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Love & sex (Being Revised)

Novel By: IceBreaker

(FINISHED)Karlie Morris is a stripper who works at a club called "Nipples".
She meets a guy, Ellis, who meets all her expectations and she falls in love with him.
In the middle of this, his brother, Tyler, tries to get close to Karlie.
Tyler is much more complicated than Ellis and some part of Karlie wants him.
Will she stay with Ellis or go to Tyler?? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Sep 26, 2012    Reads: 965    Comments: 7    Likes: 5   

Chapter 5: Me and you tonight

"I like this song." I say as I turn it up. "Hurricane" By 30 seconds to mars.

"Would you dance to this song?' He asked and I knew what he was really asking. I shook my head. "No. This is song is too complicated."

We were sitting in Ellis's car outside of Nipples. I was on my break. And I used this time to talk to and make out with Ellis.

I was in the passenger seat facing him with my high heel boots in his lap.

"Melissa is supposed to be coming here tonight." I say.

Ellis nods. "Good, that will keep Tyler busy."

"Melissa would keep anybody busy." I said smiling.

"Tell me about you and her."

I lean my head against the window shield. "Well….we knew each other since we were little. And one night when we were in high school, we "experimented" I said.

"Experimented meaning what?" He asked.

"We made out one night and we just started dating. She was an amazing kisser."

"For how long?" He asked.

I shrugged. "2 or 3 months. It ended after a while because we just….felt better as friends."

"Is it different? Being with a girl?" He asked.

I shrugged. "You're my first boyfriend. I don't know." I said.

He turned and looked back to me. "Is that her? The brunette?" He asked. I turned and saw Melissa coming up the stairs.

I took my feet out of his lap and got out of the car. Ellis got out too.

Melissa looked to me.

"Hey, slut."

I rolled my eyes. Her eyes went to Ellis and she smiled. "So this is my ex's new boyfriend?" Lindsey asked. He smiled and shook her hand. "The very same. And you are her ex lover who from what I hear is a very good kisser."

"Guilty." Melissa says giggling.

"And I'm," Oh no. Tyler came over to us and leaned against the car. "The very irritating but good looking brother." He said smirking at Melissa.

"And also my fuck buddy for tonight." Melissa said smiling at him flirtatiously. Tyler smiles back and then glances at me.

I look at Ellis whose smiling back at me.

I can't help but smile at him.

We're all fucking smiles tonight.

"Well I have to get back on stage." I say. Tyler immediately looks at me much to Melissa's dismay and I look to Ellis who is glaring at Tyler. "We'll go back…..alone." He says. I nod and grab his hand and pull him along with me back into Nipples.

"Finally, we're alone." Ellis says.

"Not technically. There's still like twenty men in here I have to dance for."

"Twenty one." He whispers and he kisses me softly.

Claudia, looking as fabulous, dangerous, and dramatic as Lady gaga comes towards us. She smiles at Ellis with her dark red lipstick. "I'm Claudia." She says.

"The bitchy boss." He says shaking her hand she smiles and looks to me. "Ah, so you told him about me."

"Of course. I had to tell him about my pretend mom." I said. She smiled. "Use condoms." She said specifically to Ellis.

"Yes ma'am He assured her.

She grinned and looked to me. "I like him."

"Good. Me too."

She then frowns at Ellis. "If you hit her or touch her in anyway against her will, I'll cut your dick off. Understand, honey?" She asked.

He nodded straight faced.

She nods. "Good boy. He's a keeper." She turns and makes her way to the back and I look to Ellis.

He looks to me. "She doesn't fuck around." He says.

I shook my head. "Nope. She doesn't and neither does Melissa. Both of them are my mother basically."

"Why does Melissa seem….jumpy?" He asks.

"She has epilepsy." I explained. His eyebrow rose. "Damn. Really?"

I nod. "Her first seizure was in school. These kids would bully her and I was kind of in the dark. I always wanted to talk back about them but I was scared they'd start bullying me so I never said anything.

This boy she used to have a crush on pushed her hard against the lockers and she fell to the floor and broke into a seizure right there.

It was so awful. I felt so guilty for years."


"Exactly." I sigh.

"It wasn't your fault." Ellis said. I shrugged. "I could have made them stop talking about her."

"Well think about it this way, Karma's a bitch." Ellis said shrugging.

"Good point, Mr. Deroone." I kiss him and pull him into a bar stool in the corner.

"You know, other strip joints have those places where every girl is on a separate table."

"I know. Obviously this place isn't like that although it should be."

"It's still sexy." He whispered.

I blushed and looked to him.


"You have no idea." He responded.

I grin in satisfaction. "That means I'm doing my job right then."

"You are, Miss Morris."

I giggled and left him to go to the back.


Melissa's POV


I knew he was an asshole the second I saw him but cocky guys are always like that.

"What do you do?" I asked leaning against the car.

"What does it matter?" He asked.

"It matters to me. Answer the damn question."

He smirked. "Is that an order?" He came closer to me until we were just inches apart. "It is." I said.

"Well I don't like to be ordered." He said pulling my waist towards him. I love cocky guys that's just so full of themselves just so I can put them in their place. They aren't up higher than I. "How did you get so cocky?" I asked.

"You really want to talk about that? There's an obvious reason you're here, Macy."

"It's Melissa you ass and I know why I'm here."

"So are you going to give me what I want…..Melissa?"

"You only want me right now because you have no other options."

He chuckled and let go of my waist and stepped back. "I can have any girl I want. All you are is just a midnight fuck."

"My feelings aren't hurt."

"Good." He pressed me hard up against the car and I pushed him away. "I mayact like ablonde sometimesbut I'm not fucking stupid. Condom?" I asked.

He smiled, reached in his pocket and held it between his middle and index finger.

"Happy?" He asked.

"I won't be happy until you slip it on." I said.

He smirked and unzipped his pants. "Are you serious? Out here in the open?"

"You must not entirely know who I am, Mary."


"Right…that's what I said." He said. I watched him as he slipped the son of a bitch on and then quickly lifted my skirt up.

"Against your brother's car?" I breathed looking him in his eyes as he grinded himself in between my legs making me moan.

"Does it look like I care?" He asked.

He moved back slightly, brought me around and made me bend over the front of the car and quickly slipped into me making me gasp.

Karlie's POV

"How did I do?" I asked.

Ellis laughed as I came over to him. "Everytime, you do fantastic." He kissed me.


He nuzzles me hair and sighs.

"What's wrong?" I ask.

He smiles softly. "I'm just worried about what my brother could be doing to your friend."

"It" probably. Melissa hates relationships." I said.

"Oh…then they're perfect." He said.

I pull his jacket as he deepens the kiss.

"I think I'm ready." I say.

He smiles. "Really?" He asked. I nodded.

"I'm glad."

"Was it torture? Holding out for me? I asked. He nodded. "Yeah a little bit but like I said, I'd wait forever if that's what it took."

I smiled at him and blush.

Although I want to have sex with Ellis, some part of me was still scared.

What if it hurts?

What if I'm not good at it?

Ellis must have saw the worry on my face because he sighed. "Karlie, it'll be fine. I promise."

"If I'm not good at it?"

He chuckled softly and pulled me over to him. "Why do you have low confidence about yourself?" He asked. I shrugged.

"Don't. You're better than that. And we'll take it a step at a time." He whispered.

I nodded. "Okay. I'm going to ask Claudia if I can go now."

"You don't have to rush it, Karlie."

"I just don't want to disappoint you."

He smiled. "You won't."


"Your call." Ellis said patting his hand on the bar.

He walked away from me and I looked to Jerry. He looked at me and smiled. "Be safe." He pulled a condom out of his pocket and placed it on the bar.

"I'm pretty sure he-"

Jerry shook his head. "Take it, girl."

I sigh and look around me before grabbing the packet. I store it in my bra and sigh softly as I make my way to the back.

Claudia is smoking a cigarette while putting pins in Madison's hair.

She looks at me and smiles. "You did good out there, baby girl." She blew out smoke.

"Thanks. Can I-"

"Yeah. Go on." She said.

"Thanks." I was about to take off the lingerie, but I decided to keep it on.

I just put my regular everyday clothes on on top of it.

I kept my boots on.

I found Ellis and we both walked outside.

Hmm…Tyler's car was gone and so was Tyler and Melissa.

Guess they hit it off.

I was about to get into the car but Ellis turned me around so I was against the car and he began to kiss me.

I wrapped my arms around him and I let him slip his tongue into my mouth and explore and taste me.

"You sure you're ready?" He asked against my lips. I nod. "I am." I whispered.

He smiles and nods. "Okay."

He opens my door for me and I got in and he shut the door.

I shut my eyes. You'll be fine. You'll be fine, Karlie.

Ellis reverses out of the parking lot and we're on the road to my house.

I get more and more nervous as we get closer. But I keep my eyes close and relax myself.

He soon parks into my driveway and gets out of the car. I follow him and he grabs my hand softly and looks into my eyes. He smiles and I smile back.

I hand him my key and he unlocks the door and leads me inside.

I shut the door while my hand is still in his and he leads me through the dark room and up the stairs. I can hardly see but I know what and where everything is.

He pushes open my bedroom door and pulls me in gently.

He closes the door and lets go of my hand.

"I'll lead." He said.

I nodded and put my purse down on the floor and took my boots off and I looked back up at him. He slowly walked up to me and leaned down and began kissing my neck and nipping at it while pulling my jacket off of my shoulders. Wow. That sent odd tingles through my body. I shut my eyes and Ellis grabbed both of my arms and wrapped them around his neck and his lips went to mine while his hands were on my lower back.

I follow his lips and keep my eyes closed.

"You okay?" He asked against my lips.


He takes my arms from around him and he unbuttons my white shirt to reveal my red lacy bustier. Ellis's eyes flick to mine.

"You did that on purpose."

"I know." I smile.

Ellis leans down and his lips touch the top of my breast. I shut my eyes as his lips slowly kiss the valley between my breast and the top straight to my neck and it makes me moan as he wraps his arms around me.

"Relax." He whispered.

"Okay." I whispered.

He took my hand in his and brought me over to the bed.

He had me sit down on the bed and he got on his knees in front of me and looked me in my eyes. He places his hands on my thighs and spread them apart a little.

He grabbed the bottom hem of my bustier and pulled it over my head. My hair fell back down around me and his lips went back to mine and I pulled his hair with my fingers and I felt like I was leading this time.

While kissing me, He unbuttoned my jeans and unzipped them. He got up, pulling me up with him and pulled my jeans down and had me step out of them.

I watch him as he slips his fingers beneath the fabric of my panties and pulls them down.

I step out of them also and watch him as he takes the straps of my bra down and turns it around and unhooks it then it falls off of me.

"Lay back on the bed." He said.

I sat back down and scooted back and laid down on the pillows.

I watched him as he slipped his shirt off and threw it on the floor. He unbuckled the belt to his pants and unbuttoned them and pulled them down.

I was glad we were taking this slow unlike the last time. I'm more prepared this time.

Ellis pulled his boxers down and grabbed his pants and grabbed a packet out of his pocket.

He ripped it open and slipped the condom on himself and got onto the bed and in between my legs.

"You okay?"

I nod and smile. "Yeah." I whispered.

I place my hands on his face and he leans down and kisses me while he buries himself inside of me. I gasped and whimpered. His thickness stretched me and he groaned softly.

"Am I hurting you?" He breathed.

I nodded. "But don't stop." He was soon buried all the way inside of me and he kissed me again. Oh

It feels….so good.

"Don't be scared to tell me to stop, Karlie." He said.

"I'm not." I moaned. "I like it." I whispered.

He eased out and pushed back in and another moan came out of my mouth.

I grab onto his shoulders and shut my eyes as he continues the satisfying movement.

His lips toy with mine playfully.

This felt amazing. Being with him in this way with no pain. No crying. No blood. Just lust and intimacy.

The things I've never felt before.

As he thrust faster, an odd but anticipating feeling builds up deep inside me.

I gasp as he captures my lips and groans deeply in my mouth.

That feeling was getting closer and I started crying out because I couldn't hold it in.

He began panting hard and turned on his back so I was on top and it immediately reminded me of my step dad and I stopped.

"It's okay, Karlie. It's only me." He whispered.

I nodded and he grabbed my waist and thrusted up in me and I moaned out and threw my head back and started riding him as he held me by my hips.

"Put your hands on my chest." He whispered.

I did as he said and continued riding him.

I shut my eyes as the feeling got more and more to the surface. I throw my head back. "Oh yes!" I cried out.

Ellis groaned and held my hips tightly as he released.

I gasped as I climaxed around him and laid down on his chest. I bury my head in his soft chest hair and I sigh deeply. Wow.

I smile to myself. I did it.

"How do you feel?" He asked.

I look up at him. "I feel fucking great."


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