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The Invitation

Novel By: Desiree Addams

Alexi receives a mysterious invitation that lands her in a world that she never imagined.

It's still in progress. Needs to be tweaked. It was in response to a Halloween writing challenge on another writing site. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Feb 1, 2010    Reads: 1,723    Comments: 23    Likes: 6   

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Chapter Six - The Great Hall

Reaching down he loosened the straps from my ankles. Walking around to the side of me he loosened the others as well. Pulling me up by the wrists, he commanded, "Now listen carefully. I have other clothes for you to wear. You will put them on. Understood?"

"Yes, Master."

"Stay here." He turned around, walking across the room to a small armoire. Opening it up, he pulled out black satin bustier mini dress with a matching leather collar already attached. Walking back across the room, he handed it to me. "Get up and put it on."

Still weak-kneed, I did as I was told. Putting the dress on, he reached around and snapped the collar into place. I adjusted my stockings and bent down to reach for my panties.

"No, dear, you can not wear those. But you can put the garter back on," he said, handing it to me. Obediently I put it on.

"The party is about to begin My Pet." Pointing me in the direction of a small vanity he said, "Go straighten yourself up a bit. I want you to look fresh for your presentation."

I walked over and seated myself at the vanity. Releasing my hair from the up-do I had come with, I let my long, raven hair spill down over my shoulders. Carefully, I brushed it, bringing out the sheen. With the make-up that was on the vanity, I freshened up a bit.

"Get up and come over here to me."

Getting up from the chair I responded, "Yes, Master," as I walked back over and stood in front of him.

Clasping a leash to the collar he said, "When I take you out and introduce you, you will do exactly as I command. Understood?"

"Yes, Master. I understand."

Pulling on the leash, "Alright, Let's go. Just remember that any disobedience will be met with swift discipline."

Leading me back down the hall and up the stairs, we made our way to the Grand Ballroom. It was wonderfully decorated. Fog machines bellowed thick smoke that rolled gently over the floor. The music wafting through the air was haunting and quite enchanting.

Pulling me to the center of the room, I gazed out at a sea of people. I began to shake.

A bell sounded and the crowd fell silent.

"Glad you could all make it here this evening. This party promises to be one of the best ever," He announced as he scanned the audience. "Now it's my pleasure to introduce you to my new Pet. Alexi." Tugging sharply he commanded, "Kneel."

I dropped to my knees as ordered and the crowd went wild. Their enthusiastic smiles all flashed glistening white canines. It was then that I realized they weren't people at all, but they were all vampires…

Word of warning - Be careful what you sign.

(This is all that I have of this story as of yet. Working on expanding it)


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