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Make Me a Woman

Novel By: Nikkibeth

(FINISHED) Savannah Loftis is a 17 year old girl that doesn't think too highly of herself due to her weight. She meets 24 year old Todd Middleton and he thinks that she is beautiful and not fat. Todd slowly makes Savannah realize her natural beauty, and they fall in love in the process. He does take her virginity and makes her feel like she should be, beautiful and a woman. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 1, 2012    Reads: 1,078    Comments: 10    Likes: 7   

*A/N: Hey everybody! There is only three more chapters! I was planning to have something HUGE happen, but I decided not to cause it would've been ugly! I decided to quit the polls because only 5 people voted. So my next story is going to be any of those three! I am already brainstorming it right now! Enjoy reading Oh yeah, you find out something about a family member in here that might shock you!*

Chapter 10

The next few weeks has been good. Annabella has not bothered me, she actually has been quite friendly. She knows I will stick to my word if she messes with my man! My dad and Todd are getting along great, like best friends great. Whenever dad thinks Todd needs to get away from me for a few hours, he takes him to a bar and have a few drinks. Mom keeps inviting Todd, Bob and Jennifer to dinner practically every weekend. Y'all should have seen my parents when I told them that I am not a virgin anymore. My dad freaked out the most. My mom cared just a little, but she knew that we would have sex. My dad bought me five boxes of pregnancy tests, which I am not and he bought about ten boxes of condoms. Todd just laughed and took the gift.

"Please use them, I don't want Savannah to get pregnant when she is in high school. She can get pregnant the day after graduation though!" My dad said and I laughed. I also decided to move in with my dad because he lives A LOT closer to Todd and to the high school. Todd doesn't have to drive across town to get me then drive a ways to take me to school. Mom didn't like the idea of me moving with my dad, but I did promise her that I will visit her every weekend. My step mom, her name is Denise, is very sweet. She is thirty-three years old and she is blonde bomb shell with big boobs. I hate to admit, I see more love between my dad and Denise than when he was with my mom. One a rainy day after school, Todd had to stay over due to a car accident. Jenny took me home and it's just me and Denise. She is in the kitchen putting a meat loaf in the oven and I am watching television. She sat down beside me and she smiled at me.

"So, how was school?" Denise asked me.

"Eh, same ol', same ol' high school stuff," I said and she nodded.

"You don't like me that much, don't you?" I looked at her and her gorgeous skinny body and beautiful looks. I know that I am beautiful too, but I can see her at my high school as someone as Annabella, but not a whore.

"It's not that, Denise, I like you but…" I tried to finish and she nodded.

"I split your parents apart, I know. When I met your father, he was hurt and confused." My dad hurt? Did my mom do something to him?

"What do you mean dad was hurt?" I asked her and she sighed.

"Did your mom ever tell you that she cheated on him before he met me? She actually got pregnant and had a miscarriage. Your dad thought it was his baby the whole time. A few months after the miscarriage, Mary admitted that she has been sleeping with her boss for a few months now and the condom broke one day and that's how she got pregnant. Vince was very, very hurt. He went to the bar I bartend part time and I gave him a drink. After that, he came by the bar every night and we hit it off. We seen each other for a few years and you know, your parents got the divorce and we got married." I couldn't believe my ears. My mom cheated on my dad? No wonder why she has been depressed all these years! That miscarriage was almost twelve years ago! She knew she ruined the marriage and dad's love, not him!

"Mom told me this whole time that dad fell out of love with her or never loved her in the first place," I said and Denise grabbed my hand and she smiled.

"Your father loved Mary more than life itself. That's the only thing he talked about with me at first. He talked about you, he talked about your mom and how she deceived him. He even thought about taking his own life when he realized the baby she miscarried was not his. I talked him out of it by telling him that he has his daughter to take care of and love," Denise said and I smiled. Denise is not the enemy here, she actually saved my dad's life. I was way too young to remember when my dad became depressed, but I do remember him being sad all the time. I just thought he was sad because of the baby dying.

"Denise, I like you and I thank you for saving my dad," I said and she hugged me.

"I didn't save him, you did!" Denise said and I smiled. Todd came over to my house a few hours later and immediately grabbed me and kissed me. Denise watched us with loving eyes and a huge smile.

"Y'all remind me of Vince and I when we first started dating. He always threw me around like that and kissed me when we meet," Denise said and I put my head on Todd's shoulder and ran his fingers through my hair. Denise ran to the kitchen and pulled the meat loaf out of the oven and made everybody's plates. Todd ate with us and told us about the five car pileup on the highway.

"We have not had a bad of an accident since I started, so I had my work cut out," Todd said and I nodded.

"Are you wore out?" I asked and winked at him and he smiled.

"Not really." Todd's hand went underneath the table and squeezed my inner thigh. Todd and I has cut down on our sex, a lot really. Since my parents found out about us, we went from fucking every time we seen each other to having sex only on the weekends. We do have a lot of sex, but for some reason, it worried me. I will bring it up tonight, Dad is letting Todd spend the night. When dad came home, all four of us watched movies from Netflix and Todd is just holding my hand, JUST holding my hand. My dad and Denise cannot stop kissing each other and I sighed. My dad jerked and looked at us and frowned.

"Want us to quit?" my dad said.

"No, don't quit for us, I am going to my room anyways, I am tired," I said and I walked to my room and I know nobody is following me. I closed the door behind me and went to my bed. Why am I feeling like this? Why do I feel like Todd doesn't want me anymore? We only had sex four times before we slowed down. I am a teenager with raging hormones, I want to explore and learn. Todd walked into my room and he gave me a puzzled look.

"What is wrong, Savannah?" Todd asked sliding his hands into his pockets.

"Nothing is wrong, I just wanted to give them their privacy," I mumbled and looked down.

"Baby, I know something is wrong, I can see it in your eyes." Damn, he can read me like a book!

"If you are curious, you stop having sex with me a lot. We we're a bunch of animals and now, we have sex two days a week and that is on the weekends. I feel like you are getting tired of me," I said and he looked hurt.

"I will never get tired of you, Savannah. I just don't want our relationship and love to be based on sex. I am sorry if I slowed down on you way too quick," Todd said and I looked up at him.

"Are you sure? You are not telling me this because you want me to feel better?"

"Speaking of changes, your attitude changed too. You are acting like miss bad ass at school. I know, Jenny tells me."

"Miss bad ass? I just smart off to the whore of the school here and there. I keep her in line because she has the hots for you!" Why is our voices raising up? Why are we yelling at each other?

"Women will look at me, Savannah and I seen men look at you all the time. Do I get mad? No! As long they are just looking and not touching, what is the harm done?"

"I don't want my only man I ever loved other than my brother and my dad to go to another woman!"

"I am not going anywhere, Savannah! I love you, you are the only woman I ever loved in my entire life! Women and men stare at each other every day, its called hormones! They are not cheating if they are looking!"

"Didn't you hear me, Todd Middleton? I am scared to lose you if another woman looks at you, especially Annabella Gregory!"

"Annabella is nothing but a fucking whore, why would I want her?"

"Cause she is a whole lot prettier and lot more experienced in fucking than me! Due to the slowing down of sex, I cannot learn to please you!"

"Do you know how much I get fucking tired of hearing you down yourself like that? You are a beautiful woman, Savannah and you please me every time we make love!"

"Then why don't we have sex more often? Let me learn!"

"Fine, you want to have sex, then lets do it!" Todd took his shirt off then his pants. He is still in his boxers when he walked over and almost ripped my shirt and pants off. When I stood in front of him in only my bra and thong, he tried to untie my bra. I held it against me when I felt it loosen and he laughed.

"You are one strange girl, you know that? You we're just complaining about not having sex often and you are shying away from me!" Todd said and he loosened my arms and let my bra fall. He took my thong off then his boxers and pushed me onto the bed and let his head of his cock tease me. I began to cry because I wondered if this is rape or not. I never felt so scared in my life, and then, Todd knew I was scared. He jerked up and looked me into my tear glistened eyes and he frowned.

"Savannah, I would never hurt you!" Todd said and I pushed him up and looked at him.

"Why would you do that to me? You about raped me!" I cried out.

"I would never rape you, baby! I love you so much! Please forgive me! I was just mad about our fight!" I dangled my legs on the side of the bed and looked at the floor. I just had my first fight with Todd and it was not fun. It was over something as stupid as sex.

"I'm so sorry, Todd; I should have not mentioned anything about sex," I said and he cupped my chin into his hand and pulled me to face him. He gently kissed me and I wrapped my arms around him and he pulled me down underneath him. I needed him so much, I wanted to feel his love. Fuck the preliminaries! I wrapped my naked legs around him and he spit into my pussy to make it wet, which I am already soaked for him. He pushed himself into me and he began to fuck me nice and slow. I leaned forward and bit into his shoulder to hide my moans and he began to fuck me faster and harder.

"Please Todd, love me!" I moaned out and he kissed my nape of my neck and smiled.

"I love you, I love you!" Todd said and I felt my legs twitch from my oncoming orgasm and I felt him tense up and thrust even harder in me. We cum at the same time and he got off of me. He wrapped me into his arms and we went to sleep happy and forgiven each other.


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