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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 3, 2012    Reads: 1,133    Comments: 25    Likes: 10   

*A/N: Last chapter everybody! This was finished HOURS ago, but I had clinicals tonight. Thanks everybody for reading this and I hope you stick around and read my new story. I decided to NOT do the teacher/student one yet since there is a couple out. I am going to do a western. I was inspired to do the western by Sandra Brown's books Sunset Embrace and Another Dawn. Those are the books to check out. I know it sounds boring, but I am going to NOT make it boring by making it a an erotica with loads of sex and love, you know me! I will make it very sexual as well because people back then we're just as sexual and horny as us today! I don't have a name yet, but if you have an idea for me, feel free to leave a comment for me! Thank you for all reading this story! This is a better success than Sex and Romance! Sorry that this is kind of short. Oh yeah, do me a favor, look up the song "Play With Me" by Extreme, and I listened to that when I wrote this chapter!*

Chapter 13

*Five Years Later*

"Mommy, I cannot find my car!" My four year old son, Carter, yelled from his room. I am in the dining room feeding my fourteen month old daughter, Gloria, which is about done, so I grabbed her out of her high chair and we walked to her big brothers room. Carter, which is a miniature version of Todd, is giving me a sad look and I sat Gloria down and went to his toy box. I know Carter is going to be just like his father because he loves cars. I grabbed his red car and put it on the floor and my son grew a smile.

"Mommy, you are the best!" Carter said and I smiled. My kids make me smile every day and Todd makes me smile even more. Todd and I got married a week after graduation, actually the same day as Jenny and Fritz. Jenny is a happy mother to a very cute little girl name Analeigh, she is two years old. Annabella had a son also name Michael. Annabella found out the father of her child, which is a truck driver for the lumberyard. They got together and they got married just over a year ago. I got my bachelors degree in journalism online and I work from home for the Knoxville paper. I love working online, I am home with my children and my husband. Todd has expanded his garage to another garage in Oak Ridge and they are taking over the competitors. Denise is now pregnant, which made her mad because she wanted to be pregnant at the same time as me, but she is happy and so is my dad. Mom and Henry broke it off a few months after the car accident, but she is now engaged to a man name Frank. As I picked up Gloria, someone called me and Gloria began to fight me. I grabbed the phone and its Annabella.

"Do you want me to bring Michael over? I bet you need a break from one child," Annabella said and I gladly agreed. I called Jenny and told her to bring Analeigh over and a few minutes later, I seen Michael's cute little blonde hair pop out of the car and ran to the door. He always looked forward to seeing Carter. Right behind Annabella's car is Jenny and Analeigh. Fritz is the manager of a accounting company, and he does work for Henry unfortunately. Analeigh looks like both her mom and dad, she has Fritz's blonde hair and Jenny's green eyes. When Annabella opened the door, Michael ran pass me and Gloria and ran to Carter's room.

"He really wanted to see him today," Annabella said and I smiled. Jenny stood in front of me with Analeigh in her arms and she hid in her mommy's neck.

"Now now Analeigh, don't hide from your auntie Savannah!" I said and she grinned. "Lookie here, it's Gloria!" Gloria looked over at Analeigh and she pointed at her.

"An, an!" Gloria managed to say and Analeigh smiled and reached over to Gloria. Gloria is a mix of me and Todd. She has my jet black hair and Todd's green eyes. I sat Gloria down and Analeigh grabbed Gloria's hand and took her to the living room with all of Gloria's dolls are. Myself, Annabella and Jenny sat in the living room and we are exhausted. Annabella, now Annabella Smith, has gained some weight but she looks really good. I lost some weight, but I come to accept myself to being overweight. Jenny, on the other hand, is still as skinny as a rail.

"You know, I never would have seen us like this five years ago," Annabella said and I leaned my head against my hand.

"Like how?" I asked her.

"You know, getting along and all of us mothers. We are all married and happy as ever. If I would have never figured out Mikey's daddy, I would have never met Brian!" Annabella said and I smiled.

"If it wasn't for your party, I would have never met Todd," I said and Annabella smiled at me.

"Todd and you are still wildly in love as when you first starting dating," Jenny said and I laughed.

"Somedays, he has to keep up with me and sometimes I have to keep up with him. We never figured out how to have sex with two kids under five!" I said and Jenny laughed.

"Fritz and I cannot figured out how to have sex with Analeigh being so active. She has to get her energy from her German side cause I never had so much energy, from what mom told me," Jenny said.

"Carter is a pretty active little boy and I hate to enroll him to pre-k, I will miss him. He is just like his father, calm and very sweet. He loves Gloria to death. Todd and I we're worried to death that he would be jealous of Gloria, but he wasn't. He wanted to help us change her and dress her, but of course we let him help by letting him pick out her outfits. Gloria is like me, she has a temper!" we all laughed and the kids played for a few hours until they had to leave. About an hour later, Todd came home and Carter ran over to him and grabbed his legs.

"Daddy, I missed you!" Carter said and Todd lifted him up and kissed Carter soundly on the cheek. Gloria went to him and she smile cutely at him.

"Daddy!" she said and Todd managed to get her in his arms. Gloria and Carter are very attached to Todd, especially Gloria. She is daddy's little girl.

"I think it's nap time!" I said and Carter whined, but a few seconds later, he let out a huge yawn. Gloria loves naps, so she jumped out of her daddy's arms and ran to her bedroom. I tucked Carter in as Todd tucked Gloria in. When the kids are sound asleep, Todd met me in our bedroom and he is undressing out of his work clothes.

"Those kids are wearing me out!" I said and dropped onto the bed.

"No you are not, Mrs. Middleton!" Todd said and I still smile at the thought of being Savannah Middleton for five years now.

"Are you horny, Mr. Middleton?" I said and I unbutton my blouse, revealing my shear blue bra and opening my legs so he can see my matching panties underneath my skirt.

"Fuck, yes!" Todd said and I can see his huge bulge in his pants. I purred and I watched him strip to nothing and I done the same thing. He kissed me and pressed his naked body next to mine and I pushed him onto the bed. I kissed all the way down to his dense hair surrounding his cock and I licked the base to his head. He moaned and I began to suck on his cock. I love hearing him moan my name and it makes me very wet for him. He begged for me to stop and he asked me to get on the bed and I did. He opened my legs and he began to eat me out slow enough to drive me crazy. I saw my legs against him and he grabbed my breasts and kneaded them as he sucked on my clit.

"Oh my god! Oh my god!" I moaned out and when I squirted all over his face, he stood up and he licked his lips.

"Mmmm, you taste better than ice cream!" Todd said and he leaned down and kissed me, making me taste myself, which turns me on also. Todd grabbed my legs and wrapped them around his waist and he pushed his cock into my pussy. He fucked me hard and fast and he hit my g-spot every time and I moaned and I reached between my legs and rubbed my clit. Todd told me to do this one time a couple of years ago, and I loved it. My orgasms are very strong without doing this, but when I do this, my orgasms take my breath away.

"Make yourself cum, Savannah. Squirt on my cock!" Todd moaned out and I felt the orgasm build up inside me and Todd fucked me harder and deeper and we cum together. I felt his juices fill me up and I felt myself squirt all over his cock. I tried to catch my breath from the very intense orgasm and he got onto his side. He wrapped his arms around me and he kissed the side of my neck.

"I love you so much, Savannah. You gave me everything I wanted in life," Todd said and I turned around and kissed his nose.

"I love you too, and you did as well. You gave me a family and a husband, and I am very blessed," I said and he smiled.

"You gave me a daughter, a son and a wife that loves me dearly." We cuddled so much and I heard a squeak from the door and I looked up and Carter and Gloria is standing there, smiling. They ran over and jumped on the bed and I wrapped my arms around them both and snuggled with them. I love everything about my life now. I have a husband. I am a mother. Also, my husband made me one thing I would thought I would never become, he made me to a woman!


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