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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 27, 2012    Reads: 1,351    Comments: 11    Likes: 5   

*A/N: Heya! Sorry it took me slower than usual to write this. I wanted this chapter to be perfect! There is a song refrence in here, so I recommend y'all listen to a song known as "Without You" by Motley Crue. Its such a pretty song! Thank y'all for reading my story and remember to comment!**

Chapter 7

Friday came along rather slow. Todd and I spent almost everyday together, except for Wednesday and I had to pick up Cameron from football practice and my dad showed up to my house. My dad and I are closer than my mom and I. I wanted to tell him about Todd, but I was afraid he would freak out and tell my mom. I will eventually tell him about Todd, maybe he won't tell her. Tonight, I think it's the night I will lose my virginity. I am spending the night with Todd, and my mom is under the impression that I am going to be with Jenny tonight. My mom has been complaining about me not being home, but she is happy that I am "studying" with Jenny. I am studying alright, I am studying Todd's body! Sorry, I knew that was lame! I walked out of my school and I called my mom and told her that I am heading over to Jenny's right now and she sighed.

"I hate that you are spending time away from me!" Mom said.

"I'm sorry mom, I just want to spend time with my friend. I will be back Sunday and I will spend Sunday and Monday with you," I said. I have Monday off school and Todd has to work on the weekdays and he is off the whole weekend.

"That is good, well I will see you when you get home. Remember to call me when you're fixing to go to bed and when you wake up!"

"I will mom, I love you!"

"Love you too, sweetie!" I got off the phone and I drove over to Todd's place. When I parked in his driveway, my heart began to race. I cannot believe I am about to have sex tonight! I walked to the front door and I knocked. Todd told me that I don't have to knock, but I still want to. He opened the door and he is still in his work clothes.

"Hey baby," Todd said and I smiled.

"Hi," I said shyly and he let me in. He closed the door behind me and he wrapped his arm around me and he walked me to the living room. I sat down and he joined me and wrapped me into his arms and he turned on the TV. We didn't say anything or do anything, until an hour later. I got fed up on his niceness, I wanted him wild! I leaned over and started to kiss his neck and I head Todd moan.

"I want to wait till tonight," Todd said.

"We can still make out," I said and I kissed his lips. His arms wrapped around me and he pulled me onto his lap, and I began to kiss him hard. I wanted him so bad, I thought about him all day at school and it made me horny and I wet my panties a little. I let go to catch my breath and Todd's lips touched my neck and my head fell back and my black hair skimmed my back like a light waterfall.

"I don't think I can wait any longer, Todd!" I moaned as his hands kneaded my breasts.

"I just don't want sex to be the only purpose of you coming to spend the night with me," Todd said and I swallowed. I understand now, and I can wait. He wants me there because he actually wants me there, not for sex. I kissed him one more time and got off of his lap. Should I tell him about me loving him? I asked my mom one night about love and I know now that she is getting highly suspicious.

Flashback to two days ago…

"Mom, how do you know that you are in love?" I asked my mom in her bedroom.

"Why do you ask? Do you think you are in love?" She asked me as she brushed her brown hair which is as long as my hair.

"Maybe, but he doesn't know yet."

"I knew I was in love with your father when I was seventeen and he was twenty-two. I didn't want to be in love with him due to his age, but I couldn't help it. My heart raced every time I seen him. Every time I seen him, I wanted to kiss him until I couldn't anymore. I even wanted to make love to him and I knew I couldn't. One day, he came up to me and asked me out and I did. We made love probably two weeks later, and I got pregnant with you. When we made love, he told me he loved me and I told him I loved him."

"What happened between you and dad? Did he cheat on you?" I heard my mom yell at my dad before they got the divorce about another woman, which is probably my step mom.

"Yes, he said he didn't feel the spark between us for a long time. I did every time I seen him. I still had those feelings with him at twenty-nine, the heart racing the wanting to kiss him. The wanting of him to make love to me. He just fell out of love with me," Mom said and I began to get scared. Todd can fall out of love with me, if he is even in love with me.

"Did he right out say it or waited till the right moment?" I asked her.

"Right before he took my virginity, he looked into my eyes and told me he loved me. If you really love this guy, Vannah, just tell him how you feel."

"I am scared."

"Scared of what honey?"

"That he doesn't love me or fall out of love with me."

"If he truly loves you, baby, he will never fall out of love with you…"

"Todd, I have something to say," I said and I closed my eyes and swallowed. It's now or never.

"What is it, Savannah?" Todd said putting some of my hair behind my ear.

"I…love you." My head dropped so I can see the floor, preparing for something either good or bad. There is an awkward silence in the house. Is he shocked? Is he happy that I finally came out and say how I felt? He needs to say something, my heart is sinking.

"Do you really love me, baby?" Todd finally said and I looked up with tears in my eyes.

"Yes, Todd, I really do. I know we only been together for like a week, but I knew for a few days now that if you we're ever to go away, I would melt and die," I said and he reached over and wiped my tears from my cheeks with his thumb and pulled my face closer. When our noses touched, he smiled.

"I love you, too, Savannah," he said and he kissed me. My heart soared at those five words he just said. He loves me! Thank god he loves me too! I wrapped my arms around his neck and he pulled away to look into my eyes.

"You cannot believe how much I love you, Vannah. I love everything about you and I cannot think what my life will be like without you." I looked at him and I began to laugh. He actually looked hurt and I stopped laughed.

"I just realized that almost everything we are saying about love sounds like that Motley Crue song 'Without You'," I said and he smiled.

"How would you know about the Crue?" Todd asked and I laughed.

"My parents are die hard fans, so I hear them all the time." He pulled my body to him and I lay in his lap and it was nothing sexual by this, I laid on his lap watching television as he ran his fingers through my hair.

"I never seen hair this black before," He said and I turned to look up at him.

"My dad is half Indian, my grandmother is Cherokee Indian, born and raised in the Western North Carolina mountains. I've met her before, but she never leaves the reservation and she is long gone, she passed away when I was six years old."

"I'm sorry, sounded like you wanted to get close to her."

"I wanted to know more of my Indian heritage, I am quarter Cherokee after all!" I let Todd touch my face and I loved how softly he touched my face and how gentle his smile is when he smiled at me.

"You hungry? I'll order us a pizza to be delivered," Todd said and I nodded.. He grabbed the phone beside him on the table, not moving me at all and he ordered us a pepperoni pizza. The pizza came and we ate and we watched more TV. Around eight that night, I needed a shower BAD!

"Can I take a shower?" I asked Todd and he laughed.

"Why you asking me? You are more than welcome to take a shower. Towels are in the shelf beside the bathroom and you brought your own soap right?" I nodded and he kissed me. I grabbed my things and a towel and walked into the bathroom. I turned on the tub water and undressed and I looked at myself in the mirror after I undressed. I wanted to look at myself before I lost my virginity tonight. I wanted to see the old me before the new me came out. Once the water warmed up to my liking, I stepped into the shower. I got too busy underneath the water from rinsing my hair out when something walked into the bathroom. I felt arms being wrapped around my wet body and warm lips kiss my neck.

"Hey baby!" Todd said and I jumped out my skin and screamed.

"FUCK! You scared me!" I said and placed my hand on my chest and he is laughing his ass off.

"Sorry baby!" He said and he pulled me closer and held me. After I got my bearings back, I got on my tip toes and I brushed my lips against his and wrapped my arms around his neck. As we kissed, Todd began to touch my body and his hands fondled my breasts and I sighed into his mouth. I let go and I wanted to see his body. I backed up and I stared at his naked body. He is highly fit and he does not have washboard abs. I loved his body, I loved the chest hair that lightly dusted across his chest and trailed down to his naval and connected to his pubic hair. I looked at his cock and I swallowed. He is hard, I can you that much. He is huge, probably about 8-9 inches. Todd grabbed me and pulled me so close that my breasts are pressed against his hard chest and his erection went between my legs. I moaned when his cock jerked from the heat coming from my pussy and he smiled.

"Are you sure you want to have sex tonight?" Todd said in his aroused, husky voice. I nodded and turned around and turned the water off. We stepped out the shower and we dried each other off. After we wrapped each other in towels, Todd grabbed my hand and walked me to his bedroom. As we stepped into his room, I began to get nervous. I know this is normal, so I tried to not look nervous. He closed the door behind him and he walked up to me. Todd smiled as he took my towel off and I heard it fall to the floor.

"You can take my towel off, if you want to," Todd said and I untied the knot around his waist and I let it fall on the floor. I looked at his chest and I have the urge to touch him. I ran my nails down his muscular chest and touched his warmed skin and damp chest hairs. Then I ran my nails down his erect and hard nipples and he sucked in a breath. My hands began to go down to his navel and I followed the hair trail to his cock and I looked up at him. I stopped and Todd smiled and he kissed me. He let me sit on the bed and I scooted back and lay down so he can get on top of me.

"Go to the pillows, I want you to get comfortable," Todd said and I crawled to the pillows and he finally got on top of me. Todd began kissing me on my neck then he kissed my breasts, sucked my nipples for a little bit. After my breasts, he made a kiss trail down my stomach and my hip bone. He kissed my inner thigh, which made me raise my hips up and I felt his tongue on my clit. I moaned his name over and over as his tongue done its magic on me. I felt my orgasm build up and I began to move around and moan even more and he quit.

"Todd!" I whined and he got on top of me.

"I want you to cum on my cock, Savannah. Are you ready? It will hurt and you know I don't want to hurt you, I love you too much," Todd said and I nodded.

"I know, I am ready." Todd arms wrapped around my shoulders and I felt the head against my hole and I closed my eyes and let a slow breath out. When his cock entered me and penetrated my virgin lining, I felt pain and I cried out a little.

"So sorry, it will go away in a minute, I love you!" Todd said and I felt the trinkle of blood go down my leg. He stopped and let the pain subside and I nodded for him to go. I wrapped my legs around his waist as he fucked me gently and slow. It began to feel so good and my moaned and screamed his name.

"Todd, fuck me harder!" I said and he looked down at me and smiled.

"Are you sure?" Todd asked and I nodded. He started to fuck me really hard and he went faster. I moaned his name as his cock hit that special spot and I began to pant as I felt my orgasm build up again.

"Oh I love you, I love you! I am fixing to cum, Todd!" I moaned and he began to go harder and deeper inside me.

"Oh god, me too, Savannah! I love you, too!" Todd said and I felt myself cum all over his cock and I felt the hot, thick liquid enter me as Todd cum in me. He collapsed on top of me and we lay like that for a few minutes. We had to catch our breath! He finally got off of me and lay down beside me. He pulled me closer and wrapped my arms around me and we fell asleep. Tonight has changed me. I feel different, I feel good! I feel like a woman. Todd has made me into a woman!


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