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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 2, 2012    Reads: 985    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   

**A/N: Please don't hate me! This chapter is a shocker at the end. I don't want people to come to my house with flaming pitchforks! Enjoy and remember, two more chapters after this one!**

Chapter 11

**Four months later**
Today is my eighteenth birthday. Todd and my parents are going nuts about my party. My birthday is the day before school starts back from Christmas break. Let me catch you up. Annabella is now pregnant, for real! That football player dude she dated, bailed on her as well and so did her cheerleading friends. The rumor has it that the men she fucked at the lumberyard, which I did not tell the school that, is the dad. The ex-boyfriend found out she cheated on him, so he dumped her. Annabella is trying to be my best friend, but she kind of lost that chance with me. I will be her acquaintance, possibly just a friend, but not BEST friend. Jenny and Fritz are not getting busy planning for their wedding in June. Todd and I, well we are back to normal from when y'all last seen us. We are having sex a lot, but not every time we see each other. On Christmas, Todd bought me three sweaters, a beautiful diamond necklace and a bottle of perfume. I bought him cologne, a picture of us when we had Christmas pictures done and a shirt. Todd keeps telling me that my birthday present is better than all three Christmas presents combined. My dad and Denise knows, so I am actually nervous. Jenny and Fritz are the first ones, other than Todd, Dad and Denise, to my party. Jenny jumped on me and kissed my cheek.

"Damn, you are the first one to be eighteen!" Jenny said and I hugged her.

"You will be eighteen in three weeks, be patient!" I said and Fritz hugged me.

"Happy birthday, Savannah. I am already eighteen, so I cannot complain about waiting!" Fritz said in his German accent.

"You know, for a birthday present, you have to teach me some German!" I said and he smiled.

"I sure will!" Todd came over and wrapped his arms around my shoulders and kissed the side of my neck. He pulled me to my bedroom and when the door shut, he began to kiss me hard.

"Todd, we can do this tonight when we have the house alone," I said and his eye glistened like diamonds.

"Or my place!" Todd said and I smiled.

"That too, but we have guests, I need to see them. Mom, Cameron and her new boyfriend is coming over. When is your dad and Heather coming?" I asked him. Yes, my mom finally got herself a man. His name is Henry and he is really nice. He is an accountant, and that's all I really know about him. Well, he does treat my mom really good.

"They said they will be here around two forty, that's in fifteen minutes," Todd said and he wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me closer to him. I still cannot believe I been with Todd for over four months now and I am head over hills for him, and so is he with me. He kissed my neck and his hands went straight to my pussy and cupped me in his hands. He can feel the wetness and heat from my arousal and he groaned.

"Fuck, I need you so bad!" Todd said and I smiled.

"Wanna quickie?" I said and he pushed me on the bed and took my pants off and my underwear. He slid his pants down far enough so he can be comfortable to fuck me. He pushed himself inside me and the head of his cock stroke my g-spot, which made me writhe and moan underneath him.

"Fuck, fuck!" I moaned and we came at the same time. I heard my dad saying hello to Bob and Heather, so we rushed our clothes on and ran to the living room. I kissed Bob's cheek and hugged Heather.

"Happy birthday, Savannah!" Heather said handing me a present and I put it by the other presents on the table. Mom and Henry showed up hand and hand and Cameron is behind them on his PSP game. I laughed and rubbed the top of his head.

"Nice to see you, punk!" I said and he smiled.

"Happy birthday big sis!" Cameron said and walked to the living room. I hugged mom and she smiled at Henry.

"Henry, this is my wonderful daughter, Savannah and her boyfriend, Todd," my mom said and Henry shook both our hands.

"It's nice to finally meet y'all two, Mary cannot stop talking about the two of you," Henry said and I smiled. He has brown hair with a little gray streaks, green eyes and he has a nice build. Denise yelled for everybody to come to the dining room and we began to eat some food. After everybody ate, mom and Denise, which they sort of got along since Denise told me about what REALLY happened with my parents, carried my birthday cake together.

"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday to Savannah. Happy birthday to you!" Everyone sang.

"AND MANY MORE!!!" Jenny added which everyone laughed. I got to cut the cake and everyone sat down and ate cake. My party turned out great. After everybody ate, my dad and Todd carried my presents to the living room where I sat in the recliner. I got some clothes, more perfume, jewelry, intimate bra and panties (thanks mom!), but I began to freak out. Where is Todd's present?

"Did you open everything, Savannah?" Todd asked me.

"I think I have, but where is yours? Did you say you got me something?" I said and he grabbed something from his back pocket and then, he got on one knee in front of me. My heart began to race and butterflies began to race in my belly.

"Savannah, I love you so much, you are the only woman I want in my life…" Todd said as he brought around a navy colored velvet box and opened it. Inside the box is the ring I looked at in the store when he took me four months ago.

"Savannah May Loftis, will you be my wife?" Todd said and everyone held their breath around me. I began to cry and I nodded my head to tell him yes, but he couldn't tell.

"Oh yes, yes I will marry you!" I cried out and everyone cheered. Todd put the ring on my left ring finger and I jumped on top of him and kissed him. We fell to the floor and as everybody cheered on for us, we made out.

"I love you so much, Todd," I said and he smiled and ran his fingers through my black hair.

"I love you too, and there is more to this present," Todd said and I stood up and gave him a puzzled look.

"How can there be more? Me being engaged to you is the best present I ever had!" I said and he opened my hand and placed a gold key in my hand.

"Your dad hooked us up with our first home. We move in tonight, well us physically but our stuff will be there tomorrow," Todd said and I cried even more. I am now getting married to the love of my life and I am going to move in with him tonight!

"Oh my God, this is awesome!" I said wiping tears from my eyes. Jenny hugged me and I felt her smile in my hair.

"You deserve this, Savannah and you know it. Think about it, four months ago, you thought no man will want you. Now, you are getting married to the love of your life," Jenny said and I wiped tears from my eyes.

"I am blessed alright!" I said and the party began to roll again. We danced and had fun till at least ten that night and that's when everything began to start. I waited till everybody left and the only people in my house are myself, Todd, mom, dad, Henry, Cameron and Denise.

"So, are you sure y'all want to move out tonight? It's pretty late and it's starting to snow harder," my dad asked.

"Yes dad, I want to move out tonight. Tomorrow is a pretty busy day," I said and I gave all my good bye kisses to everyone but Henry, that would be awkward. I waved at everyone from the car and we began going down the road and we started to go to the countryside. Todd always known that I wanted to live out in the country, so this is perfect. I could not see the pastures that is covered with snow. Todd turned on the radio and I got the greatest news…

"Anderson County Schools are cancelled for tomorrow due to snowy conditions," the announcer said and I laughed.

"Another birthday present for me!" I said and Todd laughed. I scooted closer to him and he wrapped his arms around me and we stared into the snowy road and I began to get scared. I always hated riding or driving in the snow, but if we got to do it, just be careful. Todd and I looked at each other and he smiled.

"Love you," He said and I smiled.

"Love you too," I said and I turned my head and I seen a deer.

"WATCH OUT!" I screamed and I heard the tires squeal and my world got twisted and turned as the car done cartwheels down the road.


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