's a mixture between the hulk when he gets mad and Ted Bundy and Mick from Wolf Creek. So old cunt just stuck.