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The Unprediktable (Being Revised)

Novel By: IceBreaker

(FINISHED) Renee's life isn't going so well so she gathers her sister and tries to run away, only the unpredictable happens and both sisters are in danger. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 2, 2013    Reads: 435    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

Author's Note: These are the last 3 chapters. There won't be an epilogue. But I hope you guys enjoy it. Love you all. :) Oh and shortly after....im going to put up another novel i don't have a titlel for yet.

Chapter 15: Can I do this?

I woke up bright in the morning and today felt like a bad day. Like something bad was going to happen and I hope it wasn't because tonight was the night I had to go through with the plan. I sat up and AJ wasn't in bed. I was actually grateful. I'm a bad liar and one look into my eyes, he'd see I have a plan.

I looked over onto the night stand and I swallowed as I spotted his phone. Then I looked at the door. It was half open.

I grabbed the phone and went through the contacts and called Jenna.

I shut my eyes and waited as the line rung.

When she answered, I let out a huge breath. "I don't know if I can do this." I whispered.

"Renee, you have to. I'll be right outside at midnight…okay? I promise you."

"What if he catches me before I can escape?" I asked.

"He won't. Just stay cool all day and once you get Jodie back, you'll get your life back and you'll be happy."

"I know." I said nodding.

"Just relax and don't think about it as lying to him. Think of it as acting."

"Acting is lying." I said.

"You know what I mean. Just pretend that you're in love with him. Unless you really are."

"I don't love him." I heard a creak on the stairs and I immediately hung up and put the phone back onto the night stand and laid down.

The door opened and AJ walked in and gave me a smile. "Good morning." He got onto the bed and kissed me. Then he pulled back to look into my eyes. "I made breakfast for you." He whispered.

"Thank you." I said.

He smiled and nodded. He got of the bed and I followed him downstairs.

We sat down at the table in the kitchen. He sat across from me and began eating. I swallowed as I watched him. My throat felt dry.

I stared at his face.

He was the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.

His beautiful, tan face. His dark, silky brownish, reddish hair fell into a mop around his face. Slightly covering his bright golden eyes. Those eyes that were hypnotic. His soft looking lips. They were warm and felt so good. Then those dimples….those damn dimples that sucked me in. Then the little stubble going around his chin.

He looked at me and caught me staring. "What?" He asked.

I shook my head. "Uh…nothing. I'm just not really hungry." I whispered.

"What do you want to do today?" He asked.

I shrugged. "Whatever you want." I answered.

"I don't know. Aside from fucking you, I wouldn't want to do anything else." He said holding my gaze.

I blushed and bit my lip.

I have to make love to him tonight.

It'll be like my final goodbye to him.

"Can Jenna come over?" I asked. This will change the plan but it'll make the plan easier to accomplish.

AJ's eyebrows pulled together. "Why would you want her to come over?"

"I like her. Plus I need girl talk. I can't stay around one guy all the time." I said.

He shrugged. "What's wrong with that?" He stood up and looked down at me.

"Not that I don't enjoy having you and me in bed all the time but I need some girl time too." I said.

The suspicion crept onto AJ's face. He leaned over the table so that his lips were just at my ear. "Are you thinking of pulling a fast one on me, Renee?" He asked.

I shook my head.

His finger twisted a few strands of my hair and then he leaned down to bite down on my ear, grazing it with his teeth. The pain made heat spread between my legs.

I bit down on my lip and looked at him.

He smirked and then backed away from me. "I'll call her." He said.

"Thanks." I said.

He nodded and sat back down to continue eating.


Jenna walked in the house. White t-shirt. Beige shorts. White running shoes. Oh nice touch.

Her long red hair was in a long pony tail that fell down her mid-back.

She acted extremely normal as she walked in. She looked to AJ and frowned but then looked to me and smiled. "Renee."

"Hey." We hugged and when she pulled away, she pulled me upstairs and into the guest room.

She shut the door as I sat on the bed. "Was it your idea to call me here so early?"

I nodded. "Genius." she said.

Then she sighed. "Did you fuck him yet?"

"You said save it for later."

"Yeah, but you should tease him a little bit."

"Why would I do that?"

"To draw no suspicion. I keep telling you."

"I can't just go down there and make him hard without him thinking anything weird is going on."

"Suit yourself. But has he showed that he thinks anything is up?"

I shook my head. "Nope. Nothing." I said.

She nodded. "Good."

"Are you going to stay until twelve?"

She nodded. "Yep."

"Even when me and him are…"

She nodded.

"Wouldn't that be awkward?"

She giggled. "My ex-husband fingered me while we were having dinner with my parents and best friend. There are way more awkward things that can happen than that." She said.

I blushed again.

There was a knock on the door. AJ is so nosy.

"Come in." Jenna said.

Shane then walked in. Oh Jesus.

"Jenna." He gave her a smile. Then he looked to me. "I need to talk to Renee…alone." He said.

Jenna stood up. "You don't seriously think I'd leave her alone with you do you?"

He sighed. "I have very low tolerance for your backtalk. So do as I say and fucking leave." He said.

Jenna glared at her dad.

"What the hell did mom see in you?" She asked and then walked off. Shane paused for a second and looked to the floor and then slowly looked to me. "Renee…"

"What the fuck do you want from me?" I asked.

Shane undid his tie and sighed. "I'm no longer taking no for an answer. You know that…right?"

"What do you mean?"

"What I mean is…you fighting me is only making me want you more. I want you in the house."

"I'm not going there with you."

"Would you prefer Jodie to go?"

"Do not bring my little sister in this. Don't. I belong to AJ." I said.

Shane smirked. "I know your little plan. AJ's too fucking dumb to see it but I do."

"I don't know what you're talking about."

"Yeah you do. You have a plan. You and Jenna do. You think I'm stupid?"

"Yes…actually I do." I said.

Shane smirked. "I'll tell AJ everything if you don't come with me." He said.

He was going to blackmail me? Was he serious?

"Why are you doing this?"

"You know why I want you." He said.

I shook my head. "Tell AJ what you like. I'll never go with you." I walked pass him and made my way out of the door.


Renee came downstairs and didn't glance at me once and Shane followed her.

Shane came over to me and looked back in the direction Renee went.

Then he looked to me. "Something's going to happen tonight."

"What makes you say that?"

"I can feel it."

"Why do you keep fucking with her?" I asked.

"I want her and I always get what I want."

"But she's mine." I said.

"Does she know that?" He asked.

I stared at him. The fuck is he talking about?

"Why do you think my daughter is here?" He asked.

"What are you talking about?"

"Did Jenna just show up or did your girl ask for her."

"Renee asked for her."

Shane smirked. "Read between the lines, brother. Renee cannot escape on her own without someone's help." Then he sighed. "I'll be back later."

"Please don't. Stay away if you can." I said.

Shane chuckled. "I understand your hatred for my ways but….this is who I am."

"As if I care."

Shane shook his head and disappeared out of the room.

I called Renee's name and she appeared into the room looking nervous.

Why did she look so guilty?

Was she really thinking of escaping? That would be the worst betrayal she could do. Worst than what my ex, Tracy did.

"Come here, baby." I said. She walked over closer to me. I stared down at her. She gave me an innocent look that always made my dick hard.

"What's wrong with you?" I asked.

She shook her head. "Nothing." she responded.

"Shane told me that Jenna was here to help you escape."

Her eyes widened.

"Is that true?"

She shook her head.

I stared down and I saw nothing but truth in her eyes. She wouldn't leave me. She knew I needed her.

"He was lying to me?"

She nodded.

I knew he was. That's why I can't fucking stand Shane. I grabbed her hand and pulled her to me staring down into her gray eyes. She sexily bit down on her lip as she stared up at me.

If Jenna wasn't here, I'd fuck Renee right on the kitchen floor, on the counter, against the refrigerator, and on the table.

"I wouldn't leave you." She whispered.

I smiled. I know she wouldn't. I leaned over and kissed her hair and then let go of her as I walked out of the kitchen.


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