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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 25, 2012    Reads: 1,362    Comments: 12    Likes: 8   

*A/N: Heya! Sorry it took me so long. I had school and work this week, and I stressed cause I lost two clients :( Doesn't matter now, I GOT AN INTERVIEW MONDAY YAY! Well, enough about Real Life, sorry this chapter is long. I got carried away. This is step 2! You can probably guess what it is, it involves her lower body ;) Read and comment loves! Oh yeah, the italics in here are text messages, if you are confused who is who (should be obvious) tell me and I will put up here who is who in the text messages!**

Chapter 6

My mom acted…strange when I got home. Maybe I had a huge smile on my face when I stepped through the door. It may be the fact that it is ten past ten at night.

"Had a good study session with Jenny? It's pretty late," Mom asked giving me a look that told me that she knew I am up to something.

"Yeah, well, I did stay and eat some spaghetti and had a girly fun with Jenny," I said and she smiled.

"As long as you are getting your studying done, I am fine with it." Whew! My heart about jumped out of my chest. I ran down to my bathroom, took a quick shower and ran to my bedroom. I needed to talk to Todd, like right now!

"Hey Todd!" I said when he answered.

"Hey baby, I am missing you already!" Todd said and I laughed.

"No, you just missing my boobies!"

"Not just your breasts, I miss all of you. You have the cutest laugh and a genuine smile."

"I am blushing, quit making me blush!"

"NEVER!" I laughed and we talked for about fifteen minutes until I had to go to bed. When I woke up the next morning and went to school, Annabella is near my locker and I tried to ignore her, but its hard when she is literally following you.

"Still talking to Todd?" Annabella asked and I rolled her eyes.

"Yes, so what?" I said and opened my locker and threw my book bag into my locker.

"He is eye candy, why is he interested in you?"

"Hmm, maybe its my personality, Annabella. Do you know what a personality is, Annabella?" I grabbed my books and everybody that Annabella hates cheered me on with my come back. Jenny smiled and Fritz just stared at me, like he is amazed or something.

"How can you stand up to Annabella like that?" He asked and I grabbed his shoulder and shook my head.

"My dear, dear Fritz, you must understand the American bitch. If you let her walk over you like shit, she will win. If you just find that bubble that surrounds her and pop it, she will fall and leaves you alone until that bubble forms again," I said and Jenny laughed.

"It usually takes her about a week to get back. She will leave Savannah alone for a little bit," Jenny said and Fritz grabbed her and pulled him closer. Ever since I've been with Todd, seeing Jenny and Fritz hug and kiss each other doesn't bother me or make me love sick anymore. It makes me smile and makes me think their cute together even more.

"I love you, Fritz," Jenny said and Fritz kissed her nose.

"I love you, too, Jenny," Fritz said and they kissed. I left the lovebirds for their make out session and as I sat down in my English class, my phone vibrated, and it's a text from Todd.

Hey baby, dad wants to meet you, tonight
-TM and SL

That's cool : ) where do you want to meet?
-Vannah and Todd

How about my place? I'll just drive us over there?
-TM and SL

Sure thing! See you later MWAH xoxo
-Vannah and Todd

See you later, xoxo!
-TM and SL

I quickly put my cell phone in my pocket before my teacher seen it and took it away. Wow, I am going to meet Bob Middleton, the owner of Oak Ridge Lumberyard!

When I got to Todd's place, he is already outside, ready to go. I parked and locked my car in his driveway and we walked to his car. When we got in his car, Todd finally smiled at me.

"Ready?" He asked.

"Yeah, I am!" I said and he leaned over and gave me a kiss. He drove down the street and through downtown of our medium size town. He pulled into a mini mansion and my mouth went agape. It is huge! This mansion is like my house times three!

"Well, that's where my dad lives and where I use to live until I was eighteen," Todd said and I looked at him.

"This is HUGE!" I said and he laughed.

"Eh, its not that homey, too big for my liking. Come on, my dad is waiting on us." Todd held my hand and we walked up the stairs that seems to made of marble and he ran the doorbell. We stood there for a few moments and he looked down at me and licked his lips.

"What?" I said.

"I can see down your shirt!" Todd said and I giggled. I pulled my shirt up so I don't show a lot of cleavage and the doors opened. A woman in her lower forties opened the door and smiled at us.

"Todd, glad to see you!" the woman said and hugged him.

"Heather, this is Savannah, my girlfriend," Todd said after he let go of her. She looked over at me with her beautiful brunette hair and blue eyes. She looks like she had some plastic surgery done, but she still looks very pretty.

"Hello Savannah, I am Heather Middleton, Todd's step mom, welcome to our home. Bob should be here any minute! I made us dinner, do you like Chicken Parmesan?" Heather asked and I nodded to agree. "GREAT! I shall return to the kitchen!" she said and she left. Todd grabbed my hand and he walked me around his old home. He showed me the room where they have parties, the main living room with the huge flat screen TV and then he took me upstairs. He took me to a bedroom that looks like it belongs to a man.

"Well, this is my old bedroom," Todd said and I looked around. He seemed like a normal teenager, and I seen him in here, doing what ever teenage Todd done.

"What did you do in here?" I asked him.

"I lost my virginity in here, if you wondering that," Todd said and I nodded. "The girl was a junior and I was a senior. She was the class whore and I gave in when she was hitting on me."

"Where is she now?" I asked, hoping to hear that she is a mom or a whore still.

"No one knows. She vanished six months later. People said she got pregnant and quit, some people thought she got killed."

"Wow, that is very strange!"

"I don't care about her or any woman, I got you now." He pushed me to the bed and let me sit down on it. His hands touched my breasts from the side and I closed my eyes and absorbed the feeling of him touching me.

"What is the next step?" I asked him and Todd let his hands fall to my lap and barely touched my crotch.

"Your pussy," Todd said and I swallowed. I knew it. Will he finger me? Will he eat me out? What about both? "We are going to leave here as soon as we finished eating and socializing for a bit. I want you to know if I am going too fast…"

"I've been ready for a long time, Todd. I just never found the right person. Yes, I will be nervous, but I am ready. I am ready to become a woman!" He groaned and pulled me closer to his body and he kissed me. His tongue played with mine and I feel like melting again.

"Hey you two, Bob is home!" Heather said outside the door and he let go of me and I smiled.

"Well, lets go meet my dad!" Todd said and he wrapped his arm around my waist and he took me to the big living room and a man in his fifties is changing the channel on the big screen TV and Todd cleared his throat.

"Dad, I want you to meet my girlfriend, Savannah Loftis," Todd said and the man stood up and I smiled. Todd and his father looks like identical twins, except that Mr. Middleton has gray hair instead of the chestnut color hair Todd has. The man walked up to me and he touched my shoulder.

"Hello Savannah, nice to meet you. I will admit, I kind of freaked out when Todd told me that you are seventeen. I don't mind the age difference one bit, Heather is nine years younger than me," Bob said and I looked towards the kitchen where Heather is putting the plates together and she is humming away.

"Nice to meet you, Mr. Middleton," I said and he smiled.

"Mr. Middleton is my father, Savannah, call me Bob!"

"I love your house, Bob." I tried to be polite and I knew Todd knew so too because he squeezed my hand.

"Thank you, I built it twenty five years ago when my ex-wife found out she was pregnant with Todd. I wanted a house that will help my family grow. Unfortunately, after Todd, she had several miscarriages, so Todd is our only child."

"I have a younger brother name Cameron, he is ten. My mom had a miscarriage between me and him, so I know all about the pain." I still remember the night my mom had the miscarriage. I was about five years old and my dad was reading me a story. I heard my mom scream and dad carried me to my bedroom and told me to go to sleep. I couldn't because my mom was still screaming. I followed my dad to the master bedroom and I seen the floor covered in blood. My dad took me to my grandmothers house and he took my mom to the emergency room. My mom told me that the baby went to live with Jesus, and I understood perfectly what she meant. I was not dumb, I knew the baby died.

"Dinner's ready y'all!" Heather yelled and all three of us went to the dining room, which could fit in my bedroom and my bathroom! I sat beside Todd and while Bob and Heather talked to us, Todd began to rub my thigh and slid his hand between my legs. I cleared my throat and looked at him. I could tell that Todd is very aroused.

"Are you planning to go to college, Savannah?" Bob asked me.

"Yeah, I am going to the community college here and then transfer to University of Tennessee when I get my associate degree in journalism," I said and Todd gently squeezed my thigh and his hand got closer to my pussy.

"I know you can do it, you can do anything," Todd said and winked at me. I blushed and started to eat on my dinner. We all finished our dinner and their maid, yes they got maids there, took our plates and we all started towards the living room. Todd told his dad and step mom that he has to do something for a few minutes and they excused us. Todd grabbed my hand and took me to the library and closed the door behind me. Todd became an animal with me and kissed me like he will die tomorrow. He pushed me to the table and help me sit on top of it.

"I cannot wait till we get back to my place, I want your pussy now!" Todd growled and it sounded so kinky!

"That bad?" I moaned as he pulled my top down so he can see my cleavage and kissed my breasts.

"Very bad, I could fuck you right now, but I know you don't want to yet." Todd pulled my top down further and exposed one of my breasts covered with my bra and he pulled the bra away from it. He started to suck my nipple and I ran my fingers through his hair and moaned. Todd began to un buckle my belt and my pants and he started to pull my pants down. Todd let go of my breast and looked into my eyes as he pulled my pants off and they fell to the ground.

"Lay back," he said and I obliged. Todd raised my shirt up and kissed from the bottom of my bra down to the lining of my panties. When he kissed the lining of my panties, I jerked from the pleasure. He smiled and he hooked his index finger on both ends of my panties and pulled them down. I covered my eyes as he pulled my panties down and I heard him chuckle.

"Why you covering your face, baby? I love your hairy pussy! Maybe you can trim it up a little, but I love your pussy baby. Its so pink and wet and I know its going to be so tight!" Todd said and I felt his finger go up and down my lips. I sucked my breath in and then, Todd began to play with my clit with his finger. I moaned and rolled my head around, messing up the papers on the table. His finger went down to my pussy hole and he inserted one finger. I moaned loudly and he looked up at me and he smiled.

"Does that feel good, Savannah?" Todd asked.

"Oh yes, yes it does! I want more!" I moaned out and he inserted one more finger and began to move them in and out. As he fingered the hell out of my pussy, I felt his tongue on my clit. OH MY GOD! It is better than what I thought! I love the feel of his wet tongue on my clit! Todd slowly licked my clit, going clockwise a few times then counterclockwise. He sucked it, licked it, everything you can think of.

"Oh Todd! Oh Todd!" I moaned out when I feel something build up inside me. He pushed his fingers deeper into my pussy and he touched a sensitive spot, which made that feeling more intense. He sucked my clit more and I started panting.

"What's going on, Todd?" I moaned and panicked a little.

"Don't stop it, baby, you are Cumming!" Todd said and I let the feeling build up so much that my lower tummy ached and then, I exploded. I felt this hot liquid leave my pussy and it got all over Todd's face. He pressed his fingers into me one more time and sucked a few moments longer. He got on top of me and he licked his lips to taste my cum. After he licked my cum off his face, he licked them off his fingers.

"Your cum tastes so sweet," Todd said and he kissed me and I tasted my own cum, which turned me on a little. I sat up and I wanted to pleasure him now.

"Take your pants off, Todd," I demanded. Todd looked confused, but he took his pants off and his boxers. His hard on bounced a little and I got on my hands and knees and grabbed it. I sat there for a second and tried to remember how Jenny gave Fritz a blow job. Yes, she gets pretty descriptive about her sexual activity with Fritz. I finally remember and I tickled the head of Todd's huge cock with my tongue.

"Oh baby, I won't take long to cum!" Todd said and ran his fingers through my hair. I pushed my head into his cock until his head touched the back of my throat, I guess you call that deep throating. I had to go back a little because I gagged a little. I began to suck his cock and my head bobbed as I done it and I could feel Todd's cum go up his cock and his breathing became labored.

"I told you it won't take me long. I haven't masturbated since I met you!" Todd moaned out and then he groaned as his cum entered my mouth. I swallowed the contents and wiped my mouth.

"You had to give a blow job before, that was just too good!" Todd said and I blushed.

"My friend Jenny told me how she gave her man a blow job, I just remembered how she done it!" I said and he chucked.

"Sorry that I cummed so fast. Like I said, I wanted to cum a lot when we either fucked or you sucked my cock," Todd said and I nodded. So, it won't take him about two minutes to cum, good! I want the sex to last a long time. I still feel sort of nervous about having sex. Of course, I am a virgin, but not for long!! We stayed at his dad's a little while longer and Todd said that he was showing me the library and he let me look through the books, which Bob didn't mind. When Todd took us back to his place, he gave me a good night kiss and he smiled. I loved his smile and you know what, I love Todd as well. I wonder if he loves me?


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