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Forbidden Fruit!

Novel By: Crimson Butterfly

Just a taste of a story that I'm debating whether or not to continue. Let me know. I need comments in order to continue! ;) leave them. View table of contents...



Submitted:Aug 8, 2010    Reads: 1,663    Comments: 7    Likes: 5   

I sat on the opposite couch with my feet at my side as I secretly studied the love of my life as he sat across the glass coffee table from me watching TV. We had rented the movie Ninja Assassin [his choice] and he was really into it. I stared at him as he subconsciously bit on his thumb which usually indicated he was really into something. I watched as he slowly moved that succulent tongue over his thumb, it was like he was teasing me. Man, how I wish I was that thumb right now. Having his tongue all over mine and kissing those luscious lips and being embraced by his sturdy muscular arms and felt by his strong hands and being able to stare into those beautiful blue eyes that were current glued to the TV. I licked my lips as I stared at him and studying him. I looked from his dark brown hair that was messy but looked good on him at the same time. I studied him from his strong cheek bones and masculine jaw to his chest but had to avert my eyes because I was beginning to get hot. Man I so badly wanted him. I knew it was wrong to want him. I mean, he was my brother after all, my twin in fact. I wanted him though. He was the forbidden fruit and I wanted a bite no, forget the damn bite I wanted to devour him… ;)


A/N:: I need to know if i should continue this or not. let me know. leave a comment telling me what you think. if you like i suggest to become a fan so i can update you. there are more writings to come. i write when bored and that is often.



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