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Somewhere Inside the Tree House

Novel By: Marzy Dotes

Charlie and Colton were both footloose and fancy free and lying inside a pumpkin patch...wondering what to do next. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Sep 28, 2013    Reads: 413    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

Charlie went to Lois' house to get ready for the night out at the Lonely Rider. She picked a nice short red dress that clung to her body, and some short heels.

Underneath she wore matching black silk panties with her lacy bra, because she knew that she and Colton wouldn't be hanging out there with the others very long.

Lois wore some blue number and swore at the mirror as she brushed her hair.

"I don't know if I can ever get it right," she said, "I want to look perfect when I see Brad at the club. Maybe away from the ranch we'll have a chance."

Charlie bit her lip not wanting to tell her that Brad wasn't pursuing her. She hoped he'd do that on his own at some point before this went much further. He'd been so graphic when he talked about what he did expect from his women and it'd left her feeling on edge. Uncomfortable that he shared all that with her and yet…excited in some strange way. She imagined he'd be what Lois might call a hell of a ride. But she figured he'd pick his woman out soon enough and keep himself quite busy with her.

"So you and Colton going to hang around or head on out for some serious horizontal action?"

Charlie smiled.

"Head on out…he's got a spare cabin on his property."

Lois smiled.

"I imagine it's going to be so hot, you've waited so long."

"I hope so…I think he's really eager…with the notes and the texts lately…and the flowers."

Lois's mouth opened.

"Yeah so he's sending you texts? What do they say? So I can get some ideas with Brad."

She felt self-conscious talking about them suddenly as they were personal and very intimate. But she implored her further.

"Just that he wants to fuck me in the worst way, can't wait until it happens. We did some sexting."

Lois sighed.

"How cool and sort of romantic. Well tonight you'll both get what you want."

"Yeah…god I can't wait. I'm so damn horny…"

Lois chuckled.

"Well, at least one of us will get it. I really wish Brad would treat me like that."

Charlie just didn't know how to respond…god, it'd been embarrassing enough that Brad had known she'd gotten herself off in the barn. She'd have to be more careful for sure.

"We'd better get going soon," she said, "I'll ride with you but I'm going home with Colton."

Lois nodded and after some final touches, they headed to the car.

The club was crowded with couples dancing on the floor and others hanging near the bar. Colton and Charlie found a seat not wanting to stay long. Just do some dancing, a little drinking before heading back to the cabin.

"I'll go get us some drinks."

She nodded and she watched as Lois went up and did some dancing. All alone at first but then a local guy joined with her. I knew she hoped that Brad was watching her but he was busy drinking whisky and talking with the other hands in the corner.

Lois walked on over.

"Man it's crowded out there tonight…but great music. I couldn't see Brad anywhere."

Charlie wanted to roll her eyes. Lois had the man on the brain. It was going to get rough for a while when she realized he wasn't into her.

Her phone vibrated. A text appeared.

"I'm so damn horny…I want to fuck you so bad…"

She looked for the ID and phone number but it said "Unavailable". Was it Colton eager about tonight and doing some more texting?

Lois continued talking.

"So I'm thinking if I just ask him to dance with me is that too forward?"

Charlie frowned.


She typed back.

"Colton u texting me?"

A short delay.

"You wearing panties underneath that dress?"

She smiled. It had to be him playing a joke on her. Who else would be sexting her? It's not like she had a wealth of guys in her life wanting to get into her panties.

"Wouldn't you like to know?"

A response.

"I'll find out...soon enough…"

A smile crossed her mouth while Lois continued oblivious.

"I really want to get him to want me," she said, "I think he's just worried about my father."

Charlie frowned.

"I doubt it. Nothing seems to faze Brad."

Lois frowned back at her.

"How do you know?"

Charlie sighed.

"I just do…"

She texted back.

"I imagine you will…I can't wait until we're out of here."

Another popped up.

"I can't wait until I have you all to myself and I can fuck you all night long…"

Charlie smiled and then felt herself getting wet. Another text popped up.

"You need a lot of good fucking…"

A moment later Colton headed towards Charlie with both of their drinks and handed one to her. She slipped her phone back in her purse. She sipped her beer.

"We'll stay for a bit, listen to some music and then head on back."

Charlie nodded, drinking her beer.

"Sounds great. I can't wait for us to be alone. It's getting pretty warm in here don't you think?"

Colton scratched the back of his neck.

"A bit…lots of people here," he said, "We'll stay a little longer and then head on out."

She nodded sipping her beer as she watched the people milling around. Lois went to talk to some friends and to do more flirting with Brad who stayed with his crowd.

Colton sat looking deep in thought. She wondered if anything were on his mind.

"What is it? Something bothering you?"

He shook his head.

"Nah just got to handle a bunch of invoices on bills due on the ranch," he said, "I'm getting more and more responsibility until I go to school in the fall."

She smiled.

"Ah college…that'll be cool. And we're only going to be two hours apart."

He hedged.

"My daddy wants me to go to Univ. of Wyoming…ranching management program there with a minor in Marketing."

Charlie bit her lip.

"But that's…damn are you going to do it?"

He didn't look too happy.

"Thinking about it…look I know it's going to put us further apart Charlie but it's a great program."

She swallowed my disappointment.

"No…you need to go for it. Do it if it's what you want…you are running the ranch someday."

He sighed finishing his beer.

"Guess we can go now."

She wished he sounded more thrilled. But damn she felt on edge all night and horny, wanting to get her hands on him at last. Once they got to the cabin and were alone together.

But first things first. She wanted to freshen up a bit.

"I'll be back in a moment…"

She kissed him on the mouth, slowly and teasingly before heading off to the restroom. He watched her go and his own excitement started to build.

Charlie freshened up in the bathroom, her makeup what little she wore and ran a brush through her hair. She liked how she looked and headed back to Colton who'd be waiting for her and hopefully eager to head back to the ranch for a night of loving in between the sheets.

She came out of the room fast and smacked into a hard bodied man walking. He gripped her arms and for a moment, she felt molded to him…all hardness to her softness and the smell of musk mixed with aftershave.


She knew she'd ran smack into Brad and pulled away from him.

"Sorry wasn't looking…"

He chuckled.

"No harm done…guess you're in a hurry to get back to him…"


"Colton, he brought you here for some liquor and some foreplay and now you're heading home for the main event."

She bristled. God, he was so crude, had he always been this way or was it some new behavior he used on her?

"Whatever Brad excuse me…"

He blocked her path with his body.

"You in a hurry to get back to him?"

She just started at him, wondering what he was up to now.

"Well yeah…now get out of my way…"

He moved out of her path and she just narrowed her eyes at him.

"What's with you? I mean Lois says you need some...but…"

He tilted his face looking at her.

"Need some what…just what is it that I need Charlie?"

She grew a bit flustered.

"I didn't say it…she did…."

He leaned against the wall.

"But you're the one telling me…so what is it I need? I don't think you really have any idea do you?"

She didn't…she wouldn't take the bait.

"I have to go…Colton's waiting for me…"

Brad smiled easily enough.

"Run along then….like I told you I hope he appreciates it."

She left Brad and a bit unsettled, she tried to compose herself by the time she got back to where Colton sat at the table waiting for her.

"I've been waiting…what took you so long?"

She shrugged and then smiled at him. They went outside into the cool summer night, the moon starting to shine overhead. His truck waited and they got inside to head back to the ranch.

He started his truck to head back to the ranch and turned the corner. The truck skidded to a stop to avoid hitting a truck that had crashed into another car in the middle of the road.


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