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Shades, Secrets, and Sin (Fifty Shades of Grey Fan Fiction)

Novel By: Dante Mendoza
Erotica



I've read E. L. James's Fifty Shades of Grey series and I wasn't impressed by it. Since this was originally a Twilight fan fiction and the author borrows elements from other erotic works, I thought I would a remake the series and reinterpret it as a fan fiction piece. Since Hollywood is huge on remakes, I thought I would do the same. Here goes.

When virginial intern Anastasia Steele goes to interview young entrepreneur Christian Grey, she becomes intrigued by the intimidating, enigmatic man. As she becomes more involved with him, she also attracts the attention of his handsome older brother Elliot. Soon a love triangle forms luring the innocent Ana in a world of erotic delights, sexual decadence, and repressed desires. The more invested she becomes in this universe, the more she loses herself. Will she become a victim or the predator? Find out in this reinterpretaion of the popular erotic trilogy. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jul 24, 2012    Reads: 854    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


Ana went through her various dress selections in that Elena provided for her. Selecting a simple cream and ivory pink knit dress, she put it on and slipped on pair of sandals that her boss also supplied for her. Checking herself in the mirror one more time, she let her long dark hair loose and reapplied the make-up she had been wearing the previous night before leaving the guest bedroom. She headed downstairs to the dining area where Christian, Elliot, and Elena were seated waiting for her.

“Ana you look breathtaking!” Elena smiled. Even the Grey siblings agreed as they kept staring at her. The young woman ignored their gawking as took a seat at the table. Rosalind entered from the kitchen to serve a glass of ice tea for her before returning back to the room. Opening her Louis Vuitton briefcase, Elena pulled out a large manila envelope containing several documents and spread the paperwork across the table. Then she addressed everyone. “Now we can start business.”

“Elena, don’t you think we should get Ana’s approval?” Elliot suggested. “I mean it would be good for her to know what she’s in for.”

“I thought we already covered that upstairs,” the older woman pointed out. “She is to become my newest Dominatrix and it will be your boys’ job to train her. Don’t you agree, Ana?”

The young intern did not know how to respond. It both intrigued her and scared her. “I…I…I suppose so.”

“Good,” Elena grinned. “Now we can begin.” She picked up the first document and read it out loud.

CONTRACT

BETWEEN

Mr. Elliot and Mr. Christian Grey, Mrs. Elena Lincoln, and Mrs. Anastasia Steele.

  1. The following terms of the binding contract between the Dominant and the Submissive for purpose of training to be a Dominant at the end of a two month period.
  2. The fundamental purpose of this contract is to allow the Submissive to explore her sensuality and sexuality freely within the limits of her safety, respect, her consent, and her well-being. Under the terms and conditions of this contract, all activities and actions will be consensual, confidential, and safe. The Dominant and Submissive each warrant that all activities and actions will free from any serious sexual infections including HIV and other sexually transmitted diseases, life threatening illnesses, pregnancy, and any bodily harm.
  3. It is the job of the Dominant to take responsibility of the well-being of the Subordinate including guidance, training, and discipline. The Dominant shall provide service being including food, shelter, and clothing in order to ensure their health is well taken care of.
  4. The Submissive will comply with her Dominant’s requests including but not limited to training, guidance, and discipline. The Submissive must make herself available to her Dominant at all times until further notice. The Submissive must keep herself healthy by maintaining a good diet, exercising regularly, and having up to eight hours of regular sleep daily. The Submissive must maintain excellent personal hygiene and grooming skills. The Submissive will not agree to subject herself to situations where it will cause her bodily harm. The Submissive will not enter into another sexual relationship with someone outside the agreement unless granted permission by her Dominant.

The following list of activities will be consensual and agreed to upon between both parties. The Dominant and Submissive may or may not engage in the following:

Masturbation

Vaginal Intercourse

Cunnilingus

Vaginal fisting

Fellatio

Ana Intercourse

Swallowing Semen

Anal Fisting

Vibrators

Dildos

Butt Plugs

Other vaginal/anal toys

Bondage with rope

Bondage with tape

Bondage with leather cuffs

Bondage with other

Bondage with handcuffs/shackles/manacles

Hands bound in front

Ankles bound

Bindings to objects or fixed items

Elbows bound

Binding with spreadbar

Bound with hands behind back

Suspension

Knees bound

Blindfolded

Ball gagged

Spanking

Whipping

Biting

Paddling

Caning

Biting

Nipple Clamps

Genital Clamps

Ice

Hot Wax

Other instruments of pain

The following activities will not be agreed upon between the Dominant and Submissive. No exceptions shall be made.

No acts of fire play.

No acts involving urination or defecation and the products thereof.

No acts involving needles, knives, cutting, piercing, or blood.

No acts involving gynecological medical instruments.

No acts that involve leaving permanent marks on the skin.

No acts involving children or animals.

No acts involving breath control.

No acts involving the use of electric current, fire, or flames to the body.

Failure to comply with any of the above will result in the immediate termination of the agreement.

The Dominant and Submissive can voluntarily terminate this contract at any time before the two month period. During which time all agreements and clauses will become null and void.

  1. We the undersigned have read and understood fully the provisions of this contract. We freely accept the terms and acknowledge this by the signatures below.

_____________________

Elliot Grey (Dominant)

__________________________

Christian Grey (Dominant)

______________________

Elena Lincoln (Dominant)

__________________________

Anastasia Steele (Submissive)

Ana’s head kept buzzing. She could bring herself to consider food list. Genital clamps? Fisting? What the hell were these people into? She could not possibly agree to these terms. Her mouth wanted to scoff at their audacity but she remained mum.

“You’re overwhelmed, aren’t you?” Elena inquired. She could sense her protégé’s apprehension. “Maybe even a little a scared?”

“Of course I’m scared!” The young woman shouted. “You throw this contract in my face with all this freaky, kinky shit and expect me to agree to this? Hell no!”

“I know this bucket list sounds really horrible,” smiled the older woman. “But I assure you its purpose is not to scare you but to intrigue you. We’re in the business of pleasure not pain. If you’re willing to keep an open mind you just might surprise yourself.”

Nervous energy shook the intern’s body. “I…I don’t know if I can do this.”

Elliot approached her. The closeness of his body made her feel things that did not think she was capable of. Wicked, pleasurable things that drew her near to him that told her to submit, she truly did want to explore it. The eldest sibling touched her face which surprised especially since she flinched being near strange men. With Elliot and even Christian, she felt safe.

“Trust us Ana,” his blue eyes comforted her. “We will never hurt you. You are the true Master. You agree on what Christian and I can do with you. Understand?”

“I’m…not sure,” she whispered.

“Ana, you’ll be in control at all times,” reassured Elena. “The point of your training is to make you strong not a weakling. Cast your fears aside and be the woman you were meant to be; strong independent, and sensual.”

“If I agree to this,” responded Ana. “Then I consent to whatever I’m willing to submit to. Is that clear?”

“Of course,” Elliot grinned.

“And I can walk away from this contract and no one gets hurt, right?”

“Exactly,” answered Christian. He displayed a wicked grin. “But I doubt you want to walk away.”

Ana rolled her eyes. The copper haired man could be so cocky. “Fine, I’ll do it! Where do I sign?”

“Right here,” said Elena pointing the paper toward her direction. All four cemented their partnership in ink. Even still Ana remained unconvinced.

“Oh I almost forgot!” The dark haired beauty blurted out. Her body swayed back and forth nervously. “I don’t know how to say this….you see I haven’t had that much experience with men. I’m a…”

“Holy shit! You’re a virgin!” Christian answered her question.

“Well then,” laughed Elena. “I guess you too are going to have to take extra special care of my protégé! She’s delicate.”

Orange is the color of royalty, regalness, and class. It also symbolizes vigilance. I certainly kept a watchful eye during this current situation I have put myself through. In retrospect, I never expected my shade of red to return to pink. In the beginning, I was full of rage coming from the middle of the scale shooting all the way to the highest tenth ladder of my anger. All I saw was fire, fury, and flame. Being called weak was the one thing I never wanted to hear. Yet, I had to face the truth. I was weak. I let the demons of my past make me a victim. It enraged me bringing by blood to the boil reaching highest temperature on the shade of crimson scale.

Now the scarlet has gone away. I am now pink, much calmer, than before. The shade on a scale of three brings in the orange color on my emotional pallet. Since I know the secrets of the Grey brothers, I no longer feel the fury inside me. Instead I have learned to put the past behind me to move on. Elliot and Christian are helping me cope, understand, and hopefully heal. I agree to be their little sexual experiment which is fine because I eventually have to lose my virginity to someone. At least it is someone I trust especially ones as handsome and dashing at the Grey brothers. I cannot wait. Is it wrong for me to think such thoughts? Even Jane Eyre had inner passions that she freely expressed with Edward Rochester. I should not feel guilty at all.

Speaking of guilt, I returned home only to find Jose ready to call missing persons. After calming him down, I lied to him and told that I drank too much to which the Grey brothers allowed me to spend the night in their guest room. Then the interrogation turned to sex. I assured him that I still remain a virgin. For now. Somehow he still did not believe me. If I am to be Elena’s protégé I certainly have to learn better ways of being discreet. Perhaps that the lesson I have learned by being on my third shade in the orange color spectrum of emotion.





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