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The Unprediktable (Being Revised)

Novel By: IceBreaker

(FINISHED) Renee's life isn't going so well so she gathers her sister and tries to run away, only the unpredictable happens and both sisters are in danger. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 28, 2013    Reads: 517    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   

Author's Note: I got the idea for the beginning of this chapter from Nikkibeth!!! love her lol. Enjoy this chapter. (It's short)

Chapter 9: He does?

My toes curled and I chew down on my lip. I tried to pull at my restraints. I was handcuffed to the leg of the table that was down in the basement.

I shut my eyes tight and my legs tried to close but AJ wasn't allowing it.

He pushed the vibrator deeper inside me, making me arch my back and cry out. "Please." I begged. I couldn't take anymore orgasms.

This would be my fifth one tonight and I couldn't take anymore. It was too much. It was almost painful.

"You're almost there." AJ breathed. He had a small smirk on his face, showing his dimples. And at that smile, I let go. I pull at my restraints and bite down on my lip as I climax around the vibrator.

I feel spent and completely…yet painfully satisfied.

AJ took the vibrator out and then looked to me. "Open your mouth." He said.

I did as he said and he slid it in my mouth, forcing me to taste my own juices.

I tasted salty yet kind of sweet.

He slid it out of my mouth and smiled. "Good. That was very good, baby." He said. He unlocked the handcuffs and pulled me to sit me up.

"That was…" I was speechless. We've been in this fuck session for about five hours and it's the longest that I've ever been engaged in one activity.

An activity like that.

I use to think that sex was just about…a man and a woman, laying down, doing it and then being done with it. Now I see its much deeper than that. Much, much deeper than that. It's about exploring your pleasure. And I've never felt anything better.

But I felt guilty.

I still needed to get to Jodie.

"AJ?" I asked.

He looked at me. "Yeah?"

"Why can't you just let Jodie go? You can keep me but please let her go."

He shook his head. "It's not possible, Renee. She'd go and tell people that she and you were kidnapped and I can't have that."

"She won't tell. If you let me talk to her over the phone, she won't tell."

"Yes she will. I don't wanna talk about this anymore." He stood up and pulled me up with him. Disappointment washing over me.

"Hey, don't be upset. I told you she's fine. My brother will take really good care of her, I promise."

"When will I see her?"

He shrugged. "Don't know yet. We'll see."

Not the answer I wanted.

"Come here. I need to show you something." He let go of my hand and walked over into the corner and held a portrait but it was turned the other way. So I didn't see the picture.

"What is it?" I asked.

He smirked. "I hope you like it."

He turned the picture around and my jaw dropped. It was a painting of me.

I was laying down by a fireplace, naked, my silky brunette hair that curled up at the ends were a water fall to the side of my left shoulder and my eyes were bright and had a soft glow to them.

It looked scarily just like me.


"Yeah I…just got serious inspiration the past few days."

"It's beautiful."

"Thanks." He smiled and then put the picture down. "So tomorrow we have to go to my mom's house for a barbecue. Are you ready for that?"

I nodded. "How many people will be there?"

He shrugged. "I don't know. A lot more than I hope. But you'll be fine. We can stay for twenty minutes and leave."

"Okay." I said.

He nodded and gave me a kiss on my forehead. "Come on, lets go take a shower."

I nodded and grabbed his hand. I was about to lead him upstairs until his cell rung. He grabbed it off the table and looked at it. "Go upstairs and let me take this." He said.

I nodded and did as he said, but I stopped at the stair where he couldn't see me.

I peeked at him and he turned his back as he put the phone to his ear. "What, Shane?" He said with irritation in his voice.

AJ sighed after a short pause. "No. Look, I'm not letting her go to that house."

Another pause.

"I don't give a fuck how much money you offer me, it's not going to happen."

Another pause.

"Because I fucking love her, okay? Now I said no!" He hung up and slammed his phone onto the table and I immediately ran upstairs. I ran up to the second floor, walked in the bathroom and shut it closed. My breathing was out of control. He said he loved me.

Oh my god. But how can he so soon? It wasn't right but….I felt...pleased that he did. "Oh my god." I whispered to myself.

There's no way he loved me. No way.

Oh shit. What the fuck?

I heard his footsteps as he was coming down the hall. Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit.

The door opened and he walked in.

I cleared my throat and pretended that I didn't hear the conversation he just had with Shane.

"Hey, you okay?" I asked.

He shook his head and sighed. "No. I'm not."

"What's wrong?"

"Shane wants you." He went over and turned on the switch for the shower to start.

"Wants me how?"

"Pretty much the same way I have you. But he won't just have you this way. They'll be other girls too."

My eyebrow raised. "What does that mean?" I asked.

AJ gestured for me to step in the shower with him. Then I waited for him to talk as the water fell down on us.

"Shane owns a house of girls. He lives in this house with six other guys and the girls have to obey them."


"He kidnaps a lot of girls. Hundreds have gone missing."

"He can't do that. That's illegal."

"What I'm did to you was also illegal yet I got what I wanted in the end."

I blushed.

AJ sighed. "Anyway, he's been doing this for years. He had a girl named Haley that was there. He fell in love with her, married her and she had his kid."

"Even after he kidnapped her?" I asked.

He nodded. "She fell in love with him too."

I shook my head. How does that happen?


"Yeah, and he wants to make you girl number fifty three or however many girls are in there. I'm not going to let him make you the next one. Because you are mine."

I nodded. "I'm yours." I said.

He smiled. "You are." He whispered and then kissed me softly on the lips.


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