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The Unprediktable (Being Revised)

Novel By: IceBreaker

(FINISHED) Renee's life isn't going so well so she gathers her sister and tries to run away, only the unpredictable happens and both sisters are in danger. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jan 30, 2013    Reads: 521    Comments: 11    Likes: 1   

Chapter 12: Just when I was happy

"What is this place?"

"A hotel that my step dad own. He let us stay here for a couple nights. They have a hot tub, swimming pool. Art room, exercise room. Anything you want…really." AJ said. We were walking down a dim lit hallway. The walls were burgundy, the floors were covered with golden carpet and on the walls had dim-lit golden lights setting off a gentle tone throughout the hallway.

"I thought you hated him."

"I don't exactly hate him, I just have no respect for the guy. My mom was the one who made him give us a room.

Speaking of Sharon… "Does she know?" I asked. It did happen in her house after all.

AJ shook his head. "And other than me, you, and Shane, nobody else knows but Jenna."


"Can I call her?"

AJ shrugged as we finally got to our room. "Sure." He answered.

He dug a card out of his pocket and slid it into the slot and our hotel door opened.

And as we got in….my god. It was beautiful. Color theme was gray, blue, and black.

Black leather couches, glass tables with huge bowl filled with fruit. As I walked in, I grabbed a grape from the bowl and popped it in my mouth.

AJ smirked and grabbed one and put it in his mouth. He looked so….

I distracted myself and looked somewhere else.

"So what do you want to do?" He asked.

I shrugged. "I think I want to eat some dinner and then go swimming." I said.

He nodded. "That sounds like a helluva plan." He said and pulled his phone out of his pocket and called for room service.

As he did that, I gave myself a tour of the room.

It was beautiful. The bed was big. The room had a view of the lake. I turned when AJ walked back in.

His eyes stayed on mine. I've been afraid to be alone with him although it was all the time because I thought he was going to try something.

I was scared.

I was scared of him to touch, and kissing me. I didn't fully trust him all the way.

We waited for room service.

When it came, we sat on the bed and ate together. I stayed silent.

"What are you thinking about?"

I shook my head. "Nothing."

He tilted his head. "You're lying."

"How long were you in the psychiatric hospital?" I blurted out.

He didn't look surprised by my question. He sighed softly and kept my gaze. "Nine years."

Nine years?

"I had to check in when I was sixteen."

"You hurt that girl when you were only sixteen?" I asked.

He nodded. "My teenage years were not so pretty." He gave a small smile and then shook his head. "I was a rebel for the longest, you know."

"Did they have to like…hold you down and strap you in."

He nodded. "I attacked a dozen nurses at once. I forgot what made me snap but whatever it was, it definitely had an effect."

Then he looked down at his half-eaten plate. "I rather not talk about this anymore, Renee." He said. I could see the sadness in his eyes.

I swallowed. "I'm sorry." I whispered.

He smiled as his hand reached over to brush my cheek and tucked my hair behind my ear.

I bit down on my lip to suppress my nervousness.

He took his hand away noticing my discomfort. "I'm sorry." He said.

"It's okay. I'm ready to go swimming now." I said.

AJ nodded and stood up. He disappeared out of the room and came back with a dark blue shopping bag. "I got Joey to get you a bathing suit."

"How'd he know my size?" I asked.

"Joey is a very good guesser." He said.

I nodded as he pulled out a blood red one piece bathing suit with a deep v-neck cut.

I stared at it. "Wow it looks…barely there." I said.

AJ smiled. "I know but…Joey figured that I'd like you in this."

I grabbed it and studied it. Then I looked to him and shyly bit my lip.

AJ stood back and leaned against the wall as he watched me.

"Put it on." He breathed.

He was going to watch me.

And something about it aroused me more and made me blush.

I pulled my shirt over my head and turned as I took my bra off.

I placed it on the bed and as I felt soft hands on my back, it gave me goose-bumps.

And I felt like warm melted butter.

I shut my eyes as AJ kissed the back of my neck. And my back.

Electricity sparked brightly in my body.

"Let me do the rest." He whispered in my ear.

I stood there and he stood behind me, reaching in front of me and unbuttoning my jeans and pulled them down my legs.

I stepped out of them and sighed softly out of nervousness.

His fingers slipped under the rim-line of my panties and he slowly pulled them down. I was soaked. Soaked a lot.

Then once he pulled them down, he reached in front to cup me and rubbed his hand back and forth over my wetness.

"You're ready for me aren't you, baby?" He whispered in my ear.

I was. Beyond ready. AJ had no idea but…I wasn't sure if I wanted this right now. Not when every few seconds, I kept having thoughts of him bending me over at that party and forcing himself inside of me.

I shut my eyes. "I should finish getting dressed." I said to him.

I sense rather than see his disappointment.

"Right. I'll just see you out there." He said nodding and then he slowly turned and disappeared out of the room.

I ran my fingers through my hair and put on the one piece suit.

It hugged my body perfectly.

I looked in the mirror and smiled at the way it fit me. I looked pretty damn good.

I walked out of the suite with a towel around my body and walked out to the back. It was almost completely dark except for the lights in the blue swimming pool. It was huge and rectangular.

And only one person was in it. He swam around in black swimming trunks. Then he smiled when he spotted me.

"Come here." He said in a soft voice.

I smiled softly and bit my lip as I dropped the towel onto a lounge chair and I jumped into the water. The impact made me disorientated for a second when I came back up.

I wiped my eyes and swam over to AJ who smiled. "You look beautiful wet." He said.

But I knew the secret message behind that and he smirked, showing his dimples. "I wasn't being sexual with that."

"Yeah right." I said sarcastically and swam backwards.

I dipped my head underwater and swam through the water, down to the bottom, flipped and went back up for air.

AJ smiled. "What, you think you're special because you can hold your breath for long?" He asked playfully.

I nodded and pushed the water to splash him.

He smiled and dipped underwater, He was coming near me. Oh shit.

I tried to swim away but he grabbed me and I giggled as he forced me under.

It was fun.

I swam away from him all the way to the other side and popped my head out of the water.

I was now on the other side, right below the latter and AJ popped out right in front of me. He wasn't smiling. He had a dark look in his eyes.

"What's wrong?" I asked.

He didn't answer as he swam over so that we were hardly inches apart. We're both staring into each other's eyes. Both of our breathing is uneven.

He places his fingers through my wet hair and pulls me to his lips.

He parted my lips with his and sashayed me back against the pool wall. We were right below the latter.

His tongue rubbed mine and he dominated it. Our kissing became sloppy and I know I couldn't hold it in anymore. I wanted him to fuck me.

And he must have read my mind because he grabbed onto my hips and grinded his erection against me. It made me moan. All the muscles inside of me contracted.

He stared into my eyes and while he did, I can feel him tearing my bathing suit.

I looked down in surprise and then looked back to him. "I thought this was expensive." I whispered.

He shook his head. "It is but I don't give a fuck."

He tore it all the way and his hand went down to my pussy. I moaned and leaned my head back.

I wrapped one arm around his neck as he got his swimming trunks down.

He grabbed onto both of my legs and pulled them up to his waist and was inside of me in one sharp thrust. I cried out and he placed his hand against my mouth. "People can hear you." He whispered.

I nodded and he took his hand away.

My body was pressed against the wall of the pool and his body was pressed against mine.

He thrusted slowly inside of me, taking his time so I can feel every inch go in and out slowly.

I closed my eyes loving the feeling of his deep thrust, touching my g-spot. It has me quivering already.

AJ's eyes were closed but he was softly groaning with every thrust.

And I was breathing hard. He knew how to be quiet during. I could hardly contain myself.

I felt like I was going to explode if I didn't let out my moans.

And AJ must have noticed this because he kissed and whispered. "Let me hear you, baby."

And right then and there, I no longer try to contain my moans. With every thrust, I cry out and as I do, he starts going faster and I reach up and squeeze the latter to keep myself up as he fucks me with hard impact.

"I'm gonna cum." I whimpered like a little child.

"Then let it go, baby." He groaned.

I throw my head back, still holding onto the latter as I cry out loudly. I release hard around him and he groans loudly and release inside of me. Deep inside of me.

My toes curl from the orgasm and I bite down on my lip as I ride it out. I lean my head back and let go of the latter.

My breathing is uneven and I could feel AJ's eyes on me.

When I open my eyes to look at him, I bite my lip.

He smiles softly. "You have the most beautiful look on your face when you come." He whispered.

I blush and smile a little.

"Are you ready to get out?" He asked.

I nodded and he slid out of me.

I sighed softly.

He pulled his black trunks back up and then looked at me. Oh no…how am I going to get out? He tore my swimming suit.

He smirked. "This will be fun." He smiled.

Then I moved as he used the latter to get out. He looked down at me.

"Not really…I brought a towel." I said pointing to the dark blue towel laying on a lounge chair.

He picked it up and threw it in the water.

My jaw dropped. Why would he do that?

"Why did you-"

"I like a challenge…don't you?"

He can't just make love to me in a swimming pool and be a dick the next second.

I swam over and grabbed the towel and got out of the pool and run out the towel. The swim suit was only covering my breasts. Nothing else.

The way AJ looked at me. Nothing I've ever seen before but it was obvious he wanted me again.

I rung the towel out and placed it around my body.

I glared at AJ and he smiled softly. "Ready to go to bed?"

I nodded and walked pass him.

"You're mad?"

"Not as much as I just was."

"You're probably not mad because I made you come."

"Who says something like that?" I asked as we got back into the hotel.

"I do." He says. We get on the elevator and of course he uses this time to kiss me. And I don't resist.

He makes me feel like nothing in the world matters but him. I feel like he brainwashed me.

And I can't believe that I feel this way although he hurt me like he did.

When we got to our room, AJ kissed me before opening the door.

It didn't feel right. The atmosphere felt off.

I swallowed. "Do you feel that?" I asked.

"What?" AJ asked.

I walked through the room and went into the bedroom. I stopped in my tracks and my throat went dry as Shane sat upon the bed.


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