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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 22, 2012    Reads: 1,417    Comments: 16    Likes: 8   

**A/N: Hello! Update two of the day! I hope you enjoy this chapter cause things are getting heated up in here with Todd and Savannah! The next few chapters are what Todd calls "Steps" into loving. So, each chapter, he does something new to Savannah. Eventually, they will have sex! I know all of us cannot wait for them to have sex, I am getting excited for her and a few others are as well. My husband thinks this is funny. He watched me write this and he said "If I done this to you, it would kill me!" I laughed my ass off! Well, I'll quit with the chit-chat so you can read! :D :D**

Chapter 5

I knocked on his door and I heard metal music playing inside. I heard something fall and then him cussing at it. Todd ran to the door and when he opened it, he is shirtless and in his pajama pants.

"Well, aren't we comfortable today!" I said and he leaned against the door and smiled at me.

"I wish you would wear something more comfortable as well, come on in!" Todd said and moved out of the way. I walked inside and when the door closed behind me, he pushed me against the door and kissed me. The kiss was passionate and I ran my fingers through his dark hair and moaned into his lips as his tongue dove inside my mouth. His hands started to trail up from my waist to the side of my ribs then the side of my breasts. I jerked back and swallowed nervously.

"Stay calm, I am only going to touch your breasts through your shirt," Todd said and I nodded. When he grabbed my breasts, I sighed and began to moan. It felt so good when he massaged them and he is not even touching me skin-to-skin. I closed my eyes and my head went backwards and hit the door. Todd kissed the base of my neck as he massaged my breast some more. He let go and I whined.

"Later on, I will do much more, but I am hungry, so I am making supper. Go ahead and sit down and watch some TV," Todd said and I nodded. When I sat down on the couch, I touched my breast and I smiled. I know what Todd means by he is going to do more, I will probably be topless, or at least in a bra. Most likely topless completely. How do I feel about being topless in front of a man? I know I will be very nervous, but I need to come out of my shell. I think of myself as I am inside of a walnut shell. Todd is the nutcracker and he is breaking me out of my shell, slowly but surely.

"What are you making for us tonight, Todd?" I yelled into the kitchen.

"Spaghetti with garlic bread, does that sound good to you?" Todd asked.

"Yes, it sure does!" I watched a funny show known as "King of the Hill" and I started to smell the spaghetti and my stomach began to growl. I decided to walk into the kitchen and watch him cook. I am getting lonely as well. I walked over to the counter beside him and jumped up on it and Todd looked at me and laughed.

"What?" I said confused and leaned my head to the side.

"I think you are just adorable sitting up there watching me," Todd said and I giggled. He asked for some spices, which I handed them to him and I helped him break the noodles in half.

"Where did you learn to cook?" I asked and he smiled.

"My mom cooked until the divorce. She taught me a few things and this is the very first thing I learned," Todd said and I smiled.

"You really liked your mom didn't you?"

"Yeah, I sure did. I knew she was upset when I decided to stay in Oak Ridge, but this is my home, not the big city. She understands now, and I talked to her today and I told her about you."

"Uh oh, what does she think about me?" I actually wanted to know how Todd's mom thought about me.

"She is shocked about your age, but when I told her that I really liked you, she called you a keeper. She hopes for the best for us and she will meet you someday."

"Well, I cannot wait to meet her, she sounds like a dignified lady. When will I meet your dad?"

"He doesn't know about you yet. I plan on telling him tonight."

"I still haven't figured out how to tell mom about us when I turn eighteen."

"We got like, what, four months, to think about that. Quit worrying!" Todd leaned over and kissed my nose and he finished cooking. He told me to go to the living room, which I did, and he brought the food in. He has a hefty amount of spaghetti on our plates and my eyes grew.

"Well, my so-called diet is down the toilet!" I said and Todd rolled his eyes.

"Why do you think you are overweight? I don't think you are," Todd said then I rolled my eyes.

"Please, I am a size 12!" I said and he smiled.

"Back in the eighties, size 12 was skinny. Models we're size 12."

"Now they are size 00 and size 12 is considered very fat."

"Not to me, size 18, I consider that fat, but not you. I like curvy women, they look healthy and very happy!" I smiled and we dug into our supper. It tasted very good and we talked about anything we can come up with. When he mentioned my past relationships, I laughed.

"What relationships? The guys I dated before never wanted to be with me. I think they pity me more than they liked me. They never sat down and talked to me. They just kissed me, never wanted to have sex or touch me. I thought for a while, I was not a good girlfriend. When I met you, I learned that they are immature ass holes that goes for looks, not personality." I said and he nodded.

"But I think you are beautiful and you are a very sunny disposition and a very good sense of humor!" Todd said and I blushed.

"Why thank you, I try really hard to be funny!" Todd laughed and when we got done eating, I volunteered to do the dishes, since he cooked. I grabbed our plates and our drinking cups and went to the kitchen. When I started the water, I heard him turn back to MTV and I heard the metal music start again. As I got occupied cleaning the dishes, I didn't realize that the music stopped and I felt two arms wrapped around my waist and I felt a kiss against my cheek.

"When are you going to be done?" Todd said into my neck. I felt his stubble brush against my neck and it tickled and heighten my senses to the max. I never knew facial stubble can turn me on! I pushed my body into his and he wrapped his arms tighter around me. Oh, he is so strong and so warm against my body!

"Hmmm, maybe another five minutes. I just got the pans left," I said and he pulled me closer and rubbed his nose into my hair and then kissed it.

"I wish you would hurry up, I am getting lonely in there."

"I will hurry as fast as my hands can go." He turned me around and pressed me against the countertop. He kissed me with loads of tongue and I felt my bones melt. If I didn't grab his body, I would have fell to the floor from my knees melting. He grabbed my breast again and I didn't hesitate this time. I pushed my upper body to him so I can feel his hands on me more.

"I want to see your breast so bad," Todd said and I turned around and I cannot believe it, I finished the last pair of pans in less than two minutes. I drained and rinsed the sink and Todd smiled. He grabbed my hand and took me to his bedroom. He sat me on the bed and he stood in front of me.

"Step one of loving, Breasts are the first to get loved," Todd said and I nodded. How many steps are there? Three? I can think of breasts, my pussy and then sex. He took my shirt tails off and I pulled my top off. I sat before him in only my bra, and I started to feel nervous. This is the first time I am sitting in front of a man, in only in my bra. In a few moments, I know he will see my breast. I swallowed as he looked at me and then he finally smiled. Todd sat down on the bed and he kissed me lovingly. His lips kissed my lips, then they went to my cheek, my ear, my neck, my collarbone, and the part of my breasts that are showing above my pastel pink bra.

"Are you ready?" Todd asked me. I nodded my head because I am ready for him to see my breast. I want to see his reaction. Todd wrapped his arms around me and unhooked my bra. Unknowingly, I held my arms in front of me to hold my bra up. I felt nervous all of the sudden and he knew I was.

"Relax Savannah, I want to see you so bad. If you are getting scared, I will stop," Todd said and that made me less nervous, so I slowly let my arm down and let my bra fall off my body. I looked up into his eyes and he is staring at my breast.

"They are beautiful, made just for me," Todd said as he reached and grabbed one of my breast. It felt so much better than when he grabbed me when I had clothes on. His index and middle finger made a valley for my nipple and rubbed it until it puckered out. I began to moan and pushed my body to his hands, begging for more of his touch. I never knew how much I loved what he is about to do. He kissed my lips one more time then his head went down. I felt his lips kiss the top of my breast and then, his tongue flicked my nipple. OH MY GOD, it felt so good! I ran my fingers through his hair and pushed his head to feel more of his mouth, and he did just that. His mouth covered my whole nipple and sucked it. I moaned and my pussy ached for him. I know this is just step one, but god lee, I cannot wait for step two and three.

"Oh Todd! This feels…ah…so good!" I moaned and he looked up at me and smiled.

"Step one is defiantly a success, ain't it?" Todd said and I laughed.

"Fuck yeah!" I moaned and then he let go. He grabbed my hand and he looked into my eyes and I knew something is going to happen.

"Do you want to know what it feels like, Savannah?" Todd asked.

"What are you talking about?" I asked confused.

"A cock, do you want to feel what a cock feels like?" I nodded approval and I felt sort of nervous, but like my mama say to me and Cameron, Curiosity killed the cat, but Satisfaction brought it back! He gently pushed my hand pass his pajama pant line and pass his boxers. I felt tense hair at first and then, I felt something smooth, hard and hot. I knew it was huge. I swallowed and I wonder if he is going to take his pants off and let me see it, but he didn't.

"I don't want to rush you into seeing me naked. That will make things too fast for you," Todd said and I relaxed. I let go of his hard cock and he grabbed me and he kissed me again. He took me back to the living room and we cuddled on the couch and watched some more television. Being with Todd is changing me, emotionally. I was just a mere girl that never had a decent boyfriend. Now, slowly, I am becoming what I wanted to be for a long time, a woman. Whatever the next step is, I don't know, maybe there I more sexual things to do other than boobs, pussy and sex itself, but I cannot wait!


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