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Girls Night

Novel By: Kandie

Rebecca recently dumped her boyfriend after he cheated on her. Her best friends Hillary and Amy decided to bring her out for a night of fun! When she lands on stage to sing a duet with a handsome stranger who she ends up taking home with her.

Jack had been out of the dating game ver since his good for nothing slut of a girlfriend was found with her legs wrapped aorund her boss. His buddies decided to bring him out and he ends up singing with a cute bombshell on stage. He ends up going home with her.

Jack and Rebecca enter a fast paced romance which could end up deadly if the right cards aren't played! Everyone has secrets and when some are found out the participants are in for a wild ride of sex and danger! View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 31, 2013    Reads: 1,741    Comments: 1    Likes: 4   

Girls night, it was every Thursday we got into trouble had some drinks and went home feeling more lonely than normal. But we had fun and we were friends forever. Tonight was no different it just happened to be the night after the breakup from Dan. Amy and Hillary were dead set on getting me to have fun and to maybe get laid! I wasn't. So we ended up at a bar which was busy as hell people everywhere, and to boot it was karaoke night and the woman ... and some men were singing their heart out, including my friends which only made me laugh.

You have to hate bad break ups, a year ago I had broken up with a girl who had broken my heart by sleeping with her boss, I caught them when I decided to drop by to give her dinner as she was working late. Ya working late with her legs around his waist! I grabbed my beer and chugged the rest of it, the guy had dragged me out of the house and away from work to get my rocks off, to have some fun and make a fucking fool of myself. They were going up and singing ridiculous songs and I didn't see the good in that, maybe the girls which hung off them after they were done. Karaoke is not in my forte.

"I'm not going up there!" I almost screamed at Hillary and Amy, they were pushing me towards the stage, it was karaoke night and it was my turn and I wasn't having it!

"come on girl it is a double song so if the other person cant sing then you win!" Hillary said pushing me up on the stage Amy handing me the mic, I wanted to puke.

A few seconds later a guy was shoved up onto the stage he looked about as happy as I did.

"Ladies and gentleman I have the perfect song for these two, put your hands together for this one" the DJ yelled over the speakers and my stomach turned. "If you two can sing this together and actually get it right your two groups will get their drinks free!" he added I glanced at my friends who grinned giving me the thumb up, I groaned inwardly.

I looked to my right where the guy stood there getting the same looks from his friends, free drinks! If we didn't sing this we both would be beat senseless.

Here we go

The song came on and the puke rose, a remix a song I knew perfect ... Not that I wanted to sing it!

The song started and he sang first I stood there wishing my turn would never come. He continued.

"Fuck what I said, it don't mean shit now Fuck the presents, might as well throw them out fuck all those kisses, it didn't mean jack, fuck you, you hoe I don't want you back"

Oh god it was my turned it was coming. Please don't let me puke. I started singing

"Fuck what I did was your fault somehow fuck the presents, I threw all that shit out fuck all the cryin it didn't mean jack well guess what yo, fuck you right back"

I turned to him and I caught a glimpse of smile on his lips as he turned towards me, both of us keeping an eye on our screens as the next verse started. Soon we were singing pretty in tune and actually together.

"you thought, you could keep this shit from me you're burnt, bitch, I heard the story you played me you even gave him head now you askin for me back you're just another hack look elsewhere cause you're done with me" His singing voice was suited to the song better than the actual artist as he sang it out

"you thought you could really make me moan I had better sex all alone, I had to turn to your friend now you want me to come back you must be smoking crack, I'm goin elsewhere and that's a fact" I nearly stumbled over my words as I sang them but the grin on his face spread as the words moan and sex left my mouth. "you questioned did I care maybe I would have is you woulda gone down there, now its over but I do admit I'm glad I didn't catch your crabs I cant sweat that cos I got to go"

"Fuck what I said, it don't mean shit now Fuck the presents, might as well throw them out fuck all those kisses, it didn't mean jack, fuck you, you hoe I don't want you back"

"And fuck you right back"

The song finished after a few more words and the bar exploded into applause and cheering.

"Free drinks for these two! The hate guys was amazing!" the DJ said and the crowd cheered louder.

We got off the stage and he immediately came over to me

"I would ask to buy you a drink but we both get free ones" he was closer now and he smelled of soap and faintly of rye and coke and beer.

"Well then we can give each other one" he nodded and his hand went to my lower back as he brought me to the bar, we found a couple of chairs by the window and sat.

"Your friends ok without you for a while?" I asked and he shrugged

"Looks like your friends are keeping them company" he said and handed me my drink. "where did you learn to sing like that?" he asked taking a sip of the rye and coke he had ordered

"That wasn't singing it was moaning" I blurted out, it would have been funny with the girls but it made him raise an eye brow and grin, a grin that made my heart flutter wild and my thighs clench together.

"I will leave that one for right now. So why are you out tonight, girls night I assume?" I nodded as I took a sip of my rye and coke

"Ya we go out every week"

"The guys dragged me out as apparently I have no social life anymore"

"Work or ex girlfriend?" I asked leaning slightly towards him as he did the same


"my friends think I need to get laid by a decent guy"

"heart break?"

"hardly more like cheating ass hole who I should have dumped the first time"

He laughed and I couldn't help but join him

"hey you want to get out of here?" he asked and I swallowed hard

"um" I glanced around searching for either or Amy or Hillary but not a one was looking my way "sure" I ended and he got up and like a total idiot I left the bar with a total stranger.

We walked a block before either one of us talked, the cool summer air blew and the silence was stretching on becoming uncomfortable.

"so where do you live?" he asked then laughed "don't answer that it came out more creeper stalker like than I intended"

"yes it did, should I get my pepper spray now or wait until you have me corner in my home?" I laughed this time and he chuckled along with me

"So where are we going?" he asked and I looked around, I was walking him towards my house! I hadn't even realized and to change path would be suspicious now

"to come across really creepy and maybe a tad desperate, want to come in for a coffee?" I asked stopping at my building he eyed the door and then looked down at me pursing his lips, debating something

"I want to, but is that a good idea? I can tell you aren't the type of girl to go and invite guys back to her place after only knowing them for a couple of hours, even if its for ...coffee"

"well maybe I'm feeling spontaneous" I suggested which made him sigh

"I am trying to be the gentleman here"

"I'm not asking you to be" I looked up at him and he nodded slowly

"okay then lead the way"

We got into her apartment and I was kicking myself, this was wrong. She was obviously a good girl type and I was only going to break her heart. Her apartment didn't have one thing out of place and it smelled of fresh honey much like she did. Singing on stage with her was probably one of the most erotic things in my life, and she wasn't even naked! The way her mouth read each word and how her tongue darted out to moisten her lips she nearly had me in a puddle of goo right then and there on stage.

She was short, shorter than any woman I had ever been with and she was tiny all over her hips slender her breast small but a handful which made my mouth water and her burnt honey colored hair that was in loose waves made me want to run my hands threw it. This was a bad idea.

She went to the small kitchen and put the coffee pot on and went to the fridge I followed her leaning on the wall near enough that I could talk but not close enough I could touch her in any way. She bent low to look in the bottom of the fridge and the small white flimsy dress went up, I suppressed a groan. Her slender legs were tanned and her bare feet made her look adorable with her little pink painted toenail. Really toes now bro?

"I thought I had coffee cake but Amy must have ate it earlier" she said shutting the fridge and reaching up to the top cupboard she stretched her dress going up again, higher I decided right then and there to help her, I didn't need to see her thighs to think what was a bit higher.

"here" I said handing her two mugs she went flat on her feet again and smiled slightly at me

"thank you, my stool must have been moved" oh dear lord she was adorable and I really needed a cold shower.

"stool?" I asked and her cheeks turned a delicate pink

"I'm short, the stool well I need to reach half my cupboards" she explained then poured the coffee into the mugs "milk sugar?" I shook my head no, it didn't look like she was adding any of that to her coffee so I sure the hell wasn't risking her bending or stretching anymore.

I followed her into the open living room and she sat on the couch across from the couch so I took the couch.

"what is your name?" she blurted out then covered her mouth "I mean what is your name? We talked but we have yet to tell each other our names"

"Jack. Yours?" I set my coffee down the same time she leaned forwards to place her coffee on the coffee table and I caught a very full glimpse of cleavage, cleavage that was being created by a baby blue bra.


"Nice to meet you Rebecca"

The way my name slid from his mouth shouldn't have sounded so good. He looked almost in pain as he sat there, please tell me Amy or Hillary hadn't left a fork in the couch!

"Are you alright?" I asked and he nodded slowly "you look...in pain"

"I'm fine, in need of a shower but other than that I'm fine" was that a cold shower or just a shower? I wondered

"So what do you do?" I asked and he shrugged

"nothing really that important"

"Yea right, when someone says that they do something really awesome!" I said and scooted closer to the edge of the chair as he laughed slightly

"I am a manager at a department store"

"oh" I was shocked he didn't seem the type he seemed the type who would be doing something like a fitness trainer, his shoulders were nicely shaped and I would bet money that under that black shirt of his he had a smoking body.

"what do you do Rebecca?" he asked sipping his coffee

"I am a children's dance instructor, and I also teach ice skating a few times during the winter"

We stayed silent and I swallowed, trying to think of something to talk about was becoming difficult. His eyes were locked on me and I could feel the heat.

He was tall, with a slim waist and like I had said shoulders to die for. His eyes were grey and hair that was either black or dark brown but being a brush cut I couldn't tell.


Hey so a brand new novel is up! This one i hope gets a bit more responses and feedback!

the song they are singing is (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0OWpnxBhIfo) if you wanted to know to get an idea.

okay im adding the second chapter right now! =)


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