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Baby Let Me In

Novel By: NikkiLibby

After a destructive relationship, Tawny Dawson's friend takes her to a gym to learn to defend herself. She takes a liking in her trainer, Carson Reynolds. Carson likes her, but can he risk letting her into his life? Is Tawny willing to risk being with a man again after what happened to her in the past few years? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Apr 17, 2012    Reads: 443    Comments: 10    Likes: 3   

*A/N: I updated as soon as I can! This is probably the longest chapter in this whole story. This is a violent chapter. Also, sorry to say but the next chapter is the last chapter. After this going on, there is nothing else for them to do...well get married and have babies (which I am already spoiling the epilogue!) The next story I am going to do a thriller kind of story, like a kidnap story. I got a title in mind and Clay, my hubby, LOVES the title! I am not spoiling it till the next chapter! Thanks for reading and remember to comment!*

Chapter 9

*Carson's POV*

I paced across the living floor of Bailey's apartment like a mad man. Tawny is suppose to call me three hours ago. When I tried to call her, her phone goes straight to voice mail. This is unlike her. She usually answers or calls back if she doesn't pick up. She never turns off her cell phone.

"Dude, she is probably taking a nap. Give her another hour!" Bailey said and I sighed.

"She couldn't be taking a nap, its noon and we got home around nine this morning, its just too early. I am going over there!" I said and Reggie stood up and crossed her arms across her chest.

"This is highly unlike Tawny to ignore you, or anybody, like this. Bailey, I agree with Carson, we need to go to her place!" Reggie said and she grabbed her purse and we walked out the door. Bailey is not that far behind us and we got in my car and we drove to her place. When we got there, her door is unlocked, which Tawny always leaves her door locked when she is home. We walked into the apartment, Missy is in front of the door, meowing at us. We walked around the cat and I went to her bedroom, and she is not there. Reggie hollered that she is not in the living room and Bailey hollered that she is not in the bathroom or kitchen. My stomach began to turn and I started to feel sick to my stomach. Something is not right here. My phone rang and it's Tawny. I yelled to Reggie and Bailey that she is calling and they both ran to me.

"Baby, where are you?" I said and put my phone on speaker. I heard her crying and she sniffed.

"I don't know where I am at, Carson. I am so scared…"

*Tawny's POV*

"…I am so scared!" I said to the phone and I looked around in the room I am in. I am sitting on a dirty bed that has not been washed in a long time. The room smelled funny and there is only one window.

"What is wrong? What is going on?" Carson demanded on the phone.

"Chris…came to my house this morning. They drugged me and took me somewhere," I said and I heard somebody moving something outside. "Help me Carson! Tell them to go to the address I gave them last night!"

"Baby, don't worry, help is on the way! I love you so much, we will find you!" I can tell he is crying a little, his voice is shaky.

"I love you too, so much Carson. Someone's coming!" I turned my phone off and slid it under the bed. Chris opened the door and his scraggly brown hair is hanging over his green eyes. Once I fell for those eyes, but now, I only see revenge in them. He walked over and slapped me across my face and I spit out blood.

"So, you go off and date some douche bag, huh?" Chris said slapping me again. "I treated you right, I treated you like a woman should be treated!"

"Like a fucking slave, Chris! That is so 1950s! This is 2012 for fucking Christ sake!" I yelled and he turned around and he laughed. He ran his fingers through his hair and then he turned around and slammed his hands down on the bed and I seen the dust fly.

"You know where you're at? We are our home, we lived her for 3 years, 3 FUCKING YEARS, TAWNY! I was going to marry you, have children with you, but no. You had to dump me and date some fitness trainer that treats you like a spoiled brat!" Chris yelled and I jerked back. I tried to fight back the tears of fear, but my strength and determination came up instead.

"You are nothing compared to Carson Reynolds. You cannot speak about him that way. He treats women the way they suppose to be treated, with respect! I have freedom, love, care and life. I am actually enjoying love and life now!" I yelled and he punched me. I screamed because of the pain.

"You fucking whore! You are fucking him, I knew it! Are you cumming as well? Women doesn't deserve to cum!" he yelled and I looked at him and gave him a evil smile.

"Oh yes, I cum and I cum a lot!" I laughed and his temper began to build up. Its my turn to piss him off! "How about those two women you killed, huh? What did those strippers do to you to kill them? They are innocent! What about that mistress that bailed you out, huh?" As he began to answer, the door opened and a brunette haired woman, slightly older than me and scrawny, walked in. She wrapped her arms around Chris and slid her tongue into his mouth.

"Hey baby, is she giving you trouble?" she asked and he sighed.

"No, she is just running that mouth!" Chris said and he came over and punched me again. I screamed in pain and the woman came over and spit on me.

"You bitch, you should have obeyed Chris' demands! I obey him and I NEVER get punished! I enjoy him being rough with me!" She said and Chris told her to follow him. When I heard the door slam shut, I grabbed my phone and dialed Carson's phone.

"Baby, we are at the police station!" Carson said and I cried.

"Please hurry, he is hurting me! I don't know what else he is going to do to me! I will leave this call open so you can hear him and the police can find where I am at. He said we are at our old house, but I don't believe him!" I said and I heard some clicking and a beep.

"We got the location!" a police officer said. I head the door knob turn and I said that he is coming back. I slid the phone underneath the pillow and only Chris came back.

"So, as your punishment, I am going to fuck you and you will like it!" Chris said and he unbuckled his pants and pulled down his boxers and he is hard. No, he is really going to do it! I closed my eyes and began to cry as he ripped my shirt and bra off. He jerked my jeans off and ripped my panties off and he wolf whistled.

"Oh Tawny, your body is so sexy!" Chris said and he kissed my stomach. I began to kick and scream and the door jerked opened and that bitch came in. She ran over to me and placed her hand over my mouth.

"Stop screaming you whore!" She said and I bit down on her hand and she screamed.

"I am no whore, you are!" I screamed at her and she came over and slapped me.

"Sarah, leave us NOW!" Chris said and the bitch Sarah left, slamming the door behind her. Chris crawled on top of me and shoved his cock inside me, hard and very rough. I screamed in pain and began to cry. I threw my hands up and began to hit him everywhere I can.

"GET OFF OF ME! GET THE FUCK OFF OF ME!" I yelled and he just fucked me harder. He moaned and I just kept hitting him and cried. I gave up and just lay there on the bed, being raped. I cried and cried until I couldn't anymore and when I felt him cum inside me, he grunted and he got off of me. He tried to kiss me but when his tongue slipped inside my mouth, I bit his tongue. He jerked back and punched me.

"You bitch! You we're never really good in bed with me. You may be with the douche bag you are with, but not me. You just lay there, limp like a dead person…"

"GAFFNEY POLICE, WE GOT YOU SURROUNDED!" The police outside the house said through the speaker. Sarah screamed and cussed and ran to Chris.

"What do we do? What do we do?" Sarah freaked out. Chris just raised his arms and went to the window.

"Sarah, there is nothing we can do," Chris said and I lay there, crying. I heard the door being kicked in and a lot of men came to the bedroom. Carson is one of them. He didn't go to me, he went to Chris. He grabbed Chris by his hair and punched him a few times and broke his nose.

"You fucking ass hole!" Carson yelled and the police officer pulled him away. I can tell that they are not going to arrest Carson because well, they are here to arrest Chris and Sarah.

"Chris Barts and Sarah Henry, y'all are under arrest for kidnapping and rape. Chris, you have two warrants for manslaughter against two women in Spartanburg…" I heard one of the police officers said. I got on my side and got in fetal position. I cried and I felt warm arms surrounding me. I jerked and I heard Carson's voice.

"Shhh, baby, its me, Carson, everything is going to be fine. It's over now!" Carson said in a soothing voice. I turned towards him and cried into his shirt. He ran his fingers through my dirty hair and the paramedics came in and took me away. I demanded that Carson comes with me to the hospital and they let him. At the hospital, they tried to do a rape kit on me, but I told them I was raped and that they didn't need to test me. They believed me, and they took me to X-ray to see if he broke anything. These doctors here are so stupid! He just punched me and didn't break anything. The nurses let me take a shower and they cleaned my cuts on my face. They sent me for a MRI to see if he damaged anything in my brain, that's the one thing I didn't argue about. Sarah and Chris both hit me in my head. When we we're left alone, Carson grabbed my hand and kissed it.

"I am so glad you are okay, baby. I knew I had to trust my instinct!" Carson said and I smiled.

"I glad you did as well," I said.

"I love you so much, I will never let anybody hurt you again!"

"I love you too, the only person that hurt me is in prison now, probably will be for a long time!" The doctors let me leave because I have no life threatening injuries except for the cuts, which I will get over, and I went to Carson's place. It's almost night time and I just sat on his couch and watched him cook. I grabbed the nearest mirror and I cried. My whole face is bruised up and the cuts looks nasty. Carson ran to me and rocked me.

"Shhh, baby, its okay! It's over now!" He said and I smiled into his shirt.

"I love you," I said and he smiled into my hair and kissed the top of my head.

"I love you too, baby doll!" He let me go to bed early that night and I didn't feel like doing anything. Carson didn't even attempt to seduce me. He came in a few hours later and wrapped his arms around me and fell asleep beside me. I know things are going to look up now, I just know it! Chris is in prison, long gone, so life is going to change for the better.


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