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"I wasn't expecting that...
Your usual succinct message in a bottle
beautifully written by a castaway Wordsworth
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I am walking along on the damp sand close to the water. Random strands of seaweed. The briny air. A cool breeze.
I am between sleeping and waking.
I’m kind of going in a directionless direction – but aren’t we all?
The to-and-froing of the waves, the breathing of the ocean…
I look up and see that the sky is smeared and streaked and blended, orange and pink and purple and blue. Beautiful.
I look along and make out what looks like wreckage…
I hasten my pace and the sand attempts to pull at my feet, slow me down, impede my progress…
In front of me is the shattered and smashed hull of a yacht. Scattered and strewn along the shore’s edge, the boundary between the fluid, the uncertain, and the solid, safe and sure and firm…
I bend down and pick up a length of shattered hull. Hold it in my hands. Turn it over. Examine it.
There is writing, fancy script… a name, a chosen name, and written, painted in gold letters upon pure white is: Destiny’s Bitch.
Destiny’s Bitch. How apt. How karmic. Fate. Cruel fate.
I wonder if anyone has survived.
Destiny’s Bitch.
Yeah, we’re all destiny’s bitch.
I carry on strolling in a kind of disconsolate way…
Submitted: June 26, 2021
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DampKitten
I wasn't expecting that...
Tue, June 29th, 2021 1:21amYour usual succinct message in a bottle
beautifully written by a castaway Wordsworth
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Thank you. Strange piece that kind of sprung from a dream.
Tue, June 29th, 2021 4:23am