**A/N: Hello everybody! I wanted to wait a few days before I released this story, but I kind of got impatient! I wanted to tell you about this story, espicially the main character. I am not making fun of overweight people. I am overweight myself. She is not really overweight, maybe just chubby. You know how teenagers are, they are pure body image and she feels ugly and she is really not. So, please don't comment that I mean for making her feel like that, I felt like her when I was her age! Thank you! Oh yeah, go to my profile and the character pictures are there :D**
"Savannah Loftis, what the fuck is wrong with you?" my friend, Jennifer Sparks, asked me during our lunch break at school.
"What do you mean, what the fuck is wrong with me? I don't want
to go to a party!" I said to her and continued to eat my chili
cheese hot dog.
"It's not just a party, it's Annabella Gregory's party and she
actually invited YOU to the party!" Jenny said to
"And why would a girl like Annabella invite me? She just wants to
humiliate me in front of the school body!" Let me introduce you
to myself. My name is Savannah Loftis. I am seventeen years old,
a high school senior and I never had a boyfriend that lasted
long. You know why I never had a real boyfriend? I am not really
attractive. Well, people say I am pretty, but I don't believe it.
I have raven black hair, light green eyes with gold flakes, and I
am a size 12. What part of me that doesn't appeal to guys? Me
being overweight. I am about twenty pounds overweight and I have
chubby thighs and a not skinny belly. My ass is huge and my boobs
are big also.
"Just because Annabella made fun of you on our freshman year
doesn't mean she will do the same thing now. People grow up!"
Jenny said and I looked at her beautifully sculpted body. She is
average, not skinny as a rail, but not fat like me. She has a
wonderful boyfriend since our sophomore year name Fritz Schmidt.
Yes, he is German, he was a German foreign exchange student. When
he came over here to Oak Ridge, Tennessee, he fell MADLY in love
with Jenny. He decided to stay here with her. Now, they are
engaged to get married after we graduate and I'm the maid of
honor. Fritz came over and sat beside Jenny and he wrapped his
arm around her.
"May I take Jen away from you for a bit?" Fritz said in his
German accent. His blonde hair and blue eyes shined when he seen
Jenny. I think they look so cute together. Jenny has chestnut
colored hair with light brown eyes and like I said before, she is
"Sure, why not!" I said and they ran off, giggling at each other.
I stood up and grabbed my tray and took it to the lunch lady. As
I walked back to my table, Annabella walked up to me with her
beautiful blonde hair and sculpted body frame and smiled at
"Are you coming to my party or not, Savannah?" She asked me with
her hands on her hips.
"I got things to do tonight," I said and she
"What, stuff your face in with food?" her other friends laughed
and I rolled my eyes. "Listen Loftis, you are coming to my party.
There will be beer and hot older guys there," She
"Are you going to embarrass me?"
"Why fuck no! I am trying to look good for the student body,
after all, I am the student body president!" Annabella smiled and
I sighed and gave in.
"All right, I will go, what time should I be there?" I said and
"Party starts at eight, see you there!" Annabella walked away and
her sexy football player boyfriend, Adam, grabbed her ass and she
giggled like a little girl. I rolled my eyes and when I turned
around, Jenny is behind me.
"I couldn't talk you into going but she did. What did she say to
make you go?" Jenny asked me. Fritz is behind her, holding her by
"The hot guys?" I said and she laughed.
"Well, that would've got me to go, but I got my Fritz!" Jenny
turned around and kissed her boyfriend.
"Wait, you are not going?" I said and she
"Of course not silly! Fritz has reservations at this place in
Knoxville for a week now! You can go to this party alone!" I
groaned in disgust but I cannot go to Annabella and tell her I
can't go. I love Jenny and I hate her at the same
An hour before the party, I ran to my closet and tried to find
something that will look good. Thanks to my weight, I cannot wear
short skirts or low cut tops like Annabella and Jennifer. I found
a pretty top I wore to a party with my family and the skirt to go
with it. I went to my vanity station and I brushed my hair out
and made sure my makeup looks good. My mom, Mary, came in and she
sat on my bed. My mom is a full figure woman, but she became like
that due to giving birth to me and my little brother,
"So, you are going to a party. Will there be drinking?" My mom
said and I have to lie. I kind of want to go to this party, and I
don't know why.
"Of course not, its just a party!" I said and I can sense that my
mom knows that I am lying, but she let it go.
"Be careful honey!" she said and kissed my forehead. When it
became time to go to the party, I ran out the door and ran down
the street since Annabella lived down the street from me. I heard
loud rap music coming out of the house and a group of already
drinking teens are on her porch. I squeezed my way by and I
walked into a huge group of dancing teens. I walked into the
kitchen and Annabella is standing there passing out
"Oh, Savannah, want a slice of pizza or a beer?" She said and
everybody laughed. I grabbed the beer and drank it down. I hated
the taste of it, but it felt good to drink it front of Annabella
and her group of cheerleaders.
"Another one please?" I asked and she gladly gave me one and she
has a surprised look on her face. I walked into the dance area
and after I finished drinking that beer, I began to dance. I
actually had fun. I danced, talked to a few people, met a few
older guys that are very hot. But one stood out to me. His dark
hair and green eyes stood out to me like a fire in the middle of
the snow. He is sitting on the couch, drinking a beer and
ignoring all the teenage girls hitting on him. I didn't know how
to approach him, so I decided to check him out without him
noticing. When I wanted another beer, I walked pass him and I can
smell his cologne and it heighten my senses. Annabella is not in
the kitchen handing out beers and I opened the refrigerator and
grabbed two beers. When I turned around, he is standing there in
front of me.
"H-hello!" I stuttered out.
"Hello there, is that for me?" He asked and I gave him the
"You can have it, it was really for me." I opened the fridge
again and grabbed another beer and I heard him
"I seen you check me out in there," he said and my heart raced. I
closed the fridge door with my ass and looked into his eyes which
made me melt.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make it obvious!" I said and I tried
to leave, but he lightly touched my shoulder.
"I'm Todd Middleton by the way," he said and I
"Savannah Loftis, I'm a senior," I said and he
"Wow, so you are seventeen or eighteen?" Todd
"I am twenty-four years old." Wow, Annabella is right about older
men being at her party. I don't care what age he is, Todd is one
fucking good looking man!
"Oh Savannnahhhhh!" Annabella yelled and wobbled into the kitchen
and wrapped her arm around my shoulder. "This is my dad's bosses
son, Todd. Ain't he a hottie?" Annabella said and I knew she is
drunk, she would never be this nice to me.
"Yes, he is very good looking," I said looking at him and he
"Come party with me, Savannah!" Annabella said and I walked with
her, looking back at Todd's smiling face and we danced together.
Every time Annabella got a beer, she got me one too, so I ended
up getting drunk as well. Around midnight, I decided to try to
leave but my world is tilting and I felt so chipper and
"Don't leave yet, Savannah!" Annabella said and I looked down at
her and sat beside her on the floor.
"I have to go home or my mom would…WORRY!" I blurted out the word
worry. She ended up passing out on the floor and I decided that
she deserves to go to her bedroom. I tried to lift her off the
floor and she is heavy. I thought I was fat! Todd seen me try to
lift her up and I began laughing because its so funny how I
cannot lift a girl that is a lot smaller than
"Having trouble, Savannah?" Todd said and I began to
"She is so fat, and I thought I was fat!" I
"You are not fat, Savannah!" Todd said and I blushed. He lifted
Annabella over his shoulder and took her to her bedroom. I
watched him put her into her bed and tucked her in. I tried to
walk down the stairs but my legs felt like pudding, so I slid
down the stairs. Todd caught me and I
"Whoops, clumsy me!" I said and he walked me to the door. I tried
to walk off the porch, but I fell again and this time it hurt. I
wailed in pain and Todd is behind me and put his arm around me to
"Did you drive?" Todd asked me. I shook my head no. "Do you live
"Yeah, I'll show you!" I said and he walked me down the street
and I pointed out my house and he walked a little
"I think somebody is up, the lights are on!" Todd said and I
started to freak out.
"Oh shit, oh shit, my mom is up! She will see you!" I said and he
"I think I am the least of her problems, I think seeing you drunk
will be the problem!" he said and I knew he is right. He helped
me up the porch and he knocked on the door. I thought he would
run off, but he help me stand up. My mom knocked on the door and
I waved at my mom and burped really loudly when I tried to say
hey to her and laughed because I burped.
"Mrs. Loftis, your daughter got drunk at the party and I escorted
her home," Todd said and I hit on his chest and
"So you are sexy AND a gentleman!" I said and began
"Thank you young man, if you don't mind, can you take her to her
bedroom and get her in bed," my mom asked and he walked me to my
room and by the time I felt my fluffy pillows, I am feeling
"When will I see you again, Todd?" I asked
"If you remember me, soon. I will write down where I work," Todd said and he found a sheet of paper and I fell asleep after that…