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Love & sex (Being Revised)

Novel By: IceBreaker

(FINISHED)Karlie Morris is a stripper who works at a club called "Nipples".
She meets a guy, Ellis, who meets all her expectations and she falls in love with him.
In the middle of this, his brother, Tyler, tries to get close to Karlie.
Tyler is much more complicated than Ellis and some part of Karlie wants him.
Will she stay with Ellis or go to Tyler?? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Sep 30, 2012    Reads: 874    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   

Chapter 6: Not the night I planned for

"Can I please tell you about it?" Melissa begged. She was lying on my bed with the biggest smile on her face and she's had this smile since she came in.

"No, but I'm sure you're going to tell me about it anyway." I said. I was typing on my laptop while sitting in my loveseat in the corner.

"Tyler is ten inches." She said. I looked at her.


"Ten fucking inches, Karlie."

"That didn't hurt?"

"It hurt so good." She said smiling.

I showed my disgusted face and went back to typing.

"He looks so sexy when he cums."

"Okay! No more, Melissa. I don't want to hear another word about what you and Tyler did last night."

"We made a tape."

"Did you not hear what I just said?"

She shrugged and kept the wide smile on her face. "What about you? Ellis left early this morning." I looked at her and she smiled wickedly.

I chuckle and take my reading glasses off. "I had sex with him last night."

Her jaw dropped. "Congratulations. Was it good?"

I blushed a deep shade of red and nodded.

She lifted her hand as she came to me and I high fived her.

She hopped back on the bed. "So both brothers are good in bed. Wow."

"Yeah that's weird but good."

"Very good. I'm planning on seeing Tyler again tonight."

"Again? I thought he was your fuck buddy just for last night."

Melissa shrugged. "He has proven himself worthy of being a good fuck. I want it again." She said matter of fact.

My phone vibrated and I picked it up and answered it.


"It's Ellis."


"Hey baby, I miss you. Are you working tonight?"

I smile. "I miss you too and no. This is my night off but I'll put a show on for you."

"I look forward to it. Can I come at around nine?"

"You can come anytime you want." I said smiling at myself for the boldness of dirty talk And right in front of my best friend too.

"I look forward to that even more." He answered. I giggled. "I'll see you at nine."

"I'll see you, baby." He hung up and I put my phone down and looked to Melissa.

She stared at me in awe. "I am so proud that you got out of that "goodie two shoes" phase."

I rolled my eyes.

"Ypu know what you need?" She asked as she stood up. "A stripper pole in the middle of the floor." She smiled as she walked in a small circle. "One night, you call Ellis over and he comes and comes up the stairs. He opens the door and BAM! There you are in nothing and just dancing on a pole. He'd fall in love with you then."

I rolled my eyes.

"I don't do stuff like that."

"Tyler has a stripper pole in his apartment."

I rolled my eyes. "Of course he does."

"It was fun stripping for him last night. He threw hundreds at me and let me keep them."

"Good, you can help me pay for rent then." I said.

Melissa giggled and walked out of the room.


Nine swung around and I was lighting candles in my room. I wanted to strip for Ellis tonight. To be his own private dancer.

I was wearing a small flowy dress that barely covered my ass, a black thong and a garter belt along with black thigh high stockings.

My bed had a canopy so I can use that as a pole….somewhat.

I has ensense throughout the room which gave it a warm apples and cinnamon smell.

My heart jumped when the door opened and Ellis looked around and smiled at me as his eyes met mine.

"Hi." I whisper.

He comes in and shuts the door. "Hi back." He leans against the door and watches me.

"Do you like it?" I asked.

He looked around and then looked to me. "Very much." He held out his hand and I walked over to him and looked him in his eyes.

"I love it."He whispers.

I grab him by his jacket and pull him to me and make him kiss me. I'm so absorbed by the way he taste and by how his hands feel when they touch my body.

He's the only guy that can make me feel so lustful..

"Come sit in this chair." I whisper. I pull away from his lips and look up at him.

"Are you going to strip for me?" He asks

I nod and lead him to the chair and push him in it.

I go to my closet and pull out my my knee high boots. I sit down and pull them on and zip them up while brushing my skin and looking at him through my my eyeslashes.

He sits back and watches me and looks quite turned on.

I put the other one on and look at him as I get up and turn my ipod all the way up. I let the song "Step on inside" By Vietnam come on and I grab onto the canopy of my bed and start grinding against it while looking at him.

I shut my eyes and tip my chin back and let my hair fall back as I pick my leg up and wrap it around the canopy. I run my fingers through my hair and open my eyes to look at him.

He's staring at me biting his lip completely focused on my movements.

I smile to myself and turn around against the canopy and lift the dress up my delicate skin to reveal my thong and my garter belt.

Ellis then stood up and came in front of me. He got down on his knees and his lips pressed against my inner thigh and I gasped.

He began nipping on my inner thigh which felt so good. I close my eyes and lean my head back against the canopy and I feel him unhook the garter belt and I hear it fall to the floor.

Next, I feel my thong being slid down my thighs, to my legs, down to my feet. I watch Ellis as he looks up to me. He slides his hands up to my thighs and then one slide up in between them. I close my eyes again and breathe out softly.

I moan when he sticks two fingers inside of me and slowly pump them in and out while looking at me.

"I'm all yours." I whisper.

He takes his fingers out, stand up, and looks down at me. His lips capture mine and his tongue slides into my mouth. I wrap my arms around his neck and he presses against me and a gasp slips out of my mouth.

He slowly takes his jacket off and I lift up his shirt and take it off and his lips goes back to mine.

I hear my phone vibrate and I look over to it. Ellis starts kissing my neck. "I have to get that." I whisper pushing on his chest.

He steps away from me and goes to get the phone. He throws it to me and I catch it smiling at him. He smiles back at me.

I open it and sigh as I sit on the bed. "Hello?"

"It's Claudia, darling." Ah…the drag queen beauty.


"Madison had an emergency and that little bitch, Mahogany won't pick up her phone. I need you in here. Only Casset and Minnie are here right now and I need more girls."


"Okay. I'll be there in a few minutes." I say.

"Thank you." She hangs up and I look to Ellis. "I have to go to work." I said.


"I know. That's how I feel."

"Well can I go with you?"

"You'll be distracting me and I'm already sexually frustrated and my dancing is off when I'm sexually frustrated."

He smiled. "You'll let me stay here?"

"I trust you." I said.

"You sure?"

I nodded. "Just don't go through my panty drawer." I said.

He smiled and kissed me. "I can't promise that."

I chuckled and then went to get a pair of panties. I took the dress off and slipped a shirt on and then some jeans.

Ellis handed me my shoes and I put them on. I gave him the remote to my flatsceen tv and kissed him before running down the stairs.

Melissa was laying on the couch and I looked at her. "Hey, thought you were going out to see Tyler."

"He said he was busy tonight. He had some kind of meeting."

"What? Tyler Deroone passes up sex?"

"My words exactly."

"Well have a drink and you'll be fine."

"I'll have Ellis." She smiled wickedly.

"I like to see you try." I said. She rolled her eyes. I hugged her and left out of the house.

When I get to Nipples, I get out of the car and walk into the building. A slow sexy song was playing and I saw Minnie and Casset dancing onstage.

I look around the room and my eyes stop to the guy with tousled hair whose sitting at the bar. This better not be….

I walk and turn to look at his face and Tyler stares back at me.

"You're so wrong."

"What are you talking about?"

"You told Melissa that you had a meeting."

"I am at a meeting with Mr. Bourbon." He smiles and chugs the liquid in his glass. He sats it back down. "Another, Jerry." He says staring at me.

"You got it." Jerry responds.

Tyler keeps his dark eyes on me. "I thought you were off tonight."

"How do you know my schedule?"

"I don't," He shrugged. "I asked that girl up there what time you'd be coming in and she said you weren't."

"Claudia called me at the last minute. Not that I have to explain any of that to you."

He smiled. "So why did you just explain?" He asked raising his eyebrow.

"I-you said- oh shut up." I turned and opened the door to the back rooms.

Claudia, dressed up in pink, came over to me. "Thank you for doing this, Karlie. I appreciate it. I promise you can have tomorrow off."

"Thank you."

I got dressed in a black teddy, black fishnest stockings and dark blue heels.

I put on my makeup and quickly gathered myself before going out on the stage.

I walked out to the rhythm of the music and got in behind Casset.

She grabbed my hair and made me pull my head back and felt on me. I closed my eyes and this time….all I could think about was Ellis.

I could just imagine him watching me.

Imagine him feeling on me.

Madison walked off the stage and eventually, so did Casset and I was there all alone. I dived to the floor and turned on my back.

I brought both my legs up and spread them wide open.

Money gets thrown to me and I feel someone tug on the heel of my shoe. I look over and an odd looking guy with a bald head smiles at me.

I push him back using my heel and the room erupts in laughter as he stumbles back.

I get up and do a new dance routine on the pole.

I hop up on it, wrap my legs around it and throw my head back and shut my eyes.

All that I can imagine is Ellis. What we did last night and how good it felt.

And I loved that he was the only one who ran through my mind at this moment.

When I was done, I went straight to the back and sat down.

"You okay?" Claudia asked. I nodded.

"I'm great. Just tired." I said.

The back door opened and Madison stepped in along with Mahogany.

"I'm so sorry I'm late. I had to help with my little brother. He had an asthma attack."

"That's okay." Claudia said. Madison smiled and kissed Claudia's cheek and then started to undress.

Claudia's eyes flicker to Mahogany. "And what's your excuse?" She asked.

Mahogany shrugged. "I just felt like coming in late." She put her purse down and kept her eyes on Claudia.

"I need to fire your ass. You're starting to get on my damn nerves."

"Fire me then. I don't give a fuck. Fire me and watch my mom will be here to take this place over and then what are you going to have, bitch?" Mahogany said glaring at Claudia.

Claudia smirked, not phased by Mahogany's outburst. "A whole lot of nothing. But I rather have nothing than to have to spend another second with a fucking broke ass slut with no fucking money. So if you want to leave, leave then. No one in this goddamn place wants you here. Goodbye." She waved at Mahogany.

Mahogany snatched her purse and walked back outside.

Claudia sighed and then looked at me. "Well….there goes my purpose of living."

"Her mom can't take this place back. We all love it here." I said.

Claudia nodded. "I know we do. But it's up to her mother. I don't have a damn say in it unless I can buy her off. I personally don't think two hundred dollars would do it." She smiles and I smile with her.

"I'd help you with the money."

"Will you?" She asked.

I nodded.

"I will too." Madison said. Claudia smiles at me and looks to her. "That's why I love you girls so much."

"We love you too." Minnie said walking in. Claudia went up and kissed her and sighed into her mouth.

"That's hot." I muttered. Minnie broke into laughter and pulled away from Claudia. "Where's your hot boyfriend?" She asked.

"At home. He'd distract me if I let him come tonight."

"Isn't his brother out there?"

I nodded.

"I think I need a cigarette. I'll be back." I said.

I didn't really need or want one. I just wanted some fresh air.

I walked out to the back and down the short dark alley and leaned against the brick wall and shut my eyes.

I don't want Claudia to lose this place. I love this place more than anything. I want her to keep it. It's apart of me now.

I heard a girl whimpering and I looked down the alley to see a girl struggling to push a guy away.

Was that Mahogany? It doesn't matter.

I quickly ran down the alley in my heels and started hitting him to try to get him off the girl. He pushed me hard against the brick wall and my breath had gone for a second.

All I could see was a fist coming near my face and before I could move, a bruisng pain came to my nose and I fell to the ground.

My nose began throbbing and my eyes watered up. I grabbed the man's pants by the bottom to get him to leave the girl alone.

I attempted to look up at him and his boot came down on my face. It left a stinging pain starting from my forehead, to my chin.

"Stay down you little bitch."

I shut my eyes and I heard fabric tearing. Oh fuck.

I opened my eyes again and saw him attempting to kiss the girl.

I slowly got to my feet and grabbed his hair and pull him back.

He pushed me up against the brick wall again.

Rain started pouring hard around us and his face became blurry.

I felt a blow to my stomach and I clutched it with my hands as I fell back down to the ground.

I looked up and noticed that the girl was now gone.

His boot came to my face and I could have sworn I heard a crack as it kicked me again and again.

Another kick to my stomach.

"Please…" I breathe.

I felt cold fingers suddenly on the fabric and it ripped. I gasped as he pulled me closer.

The cold rain fell on my revealed stomach and more of the fabric ripped.

I brought my hands up to stop him and I only attempted to slap him.

He slapped me back hard. His hand was loud as it hit against my wet skin.

I closed my eyes. Oh fuck Oh fuck. No. No. No. I don't want this.

I shivered from fear and the cold rain that splashed on my face. I could hardly open my eyes.

And then I heard a voice. It was threatening. Menacing, and down right good to hear.

"Get the fuck off her!"

I squinted my eyes and saw Tyler pushing the man back on the ground.

I sat up and looked at them.

Tyler stood over him and stared down at him. He pulled his fist back and pushed it forward repeatedly. The guy's groans weren't softening Tyler up. He didn't seem to care.

He put so much force and anger into those punches and I slid back against the wall and looked at him.

Tyler's other fist was clutching the guy's shirt. "You touch her again, you're fucking dead." Tyler growled and then he punched him again and the guy's head fell back onto the concrete. He then turned to me.

He came over to me and slid his arms under me and picked me up.

He didn't talk at all.

He quickly ran me to his car, opened the backdoor and carefully slipped me in. He looked at me for a second before shutting the door.

And I heard him get in on the driver side and he started the car up.

I wipe my tears and hid my small cries of pain as he drove off into the night.


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