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Somewhere Inside the Tree House

Novel By: Marzy Dotes

Charlie and Colton were both footloose and fancy free and lying inside a pumpkin patch...wondering what to do next. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Sep 27, 2013    Reads: 362    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

Charlie waited in the treehouse another hour, hot and horny especially after texting with Colton but he still hadn't shown up in person with his hard on to fill her up as he'd promised.

What the hell had happened to him?

Finally the phone vibrated and she picked it up.


Relief filled her with a small dose of irritation.

"Colton is that you?"

"Yeah…sorry I couldn't make it," he said, "My dad had to rush out and help at Tom's ranch with some paperwork to get signed on the land deal. Then he got had an emergency and had to tend to it so he sent me instead."

The back of her neck prickled. Tom was one of the most prominent bankers. He was also Trina's daddy She sat down with the phone in her hand.

"So you're still there or on your way back?"

"I'm ready to go but it's getting late…Trina and I spent an hour doing an assessment calculation on another payment plan."


He cleared his throat.

"Yeah…she's got the head for numbers after all. But it's all done with but we've all got an early morning so I thought I'd head on home."

"Okay…I guess you're right but I was so ready for this…for us to finally be alone so we could…"

"I know Charlie and I'm sorry. I'll make it up to you. I promise."

She clicked off my phone and went to leave the treehouse to head back to her house in the darkness. She walked past the barn and thought she'd go inside it. It seemed deserted and she walked inside of it hearing the soft sounds of a row of horses in stalls setting for the night.

She felt so damn frustrated, all this restless energy and need coursed through her. Her skin tingled, the familiar low ache in her belly…she needed what Colton was going to give her tonight. Instead he'd been called off on business and had spent time working with his ex-Trina of all people. Charlie knew the girl wanted him back since dumping her last boyfriend.

Pacing around the barn didn't do much for her so she decided to climb up into the loft and just spend some time alone before heading back to the house. So she went up there and lay on the mattress, sighing as she felt it cushion her.

Tonight should have been spent in the treehouse with her thighs open to accept the weight of Colton's body between them, clinging him to her as he moved against her, opening up her pussy so his cock slid in slick and smooth before he started thrusting in his rhythm against her.

Just thinking of that woke up every fiber in her body and her hands moved of their own volition. One hand caressing her nipples riding them, teasing them to harden beneath the touch of her fingers, the other sliding beneath the hem of her panties, to where the slickness awaited, for her own loving. Closing her eyes, she rode her fingers, parting her rosy lips, tugging on them, before tracing the seam in between them.

She gasped, she'd been so engorged with desire that it didn't take much to get her breathing harder, little mew sounds slipping from her mouth.

Pinching her nipples, she imagined Colton's hot wet mouth caressing them, nipping at them just enough to sharpen the pleasure with a trace of pain. Her legs splayed open as she rode in between the lips of her pussy teasing the opening. God, she wanted, no she needed to be penetrated by a man's cock right now, stretching her wide open, sliding deliciously rubbing inside of her. Her pelvis arched out as a sharp cry escaped from her as she brushed her clit with the side of a finger.

She rubbed her clit and bit her lip to keep quiet until she realized there was no one here to hear her cry out in pleasure. Her hips rising higher, faster daring her fingers to thrust inside of where she'd needed Colton earlier.

"Oh god…fuck me…god I need it…oh god…god…"

She gasped in delight as she thrust one finger then two inside her pussy, slick with her own desire. Her hips gyrating to meet each thrust of her fingers in heady anticipation.

"Fuck me harder…fuck me hard…god I can't…no…."

Her breathing quickened as did the heart beating inside her chest. Harder, faster, hips moving, legs cramping with each thrust upward…faster, harder and then…she closed her eyes as she felt shards of pleasure bursting inside her…almost unbearable.

"Oh god yes…yes…yess….."

Convulsions and ripples beginning in her pussy and undulating outward spreading through her body. She sank back down, sated, her muscles turning to jelly as the pleasure intensified in waves before the inevitable ebbing.

She sighed and felt elated but then…oh god what had gotten into her? She had been excited when she'd been with Colton and he'd done things to her and she to him but this…had been different…wild and yet exciting.

Colton would love this side of her if she'd share it with him. She couldn't wait until they were back together in the same place alone.

She'd adjusted her clothing and gotten up to go down the ladder of the loft. The barn remained as dark and quiet as it had been so she slipped out of it into the night.

Walking back she heard some talking in the distance and saw Duke and Brad standing by the fence where a small group of horses grazed in the pasture.

"So you going to go through with it?"

Brad looked at Duke.

"Yeah…just picking the right time. Got to be careful. Don't want to get into trouble."

Duke laughed.

"You live dangerously my friend. I don't know if I'd make a play for her."

Charlie frowned, wondering what they were talking about and then remembering Lois. Damn it looked like her feelings for Brad just might be mutual after all.

"I hope she knows what she's in for with me."

More laughter. Charlie rolled her eyes, thinking some men just liked to brag like that about what they could to a woman. Maybe all talk no action. She smiled, Colton was all action and she couldn't wait to be with him again.

"Hi Charlie…"

She looked up and saw both men looking at her.

"Hi…I'm just heading back to the house."

Brad nodded.

"Heard Colton got called out on business. Tough break."

She bristled but hid it.

"That's part of being on a ranch. We'll see each other tomorrow."

"He still heading to the stock auction coming up?"

She nodded.

"It's only four days…"

Brad licked a lip.

"Four nights….I'm sure you'll find some way to pass the time."

She narrowed her eyes not knowing what he was getting at. Sometimes he acted in a way to rile her up but she didn't take the bait.

"I will…Lois will too. We're planning on some girls' nights anyway."

He didn't seem perturbed by her dropping her name like that.

"I see you left the barn. Everything all right in there?"

She nodded nonchalantly.

"Everything's just fine. I'll see you both in the morning."

She walked away thinking she might need to have a talk with Lois about Brad's intentions towards her. Her friend might have her hands full with that one.

Charlie got up and got dressed in her work clothes grabbing some breakfast before leaving the house to meet the others. Outside her door she found some flowers wrapped in plastic wrapping and picked them up. She smelled their heavenly scent and smiled.

Colton, how sweet of him, was this his way of asking for forgiveness last night? She'd do that, no problem. She hadn't liked the fact that Trina had been working with him but she wasn't the jealous type.

An envelope came with it.

"Sorry I couldn't be up there with you last night. You are seriously hot and damn fuckable. I'll make it up to you…and that sweet pussy soon."

She put the letter back in the envelope feeling warm all of a sudden. He was certainly feeling amorous this morning. Obviously she wasn't the only one getting worked up.

After putting the flowers in water in the kitchen, she went to the barn and met up with Colton who stood with Lucy while the other hands were talking in a group not far away.

"Charlie…great to see you. I'm sorry about last night. I'll make it up to you."

She smiled.

"It's all right. Maybe we can go out tonight to the Lonely Rider before…you know going someplace private."

He stroked her arms before kissing her softly on the mouth.

"Sounds like a plan…"

Lois chimed in.

"I'll be celebrating getting through this week…I invited the hands to join us there so we can all have a big party."

Charlie glanced at Colton.

"Maybe we can just leave it early."

He smiled.

"Definitely sounds like a plan."

They all got on their horses to face another day of working the ranch.

The sunlight streamed down through the throngs of trees, heating the meadows as they rode across them spending the morning tending to worn fencing.

Marking the areas that needed repairs or replacement with fresh wood. Then they stopped for lunch which they unpacked from a couple of the saddlebags. She sat down on the bank near the stream that wove through this corner of the acreage.

Colton joined her while Lois did her usual flirtatious banter with the other hands. The two of them ate lunch chatting about the work done, whether or not the monsoons would be worse this year and then the topics grew more personal until he brought up the subject of tonight.

"I could get us a room at the motel," he said, "If you don't want to go back to the ranch."

She shook her head.

"It's no secret that we're seeing each other is it? I mean we could use an empty cabin if you don't feel comfortable inside your house…"

He considered that.

"I don't know if the one cabin left has been cleaned…since Hank moved out."

She shrugged.

"What's a little dust as long as the bed works? I want to be with you Colton. I want to know what it's like to make love…I mean we've been building to this right?"

"Okay then…we do the Lonely Rider thing and then head to the cabin. I got to go out of town pretty soon on the auction…I definitely want to know what it's like with us before I leave."

She smiled.


He sighed.

"We'll have to leave soon…I'd better check on that last fencing."

"I'll meet you back at the horses…I just want to enjoy sitting here a little longer."

He left and she sat there listening to the stream, flowing through the rocks, bubbling and churning in a soothing way.

"Hey Charlie…"

She turned around and saw Brad standing there, looming large, more ruggedly built than most ranch hands.

"Can I sit with you?"

She shrugged so he sat down next to her.

"Nice day isn't it?"

She nodded.

"Not too hot, not too windy," she said, "My favorite day for riding…"

"I imagine. You've always been a good rider, nice seat and strong but gentle hands…"

She shrugged again.

"I learned from the time I walked. Nothing magical about that."

He paused for a moment. I focused on the stream and the rest of the day's work, what I'd wear to the club tonight.

"Oh you're a talented rider all right. You just need the right horse between your legs…you know one that's responsive to direction and a light touch on the reins."

"Yeah whatever…look I know what you're up to with Lois," she said, "Be careful with her…she's got some thing for you and I don't want to see her get hurt."

"I can handle Lois."

"You sure about that? Because her father will kick your ass if you screw with her…"

He turned to look at her.

"I'm not planning on fucking her if that's what you're thinking. I can pick my own woman that I fuck and I'll tell you what I like since you're here."

"Brad I don't think…"

"That shouldn't be a problem then. I like woman who are pretty, curved in all the places I like to place my hands on and who aren't afraid to get down and dirty whenever and wherever. I like woman who know how to use their bodies to please a man all night long and can handle what happens. I like woman who aren't afraid to talk dirty and cry out when they come rather than holding it inside. Nothing's sexier than a woman's voice when she's climaxing either at her own hand or from me."

She felt her cheeks flush with heat. Oh god, he loved to give details of exactly what he wanted from a woman.

"But then again you know all about that don't you Charlie?"

His voice, lower with a husky tone.

"You see Lois doesn't fill that tall order I gave you. So I'm not playing with her. I find a woman I do want to play with, she'll know first…before I make my move."

"I see…well let her down easy then won't you?"

He chuckled.

"Oh she'll get the picture. You…are really something else. I hope Colton appreciates you. I did last night."

Her mouth dropped.

"What…what are you talking about?"

He sighed, a smile curving his mouth that didn't reach his eyes.

"Don't worry your secret is safe with me," he said, "I was in the barn last night when you…were in the loft getting yourself off."

Now she really blushed. She thought since it'd been so dark and quiet, she'd been alone in there.

"Heard the whole thing…man you're really enjoying it. That's good. Like I said I hope Carlton appreciates it."

She didn't know how to respond to that. Soon enough Carlton came back to tell everyone lunch was over and it was time to get back to work.

Brad got up first and headed to his horse. Charlie lingered behind him not knowing what to make of the whole conversation.


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