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Secrets & Sin

Novel By: LilithsSin

Eve is a successful young woman. She is everything her parents wanted her to turn out to be. However, for her, it is not enough, it makes her feel empty inside. She harbors a secret that will liberate her from her silver plated prison. It is a darkness that brings her into the light, even if those closest to her do not understand it. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Apr 15, 2012    Reads: 365    Comments: 1    Likes: 3   

He stood over her. He seemed huge to her as she looked up at him, his black hair stuck to his face and his eyes ignited with a raging fire. He was forcing her to keep her gaze fixed with his. Her entire body trembled, she sobbed quietly underneath the gag. He held the whip in his hand, it was very long, made of rubber and it scared her. He had used it on her before, in fact this was the very toy that had brought her to use their safe word the first and only time since they had been together. Her chest was heaving and her skin still flushed blood red. He took a step backwards and released the end of the whip. It tapped the hardwoods as it hit the floor. She desperately wanted to close her eyes.

"Don't you do it" Stian warned. "Don't you close your eyes" he continued. "Look at me". He raised his arm and sent the rubber crashing towards her breasts. It cut through the flesh like a knife, she screamed, as best she could through the gag. He moved his body between her legs and ran his index finger across the six inch long welt now adorning her left breast. He licked the blood and moved to take the gag from Eve's mouth. "Scream you slut, let me hear how much it hurts" He said stepping back again. He lashed it at her again, hitting her just above her most tender parts. Her scream was bloodcurdling.

"Oh god stop, please stop" she wailed. He hit her again, in the same spot. The volume of her cries increased, she begged for him to stop, but still did not utter their safe word. He lashed out at her again, this time hitting her at the very center of her sex, the same punishment that had caused her to use their safe word the first time.

She screamed, her eyes were so swollen from crying she could barely see. "Stop, please stop" she continued to beg. Secretly she wanted to be hit again, she didn't want to succumb to the whipping, she wanted to endure it, particularly on this night. But she knew she couldn't take much more.

Stian seemed very pleased she had taken so much, he was taking her much further than ever had, which validated everything he held in his heart for her. He took his toy and sent it out at her again, using more force than before. She screamed and her legs involuntarily rose from their position, which caused the rope to choke her. She didn't even notice until the material cut into her throat and she moved her legs back down as she gasped for air. He went for one more lash, and she cried their safe word.

He dropped the whip and untied her immediatly, just as he had done before. She couldn't do anything but lay there and sob. She couldn't even force her body to roll over on the bed. Stian picked her up and supported her frail body with his chest. He kissed her lips lightly. Her eyes were closed, she felt she couldn't open them if she tried. He brushed the hair out of her face and laid her back on the bed for a moment as he dissapeared into the bathroom. He drew a warm bath and came back for her. She looked him in the eyes and managed a slight smile as he picked her up, before closing them again and resting her head on his shoulder. He placed her into the water and got in behind her. He washed her entire body using a soft sponge. He was careful as he washed new wounds, she winced everytime he touched one of them.

Once they were finished he tended to her wounds, bandaging any that needed it and making sure none of the cuts were too deep. Eve sat on the side of the bed wrapped in a big white towel and looked up at him. He smiled at her

"What?" he questioned sweetly. She smiled back

"You have no idea what tonight meant to me" she said softly and stood up so she could look into his eyes.

"I hope it meant as much to you as it did to me" he said back to her and kissed her deeply. He stripped the bed and changed the sheets before allowing Eve to lay back down. The two of them went to bed and slept for what seemed like an eternity.


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